New OS~Mend my broken Heart(part3*pg16*Oct17)

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: @nup@m@
Excellent Tanzie!!! Absolutely Marvelous!! I wish something like this happens -- with the Abhiya scene not with Alina turning Evil --- Abhiya scene was superb and Pia's dialogues were what Abhay should get right now -- but I think Abhay ia ko mana lega aaj hi!

As far as alina is concerned -- I do think she is negative -- I dont want her to be -- I want her to be with Abhay in the final fight against her family!

LOVE :)

P.S : Please PM me whenever you write an OS -- I miss out on it! :)

Thanks soo much Ananya 🤗 Actually a screaming Piya and several dialouges were roaming inside my mind and my boss didn't come today so I got plenty of free time at ofc... accha utilize kiya na time 🤣

and dont worry about Alina... i have a major twist stored for her. I'm also assuming she is negative now and I dont want her to be... 😕 she will be so heartbroken neg or pos once she came to know about Abhay's fake romance because Abhay is driving her to cloud nine now. that is also Im not liking abt the track.

I didn't PM anyone sweetz... i just wrote and thought would send PMs once I reach home.. will PM you for the next part 😳

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sunflower52
Really nice update. I don't think we will be seeing a slap coming from Piya in the show. Loved your OS.

PM me when you update next.

Thanks dear. I know she would never do that 😆 and with his cheesy dialogues once again Abhay Raichand will manaoing Piya in no time which I dont want. he should also try hard to melt her anger...

will PM you for the next update 😳

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Aree yaar because you r too good with romance... 😃 I know Piya will never slap Abhay and Abhay will manaoing her with his cheesy dialouges like I love you Piya...I love you and Piya will say I love you too Abhay and you all get headaches 😕

aww...thanks...😃...but yes...abhay will keep repeating his I LOVE YOU recorder...😆..the best he does to manofy piya...😆

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Sharpay.Evans

@Sharpay.Evans

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

pls pm me wen u upd8!! I lkd ur os!

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priya

@anji99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Loved the OS. I also love your FFs. Please pm me when you update!!

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awesome tanz!!!

i m totally glad u wrote this os!!

😊😊😊

present track is giving such a torture to us, dat v need some positivity n wat this osis gonna bring for us!!

perfect display of pia's emotion n i reli wanted her to behave this way only, i want her to b strong enough to make him realise dat , love is all abt trust, complete trust, nt abt half lies n hidden truths n dat wat i found in ur os!!!

bt alina's part was shocking, 😲😲😲😲😲, i didn't want dat!!!

is she going to hurt him???

pls pls ss no!!

bt this is going to b interesting, nw how lw he deals wid these two stroms, wanna knw asap!!

do try to continue soon hun n don't u dare forget to pm me , bf4 posting nxt one!!

luv u🤗

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.SmokeySilence.

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: pratiksha2009
amaezing yaar its awesome, love fierce pia, she look good like this

Thanks Prati... see I knew Abhay would say I cant tell you Piya and this is exactly what he did... 🤢

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anjali

@adnilover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Lovely post yaar. Loved your version of the confrontation. The CVs gave a pathetic abhiya scene where abhay didnt comfort her nor did he tell her the truth. But looking forward to your update.

Please PM me when you update!

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.SmokeySilence.

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
Awsum i loved this angry pia she should really do like this in the show an i guess she was alina so now will she take revenget what emotions u potrayed for both of them i loved it update soon

Thanks Rashu. I also wanted her to do like and I knew she would never do it as well... Lets see what Alina does.. thanks for liking ti dear... it came all of a sudden. I didn't plan to write it as I do for my other updates 😳

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: piyabhay4ever
Lovely post yaar. Loved your version of the confrontation. The CVs gave a pathetic abhiya scene where abhay didnt comfort her nor did he tell her the truth. But looking forward to your update.
Please PM me when you update!

Thanks dear... I know. I read the updates and I was extra sure about Abhay's dialogues and he said almost the same one. I wish the CVs would use these kinda dialouges rather then the crappy ones they are showing... it will break my hurt so I don't watch the show anymore