LOVESTORY SUPERNATURAL (part 23 on 136) - Page 105

it ok...  @sanyogita prc    will be waiting

Originally posted by: darshika121

Hey Rashu...!!!😉

i loved ur descriptive style of writing really...it felt so goo to read a new update of my fav MURAT FF

jaldi se new ud do im waiting


love Darshu

After many days, i got to read. It was wonderful. Thanks for the updates. Keep writing

with love,
kanika

so sry for late commenting...but the part was super good     (Y)
that whole part of shaleen's cheating was superb even his justification over it was amazing...     ;-)
but the most jhakkas scene was sia teaching UNCIVILIZED word to swasi...      ^_^
it was fun reading it...go sia, ek ada aur sikha dena,
update soon...
luv u...     :-)

Originally posted by: Cutipie_Kanika

After many days, i got to read. It was wonderful. Thanks for the updates. Keep writing

with love,
kanika

Originally posted by: ridzzi

so sry for late commenting...but the part was super good     (Y)
that whole part of shaleen's cheating was superb even his justification over it was amazing...     ;-)
but the most jhakkas scene was sia teaching UNCIVILIZED word to swasi...      ^_^
it was fun reading it...go sia, ek ada aur sikha dena,
update soon...
luv u...     :-)

Lovely update dear
Loved the game part
It was awesome.
N swan n jhingola part also too good. Swan to chennai express k tarah boli ja rahi hai bas boli ja rahi hai. Her poor friens. Kitni mushkil se le gaye use canteen se bahar.
Love in the air
But don't know when our royal mates will realize ????
Sb tumhare hath me hain . Jaldi se inhe b feel kara do.
Sia teaching her
uncivilized words. N that to incomplete .
"TERI MAA KI..."?????
Even I heard this sentence 1st time when I was in 12th
Even I don't know much how to use uncivilized words. Sia se keh do k hume b sikha de. Aage chalke kaam aayega.
Btw totally fabulous n mindblowing part
You didn't pm me this time.
I know I am so in active . I rarely get time to visit if . N I won't comment on any if. But today I commented on your n khushi di's ff. As both the parts are too good.
Do pm me next time sweety . Yad se.
Will be waiting
N evergreen ka kb dogi?
Bht din huye
Uska b jaldi se ud de do

Originally posted by: priyakinnikar12

Lovely update dear
Loved the game part
It was awesome.
N swan n jhingola part also too good. Swan to chennai express k tarah boli ja rahi hai bas boli ja rahi hai. Her poor friens. Kitni mushkil se le gaye use canteen se bahar.
Love in the air
But don't know when our royal mates will realize ????
Sb tumhare hath me hain . Jaldi se inhe b feel kara do.
Sia teaching her
uncivilized words. N that to incomplete .
"TERI MAA KI..."?????
Even I heard this sentence 1st time when I was in 12th
Even I don't know much how to use uncivilized words. Sia se keh do k hume b sikha de. Aage chalke kaam aayega.
Btw totally fabulous n mindblowing part
You didn't pm me this time.
I know I am so in active . I rarely get time to visit if . N I won't comment on any if. But today I commented on your n khushi di's ff. As both the parts are too good.
Do pm me next time sweety . Yad se.
Will be waiting
N evergreen ka kb dogi?
Bht din huye
Uska b jaldi se ud de do

M a silent reader dear 😉
I rarely comment on ff's
N pls dont be sorry
Will be waiting for evergreen ff
😊