Arhi: Dark night dawning Part - 25 updated pg 149 - Page 66

shyams mentalLy ill , and he dEserves to rot in helL
oh wow! finAlLy arnav cumes to rescue!
awesoMe dEar! cant wait to read more !!

interesting keep it up and never stop writing loved ur stories thx

great update ! thanks for the pm ! 😊

nice update

Thank god!!!!!!!! Arnav found Khushi.
SHYAM... You are dead man.

update soon

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awesome update loved it  thank god arnav reached in time snake is so jealous of arnav he is mentally disturbed loved the update thanks for the pm

This part was amazing...👏

WOW!

Glad that Arnav has already there to safe Khushi & I think he also had heard the whole convo between Khushi & Shyam & atleast  he knows the true color of that creep & how Khushi has praised him.

amazin part

This is sooo goood!!!! You write so friggin perfect!!!! And the story is exciting and just what I really want to see. PERFECT! I've read the himalayan sometime before and it was just as brilliant. It is realistc, trur to character, written in a beautiful and mature way, and oh I could go on. I wish you updated every hour, so I could just get lost in this perfect story!