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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

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Posted: 14 years ago

Okie...I finally have to say this...Although, I love this show and I watch it for RK (My fav most actor)...and I really think that RK and Priya's shots and scenes are amazing and well written, but rest of the portions of the script have many issues...

For eg: Lets take today's - Ram and Vikram's confrontation scene...

Vikram tells Ram even before Ram opens his mouth that he had the necklace in his pocket and now it has vanished...So, obviously, he is admitting, he took the necklace from the safe...but after few minutes, we find Ram telling Vikram to (stop lying and) after all he saw Vikram in the camera footage taking the necklace??? ..."D'Uh"!! 🤢🤢

It doesnt stop here...Vikram tells Ram, that he is not denying taking the necklace from the safe but Siddhanth told him to do so...and after some blah blah blah, Ram again goes, "(but how can you deny), I saw you taking the necklace from the safe?"...Huh??..."D'Uh!" 🤢🤢

Then the last straw, Siddhanth comes in the room and in the Vikram-Siddhanth confrontation, Vikram tells Siddhanth to stop lying and admit that he sent him to the safe to remove the necklace...and what does Siddhanth tell him after all the white lies..."I didnt tell you to...but forget that...how can you deny the CCTV footage...we saw you take the necklace"...and Ram looks at Vikram as if to say, "Now, answer that?"..."D'Uh!" 🤢🤢

REALLY??????????...

I wanted to get inside my Laptop screen and shake Ram, "Arre, Vikram is already admitting that he DID TAKE THE NECKLACE...When is he denying it????????????"...Gosh!! 5-7 mins absolute waste confrontation...

"I saw u take the necklace"

"Yeah I did..."

"But I saw you take the necklace...How can you deny it"

"I am not denying, I did take it"...

"But how would you justify that I saw you taking the necklace from the safe"

"yes I did"

"We have a CCTV footage showing you takign the necklace from the safe"

*beats the head on the table 1001 times...*

*dives in the Atlantic Ocean"

These seemed like better and easy options to me!! 🤣🤣

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AreYaar

@AreYaar

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Posted: 14 years ago

LOL that is the only glitch you can find in the script?? Somebody also tell me how it is remotely plausible also that Vikram would firstly even FALL for this LAME plan of Mama-Niharika?? Hasn't he been shown to doubt the blood-sucking relatives since day one? And still he falls for this? Jai hai Maiyya ki as always.

There are WAY too many GLARING holes in this "script" if you can even call it that...I watch the Ram-Priya scenes as standalones strictly for Ram-Sakshi...otherwise there is nothing worth praising about in this show.

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

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Posted: 14 years ago

Exactly Nu! ... First, Vikram knows the type of relatives Ram has...On top of it, he doesnt go and talk to Ram about it, before all the drama...When Niharika doesnt find the necklace in the first box, he could have gone and told Ram, Naah, he doesnt...Very conveniently he decides to shut his mouth...and then as Siddhanth mentioned, that even a kid knows that the safest place is the safe over someone;s pocket!! ...D'Uh!!

So, No, this was not the only glitch in the script...this was just an example and I guess the height of my tolerance...I infact just watch Ram and Priya's scenes because I just love them...and if there is any scene without them (and even Vikram or his wife's scene with Ram or Priya), I just forwrd them...Especially when the camera rolls in Priya's maiden house!! Gosh!! Either I run or I make the YT run!!! 🤣

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achiever

@achiever

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Posted: 14 years ago

🤣.. No please dont dive into the ocean.. who will give us such entertaining digs at the scriptwriter..

agreed.. thts the lamest dialogues.. ever heard.. and thn thy conviniently forget to mention "Sid"'s role in PriAm's convo.. the pnt of conflict was whom to believe.. his brother or his best friend... and not whether Vik was thief or not.. It is evident tht he did take the necklace.. and he accepts it..

and thn the next step was how to retrieve the necklace...! Ram making no attempts to retrieve it.. means.. he accepts that Vik took the necklace and isnt willing to give back.. 👎🏼

RK shud've searched the house for the necklace at least for his satisfaction after Vik left..

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AreYaar

@AreYaar

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll
Exactly Nu! ... First, Vikram knows the type of relatives Ram has...On top of it, he doesnt go and talk to Ram about it, before all the drama...When Niharika doesnt find the necklace in the first box, he could have gone and told Ram, Naah, he doesnt...Very conveniently he decides to shut his mouth...and then as Siddhanth mentioned, that even a kid knows that the safest place is the safe over someone;s pocket!! ...D'Uh!!

So, No, this was not the only glitch in the script...this was just an example and I guess the height of my tolerance...I infact just watch Ram and Priya's scenes because I just love them...and if there is any scene without them (and even Vikram or his wife's scene with Ram or Priya), I just forwrd them...Especially when the camera rolls in Priya's maiden house!! Gosh!! Either I run or I make the YT run!!! 🤣

Watch out, DD...you're soon going to get lectures about "don't like it, don't watch it"😆...typical forum fangiri. 🥱

Yeah I forward literally everything except RP too...lol...today's epi I just watched the last scene...really don't have patience to sit through the rest of the nonsense which is SO poorly written anyways. Terribly trite characterization and poorly written scenes.

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: achiever
🤣.. No please dont dive into the ocean.. who will give us such entertaining digs at the scriptwriter..

agreed.. thts the lamest dialogues.. ever heard.. and thn thy conviniently forget to mention "Sid"'s role in PriAm's convo.. the pnt of conflict was whom to believe.. his brother or his best friend... and not whether Vik was thief or not.. It is evident tht he did take the necklace.. and he accepts it..

and thn the next step was how to retrieve the necklace...! Ram making no attempts to retrieve it.. means.. he accepts that Vik took the necklace and isnt willing to give back.. 👎🏼

RK shud've searched the house for the necklace at least for his satisfaction after Vik left..

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Thats the point, The essence of the confrontation was whether to believe his brother or the best friend...and when Vikram questions Ram on this, what is Siddhanth's response, After all the Brotherly talk, he looks at Ram and questions him that we cannot deny that we saw him take the necklace?? Huh?? Arre, that is exactly what Vikram is saying!!!...Given that I took the necklace from the safe, whose story do u believe...Or should we just hang a board on Vikram's neck, "I DID TAKE THE NECKLACE, TALK REAL AGENDA" 😆😆😆

And I agree...RK should have searched the house, but then if he does, then wouldnt a male protaganist suddenly become the smarter one of the two protaganist (Male and Female) in an Ekta's show???? Naah!! That would be changing the trend...Ekta cant afford to show Male Protaganist smarter than Female...Wait till u see the smart brains of Priya dng the rounds while the Polar Bear sits, broods, eats and sleeps!! 😆😆😆

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nureat01

Watch out, DD...you're soon going to get lectures about "don't like it, don't watch it"😆...typical forum fangiri. 🥱

Yeah I forward literally everything except RP too...lol...today's epi I just watched the last scene...really don't have patience to sit through the rest of the nonsense which is SO poorly written anyways. Terribly trite characterization and poorly written scenes.

😆😆... Well, even the weak script couldnt take me away from RK, How can anyone else..For him, I will watch the lamest script...

See, I like the story till now...I like what they are trying to convey...My only observation is that the detailed script, although conveying the message is a work of an amateur...Not much thought has been given on each scene and dialogue...The only scenes I really enjoy are Ram, Priya, Vikram and his wife...like the last scene between Ram and Priya where she gives him her piece of mind and also calls him Polar Bear...😆😆😆...Very beautifully, in a "Ram-Priya" manner she manages to convey to him that he has sinned today...Somehow it feels as if someone else writes their scenes...someone more experienced...Every aspect is taken care in their scene...They didnt show Priya trying to explain to Ram calmly..she didnt even try talking it out with him...she just wanted to talk abotu AC...but then end up in a fight, typical Ram-Priya...That scene was beautiful and complete in all fronts...

but other actors are not getting great scenes...like when Priya's father comes on the screeen, I run the way I used to run from Babi's scenes and her "Aayi bolti" talks...Gosh, that Aayi did bolti a lot naaa and now this father...when he starts he cant stop crying and talking!!!! 😆😆😆

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TheRager

@TheRager

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hai Ram Nikita! What have you done? You have pointed out flaws in the greatest show in this world? Dont you know how overburdened the script writer might be? He has to fight traffic jams and choked streets due to rains to reach his place of work. He might have already written a good script but it might have had to be changed at the last minute due to uproar by fans. He might have had a personal emergency. So many things could have gone wrong in his life for months together. And you are 'bashing' his efforts? Where has all your consideration gone? Arent you being selfish and displaying a lack of values by being unkind?
Anyways who cares for your opinions? The janta has not appointed you as their representative to bash the script writer. They are watching his work in droves. The trps prove it. The jury awards provide a seal of approval. So if you dont like what you are seeing you better shut up and stop coming on this forum. 😡

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REKHA SHARMA

@rekhasharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

The easiest way for Vikram to confront Sidhhant would have been to ask him where from did Vikram get the key combination to the safe if not from Sidhhant. After all it was Siddhant who told the combination to Vikram.

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: kshreya2002
Hai Ram Nikita! What have you done? You have pointed out flaws in the greatest show in this world? Dont you know how overburdened the script writer might be? He has to fight traffic jams and choked streets due to rains to reach his place of work. He might have already written a good script but it might have had to be changed at the last minute due to uproar by fans. He might have had a personal emergency. So many things could have gone wrong in his life for months together. And you are 'bashing' his efforts? Where has all your consideration gone? Arent you being selfish and displaying a lack of values by being unkind?
Anyways who cares for your opinions? The janta has not appointed you as their representative to bash the script writer. They are watching his work in droves. The trps prove it. The jury awards provide a seal of approval. So if you dont like what you are seeing you better shut up and stop coming on this forum. 😡

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I didnt know our Shreya can be best in sarcasm too!! 😆😆 Where exactly is all this coming from - the weather forecast and the traffic prediction in Mumbai?? 😆😆

Frankly, I have been noticing amateur work since day 1 and I am touchie about it because I have waited like anything to watch RK back on the small screen...I run like a sine curve when I watch BALH episode...when it is Ram and Priya's scene or their individual ones (even Vikram or his wife), I am at the peak of exhilaration...the scenes are awesome, just out of the world...and as soon as it shifts to a different cast, I see the work of an amateur...and it kinda hurts my intelliegence...Like the scene today was an insult to our intelliegnce...but amateurs get better with time and thats what I am hoping for this show!!

Edited by Dancingdoll - 14 years ago

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