creative thrd:The maze of love v/s evil,note@pg154 - Page 67

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

Thank you Bindu!😳

Mayeb Ashu will breka the ice

but maybe more suffering is needed😕😆

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

how was Geet?

I still have to catch up from last week😭

Originally posted by: ritzy09

absolutely brilliant Simi

 

First of all I love that song. Amitab's voice has so much poignancy and I absolutely love the lyrics.

 

I loved the way you showed both their pains. Geet seeing him standing their drenced hearing her breaths...oh my my I am getting goosebumps just visualising the efefct. So painful and yet so much love

Originally posted by: kathie_berns

Great part by thea... Hey bindu, one request, could you edit the part a little more to show that Maan is thinking of the past and this is how he allowed Geet to go away from him?

The next part i.e about the part can be continued from there...😊