'Tu Meri Zindagi Hai''- SS- Part 9 pg 35(13/08)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I am slowly getting the story now but there is still too much suspense! 😆
Loved the update.👏 I feel so sorry for jeevika! Manvi left her 😭 Has Jeevika named her daughter Manvi? Yaar please update soon aur haan itna suspense acha nahi hota! 😉
Loved the Virika scenes 😳 Thanks for the PM 😃

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tulip.flora

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Posted: 13 years ago

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that was just awsome update!!!!!😊

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khusam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Amazng updt pm me wen u updt

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NinaArief

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Posted: 13 years ago

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well i told you i would find your work so here i am (pehli proper fursat mein), and neha you write so well, im dying to know what happened to manvi and i hope you keep it jeeman- oriented along with being virika oreinted - im assuming you are a virika fan , though im more of a jeeman/virman fan.. would love to read this ...

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NEHA KASHYAP

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: NinaArief
well i told you i would find your work so here i am (pehli proper fursat mein), and neha you write so well, im dying to know what happened to manvi and i hope you keep it jeeman- oriented along with being virika oreinted - im assuming you are a virika fan , though im more of a jeeman/virman fan.. would love to read this ...

ohh so u found it... thanku ji thanku...
waise without thinking i can say i m JEEMAN fan...hardcore jeeman fan😊
i love virika and virman too... but JeeMan are...❤️😍

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NEHA KASHYAP

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

PART - 3

"Bas kariye na..poore mahine ka khilayenge kya? " I spoke, holding my stomach with both hands..

He raised his one eyebrow and I pouted.

"Chup kar ke khaati ho ya keh dun maa ko k mannu ke liye babyfood bahar se mangwa lein?" he asked.

I gave him a irritated look, "yeh acha tareeka hai jabardasti karne ka.. acha par main yeh palak soup nahin piyungi.. Na piun na please?" I asked politely.

He gave me a smile, "Acha thik hai..par yeh salad finish karo...

"Tu hi mera saara jahaan hai" this made me look into his pocket..It was his ringtone, his fav song.

He took out his cell frm his pocket," Main abhi aaya" And with that he left the room.

After 15 minutes he came back to the room, all tensed.

"Kya hua viren ji?'' I asked stepping out of the bed.

"Uh..huh? kuch bhi toh nahin?" he lied

"Nahin batana toh seedha bol dijie na.. jhoot kyun bol rahe hain.. atleast meri aankhon ko toh jhoota mat thehraya kijiye jo aapki aankhon mein jhaank ke aapke andar ka saara haal bata deti hain" I said it dramatically as I knew it will definitely work out and it did.

He smiled looking at me "Pehle promise karo k tum panick nahin karogi, meri baat araam se dhyaan se sunogi aur koi sawaal nahin karogi" he said all this in one go and this scared me completely.

"Kya hua..kuch serious hua hai kya.. batayiye na viren ji" I asked.

"dekha u are already panicking..pehle promose karo, phir main bataunga..promise me k tum koi sawaal nahin karogi aur na hi koi tension logi" he forward his hand towards me..

I took a deep breath. I had to do this otherwise he will never tell me "OK promise" I said keeping my hand on his hand..

He tightened his grip on my hand "humein kal Hrishikesh jaana hoga" he muttered but it was enough audible to me...

My heart skipped a beat with the name of Hrishikesh.

"Hrishi-kesh??" words got stuck in my throat but I continued as he shooked his head positively " Par achanak? Sab thik hai na?? beeji thik hain? badi beeji'.aur bua ji ..woh humein jaane dengi?''

"Jeevika, abhi maine kya kaha tha?? Tum koi sawaal nahin poochogi, hum subah jaa rahe hain na, rahi badi maa ki baat who main khud handle kar lunga.. aaj tak sab unki marzi se chalta aaya hai..par har baar aisa nahin ho sakta, tum bas tension mat lo, bas, ab so jao subah jaldi uthna hai" he passed a fainted smile.

"Hmmm" I put mannu into her cot and moved to bed still lost into some bitter memories.. samajh nahin aa raha tha kya ho raha hai..

Main Jeevika Vadhera jo ek pyari si duniya se nikal ke dusri pyar ki duniya mein aayi thi..sochti thi jiska Pati jiska sasuraal itna acha ho use aur kya chahiye par main galat thi'Sahi kaha hai kisi ne kabhi kisi ko mukammal jahaan nahin milta.. Socha nahin tha ek ghar milega toh doosra bilkul hi choot jaayega.. Pati ke pyaar ke badle bhagwan mujhse meri behan ko door kar dega..aur phir ek din aisa bhi aaya jab mujhe mere ghar, mere Hrishikesh, ganga ghaat jahan mummy-papa ko main hamesha mehsoos karti thi, mere poore pariwar se mujhe door kar diya jayega'. Chaah kar bhi main wahan nahin jaa paungi.. kya karti option hi aisa tha k ya yeh ghar ya rishikesh'purane aur naye bandhano mein jakad ke rakh diya gaya mujhe' Pichle 1 saal mein maine kaise khud ko sambhala hai yeh main jaanti hun ya Viren ji jinhone ek pal bhi mujhe yeh ehsaas nahin hone diya ki iss ladayi men main akeli hun.. Iss poor ek saal mein jahan mujhe ek nayi jaan ke iss duniya mein aane ki khushi thi aur dusri taraf itne rishton se door hone ka gham' Ek mannu ke jaane k gham mein main ek nayi mannu ke iss duniya mein aana enjoy hi nahin kar paayi' Pata nahin kya aur kahan bhool ho gayi thi ki bhagwan ji ne mujhe khushiyan deke bhi khush hone ka mauka nahin diya..Pata nahin abhi aur kitne imtihaan baaki hai' Bohat baar'aur har baar socha hai ab main haar gayi hun par Viren ji ne hamesha mujhe sambhaal liya aur main jaanti hun kal bhi who sambhaal lenge.. Pata nahin ab aur kaunsi pareeksha hai bhagwan ji ki k humein Hrishikesh jana hai'woh Hrishikesh jahan ki meethi yaadon ko pichle ek saal ki kadwi yaadon ne gher rakha hai''Par itna vishwas hai ab ki itna bura dekh chuki hun k isse bura kuch nahin lag sakta mujhe.. Meri zindagi ab Mere pati Mr Viren Vadhera aur Meri Beti Manya Vadhera se shuru ho ke unhi pe khatam hoti hai'

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Love,
Neha

Edited by Neha.K. - 13 years ago