New OS~Mend my broken Heart(part3*pg16*Oct17)

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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What is this yaar? 😲 Itna lamba Reservation? will update within evening guys 🤗

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

1st part updated guys... it's short but I wanted to write it before tonights episode... next part will be updated tomorrow 🤗

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: peehu24
tanzie..part was short..but it was awesome and fab...the way piya became so angry..fierce was just mind blowing..i loved the way u protrayed piya's feelings...and abhay really needed a slap from piya...and u did it..show milega...iske koi chance nahi..par yaha..piya ne abhay ko dho daala ...and now alina knows the truth and she will turn evil...more problems yet to come...update soon..

thanks dear...i want piya to bbb abhay just like this... Bonus if she can give a slap. After tht they can hug and kiss :P
about alina thrs a huge twist... Wait for tht ;) and i will try to make next update superb romantic. Aftall abhay has to work really hard for apology this time. It wont b romantic like u offcourse ur the romance queen bt will try. 3 parts will do.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

thanks dear...i want piya to bbb abhay just like this... Bonus if she can give a slap. After tht they can hug and kiss :P
about alina thrs a huge twist... Wait for tht ;) and i will try to make next update superb romantic. Aftall abhay has to work really hard for apology this time. It wont b romantic like u offcourse ur the romance queen bt will try. 3 parts will do.

aww...i really want one in the show...😳..and for the twist...cant wait...and yuppie...i want romance...and yes super romantic...😳 😆...as always..waiting for it...😆...and u write romance beautifully...😳..i love the way u describe...😳...btw..why does everyone keep calling me romance queen...🤣...i always wonder 😆

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--Anna--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Excellent Tanzie!!! Absolutely Marvelous!! I wish something like this happens -- with the Abhiya scene not with Alina turning Evil --- Abhiya scene was superb and Pia's dialogues were what Abhay should get right now -- but I think Abhay ia ko mana lega aaj hi!

As far as alina is concerned -- I do think she is negative -- I dont want her to be -- I want her to be with Abhay in the final fight against her family!

LOVE :)

P.S : Please PM me whenever you write an OS -- I miss out on it! :)

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Ume Salma Kakal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Really nice update. I don't think we will be seeing a slap coming from Piya in the show. Loved your OS.

PM me when you update next.

Edited by sunflower52 - 13 years ago

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PRERNA VERMA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Awesome OS!😃

Poor Alina!After Abhay's betrayal she is left heartbroken. Female of the species is more deadlier than the male.Bechara Abhay, dono taraf se band bajega!😆 Pia is right on her part...Abhay should trust her once and tell her the truth. Together they can make impossible possible. Continue soon.

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

wow wow wow wow tanzie!!i have no words..its just brilliant!!wow !!piya slapped abhay!!oh dear alina knows the truth now?waiting 4 da nxt part..update asap!!n luv u lots 4 starting this os!!

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cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

it was really good tanzie ! abhay really broke two hearts accidently i really luved it dear ! update soon m waiting !

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: peehu24

aww...i really want one in the show...😳..and for the twist...cant wait...and yuppie...i want romance...and yes super romantic...😳 😆...as always..waiting for it...😆...and u write romance beautifully...😳..i love the way u describe...😳...btw..why does everyone keep calling me romance queen...🤣...i always wonder 😆

Aree yaar because you r too good with romance... 😃 I know Piya will never slap Abhay and Abhay will manaoing her with his cheesy dialouges like I love you Piya...I love you and Piya will say I love you too Abhay and you all get headaches 😕