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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

Index

Part 1: The Storm

Part 2: behind the shadow

Last part: Imperfectly Perfect

OS: ~My Name is Trouble~ Maithli-Abhiya-Jeh

First FF: The Beautiful Stranger

New FF: Till the End of Time

Edited by princess_xeelan - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I have stopped watching dis show,but can't stop reading ur ff's..😊 Both da updates were fabulous,and a big round of applause for ur sensible thinking.. 👏

Dis days I hav stopped visiting da forum,as people r going insane and bashing da female lead left-right-centre,just to promote their anoder (favorite?) couple.😆 I am scared to comment at any post,as I'm afraid sum people will bite me after reading my POV.So I better stay safe...🤣

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 14 years ago

Amar che besi bhalo tomar ta. Fabulous re. Alina sab khanai villain hoye jache.😆
Tara tari continue koro please.

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Pratiksha

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Posted: 14 years ago

amaezing yaar its awesome, love fierce pia, she look good like this

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Rashmi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awsum i loved this angry pia she should really do like this in the show an i guess she was alina so now will she take revenget what emotions u potrayed for both of them i loved it update soon

Edited by strawberryrashu - 14 years ago

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Peehu24

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Posted: 14 years ago

tanzie..part was short..but it was awesome and fab...the way piya became so angry..fierce was just mind blowing..i loved the way u protrayed piya's feelings...and abhay really needed a slap from piya...😆...and u did it..show milega...iske koi chance nahi..par yaha..piya ne abhay ko dho daala 😆...and now alina knows the truth and she will turn evil...more problems yet to come...update soon..

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LittleImmortal

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Awsum OS Tanzie 👏the way u have described abhiya emotions just loved it dear❤️.And Abhay is in big trouble have to handle two women lets c how would he do that😆
do cont soon😊

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anjali

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Posted: 14 years ago

cant wait to read it. Do update soon!!!!

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sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

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superb update , tanzie
loved it
wow, piya was like a tigress. . I just loved this piya!
OMG. . Alina knows abt abhiya. . I hope she doesnt mess up everything. . Its already so messed up. .
Continue soon
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Edited by missglam - 14 years ago