LOVESTORY SUPERNATURAL (part 23 on 136)

Posted: 12 years ago



[note-any new reader thinking to give this ff a read, is requested to give me a little time to renovate it to better. old readers, don't panic- u r not missing anything important, u all wil b accordingly informed later.]



||LoveStory  Supernatural||

A vampire-werewolf love

rajat tokas-mugdha chaphekar fan-fic



BY-sweetsanyo/IF  (rashmi gautam)








INDEX-

PLOT, FACTS, CS- PG 1

ud 1 -pg 1

ud 2-pg 4

ud 3- pg 8

ud 4-pg 15

ud 5-pg 19

ud 6-pg 22

ud 7-pg 26

ud 8-pg 30

ud 9-pg 34

ud 10-pg 40

ud 11-pg 45

ud 12-pg 54

PROMO-PAGE 58

ud 13-pg 62

ud 14-pg 70

ud 15-pg 80

ud 16-pg 86
ud 17-pg 92
ud 18-pg 98
ud 19-pg 104
ud 2o-pg 112
ud 21- pg 120
ud 22-pg 131
ud 23-pg 136
Edited by sweetsanyo - 10 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

Here it goes''..


storyline-(video)-

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c6L3ZzGghIc&list=UUHvy_J-Y_-oZBmnvsEcTfMA&index=1&feature=plpp_video


CHARACTER SKETCH

SHALEEN SHATRIYA SHAHISTRABHANU

-he is a warewolf.

- prankster, strong  , sport star,dude, trendy, handsome hunk,  rebellious against injustice for anyone

-royal descendant of werewolves.

-his family expect a lot from him'''..specially carrying out their autocracy.

-he hates VAMPIRES , since his family has made him think so'''''very soon his views about vampire changes.

-he is a naturally born werewolf.

-he can produce heat in any substance or being of any intensity'''''he has power of fire.




SWASTIKA  NAZEER  DELLORE

-She is a vampire.

-super prankster, arrogant, bubbly, blazing beauty always,  feels free with everyone,  never hesitate to help anyone.

-royal descendant of vampires.

-she is a prestige holder''''.and realize her responsibility.

-she wants to prove that vampires are not that bad, its simply their fate...off course she is rude to those who are rude to vampires.

-she was born as human and was adopted by her parents from a orphanage, as they desired to have a child''''.(vampires can't give birth to offspring)''she was taken care by her vampire parents'..(they can bear the scent of her, as they r vampires since long.)''''she was transformed in a vampire when she was 16 as human , with her own will. she loves her parents.

-she can absorb heat from any substance of any intensity, and hence ultimately cooling it to ice.'''''''she has d power of ice.




SURYA SHATRIYA SHAHISBHANU


-FATHER  of shaleen

-very particular about his prestige and werewolf community'''.have a peculiar hatred towards vampires.




NANDINI SHATRIYA SHAHISBHANU

-mother of Shaleen.

-Very practical, her first priority is her family and son.




  PRITHVIRAJ NAZEER DELLORE

-father of Swastika.

-sticks to the rules , disciplined , always there for vampire community.




SANYOGITA NAZEER DELLORE

-loving but strict mother

-can't even think of going against her husband''''loves her daughter a lot.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

FACTS USED-

(since it is ma story, so ma new facts works here)

1) the physical body of a supernatural being should be at least of 18 yrs for being a full flourished supernatural being .



2) werewolves are hot- boiling  blooded,

 -have red eyes,

-can transform into wolves when over-aggressive or in need.

-their dosage is simple food and blood too.

-mature werewolves can manage and  fluctuate the scent of their blood.

-THEY have super sensing ears,

-living forever.

 

3)vampires have no blood(blood frozen),

- blue eyes

-blood is necessary for their existence.

-can't control if blood's scent is overpowering.

-they have super sensation for scents and smells.

-dead forever.




4)wizards have shining blood,

-green eyes

-masters of spells.

-they have mutual bonds with every supernatural community.

-they form PARLIAMENT OF SUPERNATURALS.




5)hybrids  have coagulated blood.(HYBRIDS-from vampire and werewolf),

-have orange-brownish eyes.

-have characters of both vampires and werewolves.

 

6)hybrids are newly added  community in supernatural society. Once they were not even designated or dignified since their formation involved mating of a vamp and wolf'''''



7)royals of vampires and werewolves are against HYBRIDS, though not together. They feel  MATING between vampire and werewolves is against their separate and far apart dignity. They both want to preserve pure form of their self community'



8)it's a very known fact that vampires are not comfortable with werewolves  and vice-versa.



9) Werewolves have heart but dat doesn't beat. Vampire's heart is a stone. Hybrid's have stoned heart as vamps. Wizards's heart beat throughout their existence.



10) a werewolf's heart beat only when HIS/HER  MATE is close to them.



11) vampires can eat everything that normal people can eat, and real vampires don't live on just blood



12) vampires do not need sleep.



13)  vampires don't need blood, they only need some part of blood, or just energy.



14)Sunlight won't kill a real vampire.


However due to a heightened sensitivity to it, It does cause an uncomfortable burn like feel, almost like what a normal person feels while they have sunburn. Getting blood on a regular basis helps counter this very effectively and for the average vampires it blocks the suns effects for about 2-3 days. Their body shines only in burning sun during noon, not by the pleasant sun shine present in morning or evening.



15) 2. Silver will not kill  a vampire, although it will cause pain and discomfort.



16) 12. Werewolves do not only turn on a full moon, neither do they have to. A werewolf can change his form and shape shift at will whenever he wants to, at day or night. Although newly turned werewolves are sometimes forced to change by certain aspects of the lunar cycles or certain sounds such as the howling of another werewolf.




17)WOLF form of werewolves is stronger n more powerful than their human form...in order to get extra power, their body absorbs matter(solid , liquid , gas) and convert into energy...

and when they regain their human body again they detach the matter absorbed previously back as it is(thats why they are not bare when they return back to human form )

Extras I will add later as I use.


facts (2)[mating n dosage]-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/53478466�

Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

for one more FF dear...

Edited by sanyogitaprc - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

TAKSHILA GURUKUL

SCHOOL FOR SUPERNATURALS.




School is divided into FOUR HOUSES.

1)RUDHEERAKSHI-

(rudheer + akshi===red blood + eyes)

Comprises of werewolves.



2) NEELNAYAN-

(neel+nayan===blue+eyes)

Vampires form this house.



3)DRAGHAREEN-

(DRAG+HAREEN===EYES+GREEN)

Hybrids forms dis house.



4)BHORCHUCKSHU-

(BHOR+ CHUCKSHU===Dawn sky orange+ eyes)

Dis house consist of witches and wizards.

 

OTHER TERMINOLOGY USED-

SHAHISHONIT-(SHAHI + SHONIT) ===ROYAL BLOOD.

RAKTAAM-(RAKT+ AAM)- COMMON BLOOD.




STAFF OF TAKSHILA GURUKUL-

PRINICPAL- --VIKRAMADITYA SHINGALSHAH.

(he is a vampire,  he can transform himself to any other individual being. Ie. Into a bird , animal , a Hawkeye, a human, a female human'''etc)




VICE PRINICIPAL----RAGINI RATHOD

(she is a werewolf, and can turn anyone to statue of stone)




COACH---KARAMVEER CHETTERIYA

(can attract different metals and solids to himself, he is a hybrid)




SUPERNATURAL SOCIAL SCIENCE-HAZEL RAMANI RAZEEL


(if she hold  a solid substance in her palm, she can convert her hand into that substance''''.ie. if she is holding iron , her hand may turn to iron, if diamond then she can convert her hand into diamond''''''if plastic then into plastic hand''''''but she can still move her hand and fingers'''''.she is a wizard)




BLACK MAGIC PROFESSOR- ABHAY RAICHAND-

(he is a vamp, and is the fastest runner)



Professor of SCIENCE OF SPELLS-PIYALI KANDPAL


(she is a witch and can form a strong protective transparent shield.)



BOTANY PROFESSOR (for supernatural plants)- 

SHILPA SHATRIYA SHAHISTRABHANU 


(she is sis of shaleen, a werewolf and can duplicate herself into more individuals at a time)

ZOOLOGY PROFESSOR (for supernatural beings)-

KARAN SINGH GROVER

.(he is a hybrid and can predict only unexpected  future)''''''.

 

Friends and foe------

VIKRANT SINGH PRATAP-

 belongs to the royals of wizards.and is a thoughts reader.(shaleen's friend)



SIA NAMAN VEDAR- 

belong to commoners in hybrids and can make things disappear just by mere staring.(swastika's friend)




Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

STORY.-


update 1-

 

AWAY from the human's exploration and senses, there exist a landscape in between the Thar desert of India ''''..called ''ALAUKIKASTHAN''(place for supernatural).its a oasis of around 50 km stretched radius in all possible direction''''.

This landmark is highly blessed by supernatural happenings and existence. Every kind of supernatural being resides here, occupying merely one forth of complete oasis expand. Rest is covered by the thick green lush of forest. Forest in here has lives in their full flourished form.  Every strata above this piece of lithosphere is completely stuffed by life living organism. This place on earth witnesses the ultimate form of symbiotic association among all life forms. All living beings here together live in harmony and contribute to form the most spectacular supernatural biosphere. The whole forest sparkles as the sunrays weave inside the space of forest due to the golden lichen cover on trees trunk. 

Green color in its every form 'herb, shrub, creeper, trees, climber and many more contributes to the green lush. The spring season sways along the air currents with sandal wood scent stuffed in it above the most lavish mossy green carpet of forest. Along with the green stretch the Prussian blue colored river was also striding with it crystal clear water which appeared to be thoroughly shining as jewellery due to the brilliance caused by its million pearly droplets. Its golden gravel river bed was a perfect stage for netted sunbeam dance.


A Albatross is witnessing this pristine living wonder from the spring azure sky stretch, with his wide white wingspan expanded to fullest. This peace and silence lover adores the place with his wide yellow eyes. But very soon our adorable Albatross has a hindrance in its peace pace. The Albatross try to explore the tribulation down on earth.

He discovers and found two creatures running beside each other or simply racing. One of them was the most elegant pure white bodied UNICORN.

 Yes, a unicorn which symbolizes purity and grace , strength and might. A pointed spiraling horn on his forehead was shining white. The unicorn was running to his fullest. His competitor was a WOLF.

 He was a wolf of enlarged size and more toned body than usual. Wolf that symbolized unity and toughness. The guard hairs of his royal dark brown fluffy fur were swaying frequently due to wolf's own activity and speed. His strong claws were giving strong thuds to the ground persistently in order to run. His ears were upright in alertness and eyes were shining red. His running involved a very elegant manner of tackling the hindrance of trees in his path of race. He was surely proving himself a swift racer. After all the wolf was competing a natural runner, THE UNICORN. They both were running from south to north.

Well this race was not the only one. Forest was also a spectator of another amazing race in its river. One of the participants of this aquatic race was a Carolina blue colored DOLPHIN. 

Dolphin was a swift swimmer, which occasionally leaped over water for a sudden pace increase. Her median notch, flukes and flippers actively participated in swimming as her upright dorsal fin was cutting water for easy flow of her streamed lined body. Her jet black eyes were persistently gazing her competitor. Her competitor was a creature with human physique, but with a might of multiplied hundred. The figure had a tremendous speed and very sophisticated tackling in a front crawl swimming, after all the figure was competing a natural swimmer, THE DOLPHIN. Her movement looked flawless maneuvering. The figure was moving its limbs in a perfect co-ordination and technique with a pace to fullest. This race was proceeding towards the pleasant morning orange sun, from west to east.

Fortunately or unfortunately, the racetracks of both the races intersected at a point. This special landmark was situated in between the breadth of the river. It had big rocks arranged consequently in series in order to make the path across the river.

It was sure that terrestrial racers were going to jump over these rocks and continue there race. Similarly the aquatic racers were sure to leap over the rock and continue their race further. But what, if the racers intersected each other at same time. Than surely this land piece is going to be a spectator of most awaited MEETING of this supernatural world.

Wind stops, water too reduce its pace. Trees suddenly become stiff, just to avoid flipping of its own leaves, every bird now rest on some branch of tree, the albatross too. Sun's glare brightens up simply to provide more clear view. Every motion and noise around the ambience ceases.

Now, both the former racers of both races are approaching to the rock series. The aquatic swimmer is not aware of the terrestrial runner and so do runner. They both are heading towards the most fascinating experience of their lives.

And,

And,

And,

They finally reach'''''..

The beautiful famine blazing blue eyes of the swimmer became wide open seeing an approaching wolf on the rock. And red hunk eyes of the wolf too stretched in astonishment watching an approaching swimmer of human physique. Both the supernatural creatures were pacing forward with their speed at zenith already, it was impossible for them to stop before the dashing of the two. Their clash was an inevitable event''''this was for sure ''CLASH OF TITANS''

The famine figured swimmer tried hard to stop, but if she will, she is sure to hit the rock directly due too her inertia of speed. Same is with the wolf runner. If he tries to stop, he is sure to hit the rock and fall off badly. So finally helpless they continued with their strategy of leaping and jumping over the rocks , respectively. Until they could decide what else to do''''they

DASHED

CLASHED'''..

CHRUSHED''

HITTED''..

BANGED'''

 

As soon as the human figured female grasped the wolf, to which her body literally crushed against, the wolf roared loud and started transforming, transforming to the same physique as the swimmer. Though the aquatic swimmer had gripped him hard, during the runner's transformation her grip got lost. Her grasp over the wolf vanished and she lost her balance, and detached with the wolf cum human figure. The runner on other side transformed to a human figure after a loud wolf roar. So the runner who was proceeding towards north and the swimmer proceeding towards east, finally distracted each others path and found a drastic landing in north eastern direction over the river separately'''.

The unicorn managed to have a higher jump and dolphin to have a comparable lower leap. So ultimately dolphin crossed the unicorn from just beneath him, making both to have a sheer escape from the accident.

But the former racers of terrestrial and aquatic race dived in water of river, not actually dived but yes, they fell.

The water splashed out high, making even the fast running unicorn wet. After this frequent water eddies were generated from the points of splash. The two human figures beneath the water surface pushed back the river bed and arrived to the surface.

The transformed human figure took deep breaths, moved towards the bank of river and stopped when his feet had a floor. HE first recovered from the shook of the accident by jolting his head a few times in sideways fashion.Rubbed his wet black hairs to dry them and cleared the water on his face too. He nuzzled his nose hard while simultaneously turning back to discover his culprit.

But as he whirled to discover the culprit, he felt that he has committed the most beautiful mistake of his whole life, and he is the culprit of it. He could not even blink his eyes as he didn't want to miss the single glance of the scene he is seeing.

He saw front of him, the most beautiful creature ever existed on world rising above the water. She was rising slowly revealing her blazing face, perfecto neck, nicely curved shoulders, curled shaped shoulder bone.

 The famine physique elegantly swam to the bank and stood up straight with the water level still up to upper abdomen. She pressed her head to regain her balance and consciousness after accident. She was having a flawless fair skin, glowing in sun's morning glare (not exactly shining or twinkling, I will mention this later). Her only visible half was magnificently magnetic for him. She arranged her tangled hair curl by jolting them hard towards her back, this enabled water droplets to sprinkle over the face of the transformer, finally making him blink his eyes. She turned to towards her culprit.

She saw the most sizzling handsome hunk before her. His toned abs and muscles with perfect crests and troughs formed the strongest body she has ever witnessed. His body was killer attractive to her.

The unicorn and dolphin too came back till than to check out their respective competitor. Well their presence was enough for both human figures too come back to their senses. Now they both did a over make up on their faces, presented their face with a damn burning anger, and filled their eyes with red rage. They moved towards each other and immediately burst out, together'''''..

''aakhein hai yaah button'' shouted the female.

''dekh kar nahi chal sakti kya?'' burst out the man.

They said it together, at once, at very same point of time. They both were shocked and even confused what did they listened from each other, as their voice were overpowering each other. Very soon they both recollected the phrases they heard'''''but immediately the man heard a drumbeat, persistent and monotonous'''''.''dhak dhak dhak dhk dhak dhak dhak'' ''''.he heard this voice for the first time in life and was finding it really irritating and disturbing. Since the female had no such kind of distraction she was able to answer him back''''

''main chal nahi rahi thi swim kar rahi thi!'' informed the girl with her attitude.

The man immediately ignored the drumbeat, looked her face with irritation and replied-'' mere kahane ka vahi matlab tha''''''kya nucha (screech) hai''''.''he said in a bit low voice while examining his injury on chest.( guys the girls nails literally screech him hard while grasping him during the clash)''''..he continued, while lifting his eyes again ''ab  sorry tho bol do!'' he demanded.

''main kyun bolo?'' she said this sarcastically'''''.

The man saw her on the peak of attitude and pressed his lips between his teeth and stared her''''''..with killer rage. Soon he rolled his eyes and said-''can't believe it man!''

She heard this and opened her mouth in astonishment''''soon gulped it again and said '''I heard it!...its not my mistake! Get it'''''tumhari galti hai!'' she said in straight and frank.

''oh! Yah''''..meri galti hai!!''he said this, completely pretending as if he really agree.

The girl knew it was not going to be that easy'''''..but she was shocked as he agreed'''''..but very soon her confusion was cleared when she heard him further.

''aur nahi mangne waala main maafi'''''''.bolo kya ukhad logi'' he told he a challenging spirit.

At the spot she replied-''arre jao jao''''''''mera dil bahut bada hai , isliye main khud tumhe maaf karti hoon.

''tum kya mujhe maaf karogi, agar maine mafi mangi hi nahi!...''

''dekho main tumhare muh nahi lagna chati''''''''..isliye baqshti hoon tumhe''''.''said it by freeing her fingers from the fist.

''oa'.oh! bada upkar kar rahi hoon tum mujh par'''''..'' he sarcastically said this as if he is really gratified by her decision''''''and soon continued-''phir bhi kya bigad leti tum mera'' back to his attitude and looks'''''.''tum kya baqsho gi mujhe?''''''''''main tum par mahar bani karta hoon!'' he said this by placing his hands on his chest , next to the injury''..

The girl contracted her forehead in a surprise which just heard, soon ignored it and turned back to move from there, she rolled eyes swayed her hairs in wind by giving them a jolt through her hand'''..and marched to the banked of the river in attitude'''''''BADTAMEEZ!'' she commented while leaving.

The man heard this, he too reversed and taunted-''GHAMANDI!'' while folding his arms against his chest.

The girl reverted again to his taunt, in a low but audible voice-''NAKCHADA!''

The man too , was all ready with his next-''GHUSAEL!''(always angry). Listening this she twisted her neck again too view him''''here the man in wait of another taunt , didn't receive any, so he too swirled to look back, and saw her stare him as if she will eat him raw'''''.he too stared her piercingly '''they both turned and continued with their different directions. The man then  proceeded towards his competitor UNICORN, caressed his head and said '''chalo PAWAN'''. Aaj ki race ka tho satyanash ho hi gaya hai!''

Here in different direction, the girl was walking towards east along the river, with her head still cursing the transformer, accompanied by her competitor dolphin leaping out of water , now and then, slpashing water on the girl , one or two times. The girl finally stopped her by saying-''stop it DOLCI'''''.I m irritated.''


(NOTE- the scratch on shaleen's chest was not to deep, and it immediately healed too, or else our vampy swastika could have lost her control.)

Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
firstly a big hug  🤗 for starting one more RTMC FF...that too a super-natural...& on Valentines Day😳...nothing can be better than this...thank u sooo much dear😊...

& FF is just awesome dear 👏...superb...vampires, wolves, wizards, hybrids, etc...all r together here...awesome...totally loved it😊...

superb plot...very interesting story...nice CS...mind-blowing start...😳...& that vm...i am speechless dear...it is fantastic👏...

u have created the whole imaginary world of super-naturals beautifully...i know when it comes to super-natural, it is fantasy...so it tests the creativeness of writer to describe his inventions & make the reader believe in it...& u have done fantastic job dear👏...u have actually taken me in that world 😍...

the CS, plot, concepts, facts described, vm all r simply outstanding...the pics u have included in FF r also fabulous...i can see how much efforts u have put into it 👏...hats off to u dear...i really loved their school...it is so beautiful...

& now coming to the first part...the description of environment was awesome...& their first meeting😳...awww...lovely...both r so strong...so powerful & unique...perfect for each other...

but ice & fire together...so fights r inevitable😉...it is said that love starts from fights...so they r good...loved their convo...each trying to prove other one wrong😆...but still admired each other😳...hmm...

i really loved the names...shaleen & swastika...they r so different...so now eagerly waiting for next part...& their school adventures...so plz plz update soon...

& i am sure it will not be 'lovestory that existed never' but definately the 'lovestory forever' 😳...
Edited by sanyogitaprc - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
what a beautiful valentine gift to us dear!!🤗
it can be clearly seen that u worked very hard on this ff...
loved the character sketch😳...but i think u forgot to mention which supernatural family hazel belongs to...🤓...and another thing i didnt understand is if shilpa is shaleen's sis then why she's a vamp😕...
and my vampu abhay is here too😃...
so u changed some supernatural myths in this story...hmm interesting😊
part 1 is simply out of the world😃...the vivid description of the magical land...the unicorn,the dolphin...everything is just amazing!!!!!👏
then the description of the race...shaleen and swastika's first meet😍...
i m giving u a round of applause for the pics u added 👏👏👏
and i liked one thing...u put RT's pic with long hair😍...wolfies r believed to have long hair
plz update asap...can't wait to read more😳
love you...❤️



Edited by prahelika - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome concept dear... Loved the intro part plus 1st part... Its amazing... Well the place ''alaukikakshi'' is like HP's magical world huh??? including all the supernaturals live together????????????

Anywaysss loved it... Continue sooonnn
Thanxx for the pm dear...

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