creative thrd:The maze of love v/s evil,note@pg154

Posted: 12 years ago
Hi guys...i think by now i think i dont need to introduce myself. Anyways to those who dont know i'm Kathie. I started an os for fun where all the writers who wished could contribute and it was a runaway success. Owing to our first big hit, we decided to make a sequelπŸ˜‰.

The link to the hit os: The fun begins 1

                                       The fun begins 2

The sequel goes like this. Each writer will continue from where the previous writer left and each part will consist of a song. The writer updating the part has the responsibility of providing a link to the song so that the readers can enjoy while reading.Anybody who wishes to write a part can join in. This idea was suggested by bindu and Aashu

Please note that this post is meant only for besharam maneetians so the rest please refrain from reading.πŸ˜‰

One more thing:

 Before you read this post you need to take an oath, We the besharam maneetians, promise to remain besharam and uphold the values of besharmi with all our heart and soul until the end of this thread.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

So hereby i open the thread... Let the fun begin...πŸ˜ƒ

Part 1:

Geet felt numb as she ran out of Khurana mansion. The cold breeze blowing in her face did nothing to her since she was already cold from within.

Did she hear it right? Did Maan sir really propose to Sameera in front of her?
Tears rolled down her eyes as she remembered Sameera giving him a sideways kiss and the guests congratulating him. Her heart cried in pain.

But why was she feeling like her whole being was tearing from inside? It was not like she didnt know that Sameera was Maan Sir's girlfriend! They getting married was inevitable. She had even heard that they were in a live in relationship. So what was happening to her? Why were the tears so adamant to flow from her eyes!

She walked out of the mansion without even knowing where she was going. All she could think of was that Maan sir was going to marry someone else. She would lose him forever.
    
 Listen to the song Ajeeb Dastan hai yeh...(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eJLdL5_QkVo)

It was her first day at Khurana constructions as an employee after completing her MBA and she had already got into a tiff with the M.D unknowingly, thanks to the auto driver who bumped into his car in the traffic and caused a fight.

Ajeeb dastan hai ye
Kahan shuru kahan khatam
Yeh manzilein hain kaunsi
Na woh samajh sake na hum
 

Even though she hated the sight of him there was something attracting her towards him. His mere presence would make her all jittery. She would feel goosebumps running down her spine even if he looked at her with those intense eyes.

 Yeh roshni ke saath kyon
Dhuaan utha chirag se 
Yeh khwaab dekhti hoon main
Ke jag pari hoon khwaab se

She did not know when hatred turned into love, all she knew was that she had fallen for him irrevocably. His silent gestures of help to her, their eyelocks, his always being there to save her from trouble, his possessiveness for her made her heart start beating only for him.

Ajeeb daastan hai ye
Kahan shuru kahan khatam
Yeh manzile hai kaunsi
Na voh samajh sake na hum

Their almost kiss during the deepavali party at Khurana mansion today made her heartbeats go skyrocketing. But just after that,he started behaving his usual rude self with her like nothing at all happened. 

 Mubarakein tumhe ke tum
Kisi ke noor ho gaye 
Kisi ke itne paas ho
Ke sab se door ho gaye

The final blow was dealt when he proposed to Sameera for marriage in front of his Daadimaa and put a ring on her finger. She just stood there numb while he was surrounded by people all smiling and congratulating her.

 Kisi ka pyaar leke tum
Naya jahan basaoge
Yeh shaam jab bhi aayegi
Tum humko yaad aaoge

Ajeeb dastan hai yeh
Kahan shuru kahan khatam
Yeh manzile hai kaunsi
Na wo samajh sake na hum

She just walked and walked in the middle of the road unaware of a truck coming towards her with full speed.

                      ***************************************

So guys, i thought since we had one post on fun and nok jok, this post would be kind of serious so we can have writers writing intense scenes. I've opened the post. You guys carry on from here...😊 Let me know how was it and whether the thread is worth continueing.πŸ˜‰

Index

Part 1:by kathie_berns

Part 2:pg 4,by Nazmaa

Part 3:pg5,by Maaneet099

Part 4:pg10, by bangalores

Part 5:pg15, by kathie_berns

Part 6:pg16, by Nazmaa

Part 7:pg16, by Maankigeet4ever

Part 8,pg27,by bangalores

Part 9:pg30,by aashluvsmaan

Part 10:pg35,by Nazmaa

Part 11:pg36,by Maankigeet4ever

Part 12:pg38,by Shilalipi

Part 13:pg43,by Kathie_berns

Part 14:pg45, by mrs.msk

Part 15:pg47,by mchopra

Part 16:pg48,by nazmaa

Part 17:pg52,by ritzy09

Part 18:pg55,by maankigeet4ever

Part 19:pg61,by mchopra

Part 20:pg69,by bangalores

Part 21:pg72,by kathie_berns

Part 22:pg76,written by thea_angely, edited by bangalores

Part 23:pg83,by Nazmaa

Part 24:pg89, by mrs.msk

Part 25:pg95,by aashluvsmaan

Part 26:pg104,by mchopra

Part 27:pg 108,by -afsha-

Part 28:pg112,by Nazmaa

Part 29:pg119,by kawaii_geet

Part 30:pg130,by mrs.msk

Part 31:pg143, by kathie_berns

What happened to sameera?:pg145,by mrs.msk

Part 32:pg150, by mchopra


Edited by kathie_berns - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
😳
sure
we take the oath.
please begun the fun guys
Edited by tinu.jindal - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
GRT!!!!! but soo besharam yaar...hehe
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by aashluvsmaan


GRT!!!!! but soo besharam yaar...hehe


hey hi ash
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by tinu.jindal




hey hi ash
hiπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by aashluvsmaan


hiπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


How are u

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by tinu.jindal




How are u

grt yaar...
 
dont miond me
i am typing away SOL..isliye late replysπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
hey kathie why dont u do the honor of starting with the first song πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
ya please someone start the musical jouney...
Posted: 12 years ago
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ
Loved it
writer cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

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