Glitches in the script - Page 2

Originally posted by: rekhasharma

The easiest way for Vikram to confront Sidhhant would have been to ask him where from did Vikram get the key combination to the safe if not from Sidhhant. After all it was Siddhant who told the combination to Vikram.

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Exactly Nu! ... First, Vikram knows the type of relatives Ram has...On top of it, he doesnt go and talk to Ram about it, before all the drama...When Niharika doesnt find the necklace in the first box, he could have gone and told Ram, Naah, he doesnt...Very conveniently he decides to shut his mouth...and then as Siddhanth mentioned, that even a kid knows that the safest place is the safe over someone;s pocket!! ...D'Uh!!

So, No, this was not the only glitch in the script...this was just an example and I guess the height of my tolerance...I infact just watch Ram and Priya's scenes because I just love them...and if there is any scene without them (and even Vikram or his wife's scene with Ram or Priya), I just forwrd them...Especially when the camera rolls in Priya's maiden house!! Gosh!! Either I run or I make the YT run!!! 🤣

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Originally posted by: sreearavindh

LOL...I think vikram might be doing this wantedly so as to ...let ram know the truth about his stupid family...!!! I could be one the reason...

Hoewever, its a true waste conversation...confrontation scene, they could have tried in a bit better way...

Originally posted by: Manzz

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Script And Sory Is All Awry, Original Theme Is Missing And There Is No Talk To Get Back The Necklace To The Rightful Owner. That Was Meant To Be In The First Place !

Why Oh Why They Sp;oil A Good Story ?

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

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I didnt know our Shreya can be best in sarcasm too!! 😆😆 Where exactly is all this coming from - the weather forecast and the traffic prediction in Mumbai?? 😆😆

Frankly, I have been noticing amateur work since day 1 and I am touchie about it because I have waited like anything to watch RK back on the small screen...I run like a sin curve when I watch BALH episode...when it is Ram and Priya's scene or their individual ones (even Vikram or his wife), I am at the peak of exhilaration...the scenes are awesome, just out of the world...and as soon as it shifts to a different caste, I see the work of an amateur...and it kinda hurts my intelliegence...Like the scene today was an insult to our intelliegnce...but amateurs get better with time and thats what I am hoping for this show!!

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

😆😆... Well, even the weak script couldnt take me away from RK, How can anyone else..For him, I will watch the lamest script...

See, I like the story till now...I like what they are trying to convey...My only observation is that the detailed script, although conveying the message is a work of an amateur...Not much thought has been given on each scene and dialogue...The only scenes I really enjoy are Ram, Priya, Vikram and his wife...like the last scene between Ram and Priya where she gives him her piece of mind and also calls him Polar Bear...😆😆😆...Very beautifully, in a "Ram-Priya" manner she manages to convey to him that he has sinned today...Somehow it feels as if someone else writes their scenes...someone more experienced...Every aspect is taken care in their scene...They didnt show Priya trying to explain to Ram calmly..she didnt even try talking it out with him...she just wanted to talk abotu AC...but then end up in a fight, typical Ram-Priya...That scene was beautiful and complete in all fronts...

but other actors are not getting great scenes...like when Priya's father comes on the screeen, I run the way I used to run from Babi's scenes and her "Aayi bolti" talks...Gosh, that Aayi did bolti a lot naaa and now this father...when he starts he cant stop crying and talking!!!! 😆😆😆

@bold: BINGO👍🏼...I also understand what they are trying to convey on a conceptual level...but the execution is SO amateurish, SO half-baked that it's a major turn-off...it's like you can tell that they just don't put much effort into writing the script convincingly...the supporting characters are very one-dimensional for the most part...and that's why the show is a pain in general.

Yeah I liked the RP scene too and Ram-Sakshi did a great job as usual...thankfully in these kind of scenes atleast they aren't using body doubles otherwise for the rest of the epi they were using them for the family scenes😆...So yeah you could be right that someone else is writing the RP scenes cuz usually those are better written than the rest of the pathetic script and upar se RS execute them well too.

Priya's father is such a wet blanket as Vasu calls him🤢😆...seriously most of the supporting characters I'm quite allergic to...only Vikram and Neha scenes with RP I watch...rest is just ughhh.

LOL@ Babi scenes and the classic 'aayi bolti hai'...ahhh nostalgia😆...but honestly DD, even at it's worst LTL had a better written script than this show😆...in this one toh you can tell that Kekta is doing timepass...she's got the ratings and now a handful of awards for this show so she's least bothered about making a quality product.

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

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Thats the point, The essence of the confrontation was whether to believe his brother or the best friend...and when Vikram questions Ram on this, what is Siddhanth's response, After all the Brotherly talk, he looks at Ram and questions him that we cannot deny that we saw him take the necklace?? Huh?? Arre, that is exactly what Vikram is saying!!!...Given that I took the necklace from the safe, whose story do u believe...Or should we just hang a board on Vikram's neck, "I DID TAKE THE NECKLACE, TALK REAL AGENDA" 😆😆😆

And I agree...RK should have searched the house, but then if he does, then wouldnt a male protaganist suddenly become the smarter one of the two protaganist (Male and Female) in an Ekta's show???? Naah!! That would be changing the trend...Ekta cant afford to show Male Protaganist smarter than Female...Wait till u see the smart brains of Priya dng the rounds while the Polar Bear sits, broods, eats and sleeps!! 😆😆😆

@ blue - They have already shown Priya noticing one CCTV camera's screen switched off, so THAT might be the starting point of Priya's "Parvathigiri" to save..."dadaji ki aakhri nishani", "parivar ka pushtaini haar/saalon ki parampara", and last but not the least, "the mighty friendship" 😆! And then as a result, win lots of appreciation and respect from Ram and rest of the positive family members [including Dadi, Ram's youngest brother, and few kaakas (Ramus and Bansis mainly) 😆]. And not to mention, rise of a new "raste ka kaanta" for the negative ones 😆.

Originally posted by: kshreya2002

Hai Ram Nikita! What have you done? You have pointed out flaws in the greatest show in this world? Dont you know how overburdened the script writer might be? He has to fight traffic jams and choked streets due to rains to reach his place of work. He might have already written a good script but it might have had to be changed at the last minute due to uproar by fans. He might have had a personal emergency. So many things could have gone wrong in his life for months together. And you are 'bashing' his efforts? Where has all your consideration gone? Arent you being selfish and displaying a lack of values by being unkind?
Anyways who cares for your opinions? The janta has not appointed you as their representative to bash the script writer. They are watching his work in droves. The trps prove it. The jury awards provide a seal of approval. So if you dont like what you are seeing you better shut up and stop coming on this forum. 😡

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

😆😆... Well, even the weak script couldnt take me away from RK, How can anyone else..For him, I will watch the lamest script...

See, I like the story till now...I like what they are trying to convey...My only observation is that the detailed script, although conveying the message is a work of an amateur...Not much thought has been given on each scene and dialogue...The only scenes I really enjoy are Ram, Priya, Vikram and his wife...like the last scene between Ram and Priya where she gives him her piece of mind and also calls him Polar Bear...😆😆😆...Very beautifully, in a "Ram-Priya" manner she manages to convey to him that he has sinned today...Somehow it feels as if someone else writes their scenes...someone more experienced...Every aspect is taken care in their scene...They didnt show Priya trying to explain to Ram calmly..she didnt even try talking it out with him...she just wanted to talk abotu AC...but then end up in a fight, typical Ram-Priya...That scene was beautiful and complete in all fronts...

but other actors are not getting great scenes...like when Priya's father comes on the screeen, I run the way I used to run from Babi's scenes and her "Aayi bolti" talks...Gosh, that Aayi did bolti a lot naaa and now this father...when he starts he cant stop crying and talking!!!! 😆😆😆

Its basically a recycle of Ekta's previous soaps, only Ram's and Sakshi's interactions seem fresh. But anyways, even I watch only Ram-Priya scenes, the rest of the show I fast-forward (since I watch it on YT). And as you mentioned, Ram's and Priya's scenes does seem different and "non-typical". Thank God they are not showing "Priya-tripping-Ram-holding" kinda scenes 😆! Lot of people who got married through arranged marriages are able to connect to Ram-Priya, so I'm glad atleast their interactions and relationship has been handled more lightly, with a certain level of relatability and connectivity.