Teri Yaad(A-K fanfic)Last part!!!!pg-9 - Page 3

it really gr8 i lyk it plz cont
i think it might be Shabbir 😃 😃 😛

i think it will be aaliyah plz cont soon

and that aaliya wow nice part plz continue

heyy tht was awesome khushi!!...plzzz continue soon yaar!!...want to read more!!..

khushi! khushi khushi!! loved the whole fanfic so far yaarr.....conitnue soon...cant wait!! uff 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Pooja922

khushi! khushi khushi!! loved the whole fanfic so far yaarr.....conitnue soon...cant wait!! uff 😆 😆

you should also cont your fanfic i love it. anywayz i will start typing the next part in 30 mins😆hope you will like it😛

plz cont soon khusi cant wait anymore the suspense is killin me

Originally posted by: khushi19

you should also cont your fanfic i love it. anywayz i will start typing the next part in 30 mins😆hope you will like it😛

i did...i contd it yesterday....go read it lol

Originally posted by: sweet honey

plz cont soon khusi cant wait anymore the suspense is killin me

don't worry i won't let you die😆i am writting the next part😃

Part-5

Recape-someone stops kripa....

......and it's none other then shabbir.Aaliyah was with her.

Kripa-t..tum..ya..ha..k..kya.. karhae ho...

Shabbir and aaliyah both walked up to kripa.

Shabbir-yehi sawal tho hame tumse puchna chahiyeh.

Aaliyah-tumtho bahi ki zindagi se chali gaye kabhi unke bare main socha hain.

Kripa-aur main karti bhi tho kya,maine ap logo ko itna dukh diya hain.mujhe laga k mera tum logo ki zindagi se dur rehna hi hom sab k liye acha hoga.

Aaliyah-kripa tum aisa sock bhi kaise saktein ho?jo kuch bhi hua usme prithvi ka dosh tha tumhara nahin.

Shabbir-pata ahin tumhare jane k baad angad ka kya haal hua hain.main uski juthi muskaan ke piche dard saaf saaf dikhae deta hain.

Aaliyah-main abhi yeh khush khabri bhai ko suna k ati hun.

she was walknig a way when kripa stopped her.

Kripa-nahin Aaliyah tum angad ko mere bare main kuch nahin bataogi.tum dono ko mar kasam hain.

Aaliyah-lekin kripa....

Kripa-nahin Aaliyah angad ko jo dard maine diya hain use bhulne main thoda waqt lagega.lakin use bhi apne zindagi phirse kisi aur k saath karne padegi.mere bagair.

Shabbir-lakin agar angad ko kabhi na kabhi tho tumhare bare main pata lagaga tab kya karogi.

Kripa-vo din kabhi nahin iaga.(we will c about that 😉 )

Saying this kripa leaves from there.

********************************************************

Next day was the wedding day.Shabbir tired to find more about kripa's life from karan and piya.Where she lives.where she works.Everything.kripa tried much to stay ways from shabbir and aaliyah as much as she can.the wedding was over.shabbir and aaliyah went back to india.

********************************************************
At airport

Angad and kartick came to pick them up.

Shabbir-angad,kartick tum log shadi main nahin ia na tho karan mujhse bohot naraz tha.

Kartick-humne koshish tho ki thi ane ki lakin yaha pe bohot kaam bad gaya tha.

After that they all left for khaana house.

Everyone was sitting in the hall waiting for them.Just then four of them come.naina welcomes them.

Naina-kaise ho aaliyah beta?

Aaliyah-main thik uhn masi ap kaise ho?

Naina-tumhe dekh kar thik hoye.

Shabbir-karan ne mujhe bohot danta jub ap logo ne ane k liye mana kar diya.

Naina-humne tho plan banaya tha lakin tum tho jante hone angad ne mana kardiya.jabse kripa gayee hain vo tho jaise tut hi gaya hain.

(BTW:at this time angad was in his room)

Hearing this Aaliyah could not control herself and ran up to her room crying.Everyone was confused.Shabbir went behind her.

In the room

Shabbir-Aaliyah

Aaliyah(crying)-pata nahin bhai ki asi halat dekh kar maan kar ta hun k abhi ja kar unhe bata dun k kripa kaha hain.lakin usene mana kiya hain.jab hum canada gaye the tho hun use shaadi main mile the.aur...

suddnly Aalyah sees someone at the back and it's none other then.........

keep guessing... 😉    Edited by khushi19 - 18 years ago