Teri Yaad(A-K fanfic)Last part!!!!pg-9 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
😳 😳 Luved the Characterr of Angad esp da last scene 😳 πŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
i love your story and continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part continue soon πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
Guyz i wanted to ask you since i was really confused.

so 1:should i make thins fanfic longer and cont for a long time.

   2:Should i end this fanfic soon and write a new one.

   3:should i end this fanfic and cont the other two(sathiya and kaisa yeh pyaar hain.)

i am really confused πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
Edited by khushi19 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
great parttt i love it i think u sould continue and make it longer
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Posted: 18 years ago
umm the 3rd one. lol your doing a superb job
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Posted: 18 years ago
i think you sould end this fanfic soon
and continue SAATHIYA AND KAISA YEH PYARR HAIN

PLEASE DO THIS 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok guyz i will soon be ending this fanfic and cont the other 2 fanfic (saathiya and kaisa yeh pyaar hain)i will be posting the last part in 30 mins πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
Last part

Recape-kripa was leaving angad again.

Kripa is just shocked.angad comes forward.

Angad-kripa tum tiyaar bhi ho gaye.very good ab chalein. 😊

Kripa-kaha? πŸ˜•

Angad-hamare ghar.

Kripa-angad maine tumhe pehle bhi kaha tha k....

Angad-k tum mare saath nahin aoge.

Now holding kripa tightly

Angad-yahi baat tum meri akho main dekh kar batao k tum tum mujhse pyaar nahin karti.kaho k tum mujhse dur reh kar kush ho.kaho k tumhe meri yaad nahin ati.

Kripa-(looknig down)-nahin karti main tumse pyaar nahin karti.

Angad-ahca yehi baat meri ankho main dakh kar kaho

Kirpa-(crying)tum mere saath aisa kyun kar rahe ho?pl tum meri zindagi se chalein jao.

Angad now let's go of kripa.

Angad-acha thik hain kripa main tumhari zindagi se chala jaunga uske saath saath is duniya ko bhi chod kar chala jaunga.tumne mujhe zaindagi jane k liye umeed de thi. tum mere jene ki wajain thi. lakin jab tumhi nahin raho ge tho main chala jaunga...is dunya se

Saying this he falls on the floor crying.kripa is shocked hearing what angad said she is also crying.she goes near angad.she puts her hand on angad's shoulder.

Kripa-angad mujhe maaf kardo.main yehi soch kar tumheri zindagi se gaye thi k main tumhe kush dekhna chati thi.kyu ke main tumse pyaar karti hun.

Angad lookes up to her

Kripa-haa angad main tumhe chod kar ab kabhi nahin jaungi.

Angad-vada

Kripa-vada

Angad just hugs kripa tightly.

Soon angad and kripa go back to india.everyone is really happy that angad and kripa are togather again.Evryone is a big happy family again kartick misty,shabbir,aaliyah,manek,anitah and out couple angad and kripa.

10 monthes later at hospital

Doctor-conratulation mr.angad khaana apko beta hua hain.

Angad-sach thanks alot.kya main kripa se mil sakta hun.

Doctor-sure.

Angad goes in the room and finds kripa with a baby boy.he goes and hugs kripa and the baby boy.

Angad-thanks so much kripa aj tumne mujhe bohot he anmol toufa diya hain.

And they lived happly ever after

sorry but i had to end this fanfic because lot's of people wanted me to cont the other 2 fanfic hope you liked this fanfic.and will so read my other 2 fanfic saathiya and kaisa yeh pyaar hai πŸ˜†

Edited by khushi19 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: khushi19



sorry but i had to end this fanfic because lot's of people wanted me to cont the other 2 fanfic hope you liked this fanfic.and will so read my other 2 fanfic saathiya and kaisa yeh pyaar hai πŸ˜†


I am extremely angry with you for ending this fanfic I am too dispointed that you listened to others
you shouldn't have ended this fanfic
it was going so well