LOVESTORY SUPERNATURAL (part 23 on 136) - Page 2

Hi Rashmi

Its a good start sweetie...but i am just not into reading supernatural stuff dear...it scares me...but i am happy you started another FF on RTMC...
I can't read or else i will keep thinking about vampires and warewolfs all day...i am sure this FF will be as good as your Evergreen Love...

mujha darr lagte hai...😭
sorry about my bad Hindi... but i have improved a lot now...😛
lov you dear... and happy valentines day...🤗

Awesome dear
Loved it

congratulations for one more RT-MC FF...😊...n thanx for sharing it...🤗Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prahelika

what a beautiful valentine gift to us dear!!🤗

it can be clearly seen that u worked very hard on this ff...

loved the character sketch😳...but i think u forgot to mention which supernatural family hazel belongs to...🤓...and another thing i didnt understand is if shilpa is shaleen's sis then why she's a vamp😕...

and my vampu abhay is here too😃...

so u changed some supernatural myths in this story...hmm interesting😊

part 1 is simply out of the world😃...the vivid description of the magical land...the unicorn,the dolphin...everything is just amazing!!!!!👏

then the description of the race...shaleen and swastika's first meet😍...

i m giving u a round of applause for the pics u added 👏👏👏

and i liked one thing...u put RT's pic with long hair😍...wolfies r believed to have long hair

plz update asap...can't wait to read more😳

love you...❤️

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

di sorry for shilpa 's partt...

she is a werewolf not vamp...sry it was a mistake.( i hav edited)

well i have mentioned...hazel is a wizard.

di thanx a lot for commenting on ma efforts, i really feel worthy by this.

do let me know if i have other mistakes too.

Originally posted by: prahelika

aww...it's ok sweety🤗...galti se wrong mistake sabko hoti hai na😆...

see even i missed hazel-being-witch part😕...

and why didn't u put any pic on anant's description dear???r u planning to post it later??

arey haan!!! one question...from where did u get that wolf pic..is it the one from twilight???

u know... i felt shaleen's entry was more like jacob's entry😍

same furious blazing brown wolf☺️

@ sweetsanyo-umm...anant is a bad guy na...so let's find someone with crooked looks😉... Edited by prahelika - 12 years ago

awesomeee
i love this type of stories but name thode difficult hai hope jaldi yaad ho mujhe :)

Thank you sooo... much 4 dis awesum gift on valentines day !!!!

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

awesomeee
i love this type of stories but name thode difficult hai hope jaldi yaad ho mujhe :)

Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago