Glitches in the script - Page 3

Originally posted by: rekhasharma

The easiest way for Vikram to confront Sidhhant would have been to ask him where from did Vikram get the key combination to the safe if not from Sidhhant. After all it was Siddhant who told the combination to Vikram.

Originally posted by: *dewdrop~pearl*

There was a flaw in Siddhant's dialogue too...he says "sirf MAIN aur MAA jaante the ki aaj yeh necklace aane wali hain, aur uss safe ki baare mein bhi", so then Vikram should have asked him "Oh really? If ONLY YOU & YOUR MOM knew about this necklace and its arrival, how would I know about it unless either of you TELL me?! To be frank, I think this was the most blooper filled conversation in BALH till date.

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Okie...I finally have to say this...Although, I love this show and I watch it for RK (My fav most actor)...and I really think that RK and Priya's shots and scenes are amazing and well written, but rest of the portions of the script have many issues...

For eg: Lets take today's - Ram and Vikram's confrontation scene...

Vikram tells Ram even before Ram opens his mouth that he had the necklace in his pocket and now it has vanished...So, obviously, he is admitting, he took the necklace from the safe...but after few minutes, we find Ram telling Vikram to (stop lying and) after all he saw Vikram in the camera footage taking the necklace??? ..."D'Uh"!! 🤢🤢

It doesnt stop here...Vikram tells Ram, that he is not denying taking the necklace from the safe but Siddhanth told him to do so...and after some blah blah blah, Ram again goes, "(but how can you deny), I saw you taking the necklace from the safe?"...Huh??..."D'Uh!" 🤢🤢

Then the last straw, Siddhanth comes in the room and in the Vikram-Siddhanth confrontation, Vikram tells Siddhanth to stop lying and admit that he sent him to the safe to remove the necklace...and what does Siddhanth tell him after all the white lies..."I didnt tell you to...but forget that...how can you deny the CCTV footage...we saw you take the necklace"...and Ram looks at Vikram as if to say, "Now, answer that?"..."D'Uh!" 🤢🤢

REALLY??????????...

I wanted to get inside my Laptop screen and shake Ram, "Arre, Vikram is already admitting that he DID TAKE THE NECKLACE...When is he denying it????????????"...Gosh!! 5-7 mins absolute waste confrontation...

"I saw u take the necklace"

"Yeah I did..."

"But I saw you take the necklace...How can you deny it"

"I am not denying, I did take it"...

"But how would you justify that I saw you taking the necklace from the safe"

"yes I did"

"We have a CCTV footage showing you takign the necklace from the safe"

*beats the head on the table 1001 times...*

*dives in the Atlantic Ocean"

These seemed like better and easy options to me!! 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: indiafmmm

What's even better is that Sid admits that no one except mom and he knew that the necklace was in the locker, etc. etc. then hello, how did Vikram know it????

Originally posted by: *dewdrop~pearl*

There was a flaw in Siddhant's dialogue too...he says "sirf MAIN aur MAA jaante the ki aaj yeh necklace aane wali hain, aur uss safe ki baare mein bhi", so then Vikram should have asked him "Oh really? If ONLY YOU & YOUR MOM knew about this necklace and its arrival, how would I know about it unless either of you TELL me?! To be frank, I think this was the most blooper filled conversation in BALH till date.

Originally posted by: nureat01

@bold: BINGO👍🏼...I also understand what they are trying to convey on a conceptual level...but the execution is SO amateurish, SO half-baked that it's a major turn-off...it's like you can tell that they just don't put much effort into writing the script convincingly...the supporting characters are very one-dimensional for the most part...and that's why the show is a pain in general.

Yeah I liked the RP scene too and Ram-Sakshi did a great job as usual...thankfully in these kind of scenes atleast they aren't using body doubles otherwise for the rest of the epi they were using them for the family scenes😆...So yeah you could be right that someone else is writing the RP scenes cuz usually those are better written than the rest of the pathetic script and upar se RS execute them well too.

Priya's father is such a wet blanket as Vasu calls him🤢😆...seriously most of the supporting characters I'm quite allergic to...only Vikram and Neha scenes with RP I watch...rest is just ughhh.

LOL@ Babi scenes and the classic 'aayi bolti hai'...ahhh nostalgia😆...but honestly DD, even at it's worst LTL had a better written script than this show😆...in this one toh you can tell that Kekta is doing timepass...she's got the ratings and now a handful of awards for this show so she's least bothered about making a quality product.

Originally posted by: *dewdrop~pearl*

@ blue - They have already shown Priya noticing one CCTV camera's screen switched off, so THAT might be the starting point of Priya's "Parvathigiri" to save..."dadaji ki aakhri nishani", "parivar ka pushtaini haar/saalon ki parampara", and last but not the least, "the mighty friendship" 😆! And then as a result, win lots of appreciation and respect from Ram and rest of the positive family members [including Dadi, Ram's youngest brother, and few kaakas (Ramus and Bansis mainly) 😆]. And not to mention, rise of a new "raste ka kaanta" for the negative ones 😆.

Originally posted by: *dewdrop~pearl*

Its basically a recycle of Ekta's previous soaps, only Ram's and Sakshi's interactions seem fresh. But anyways, even I watch only Ram-Priya scenes, the rest of the show I fast-forward (since I watch it on YT). And as you mentioned, Ram's and Priya's scenes does seem different and "non-typical". Thank God they are not showing "Priya-tripping-Ram-holding" kinda scenes 😆! Lot of people who got married through arranged marriages are able to connect to Ram-Priya, so I'm glad atleast their interactions and relationship has been handled more lightly, with a certain level of relatability and connectivity.

Originally posted by: *dewdrop~pearl*

There was a flaw in Siddhant's dialogue too...he says "sirf MAIN aur MAA jaante the ki aaj yeh necklace aane wali hain, aur uss safe ki baare mein bhi", so then Vikram should have asked him "Oh really? If ONLY YOU & YOUR MOM knew about this necklace and its arrival, how would I know about it unless either of you TELL me?! To be frank, I think this was the most blooper filled conversation in BALH till date.

Originally posted by: anjubala

@bold - I have been reading all these posts and I must say, you all have brought up such valid questions and points whose answer is only with Ekta.

I have to say that I am enjoying this show but that too because of Ram and Sakshi. This is my first show watching them and they are doing a fab job as Ram and Priya. I just ignore other scenes (I watch but close my brain) and specially when Priya's mom and Ram's dadi are in the picture. They both are too loud for me.

I have written other posts praising Vikram as a kind and faithful soul and he is the only one who knows Ram better than anybody else. It really surprises me that how come Ram is a business tycoon if he cannot differentiate between right and wrong. It is said that in a business, do not trust anybody and that means not even your family. But here Ram is trusting his step-brother and not his close friend...I was disappointed. And yes, Vikram should have spoken out yesterday that how come then I know the key to open the safe if only you and your mom knew about it????? Very valid points... Nice reading all these posts..Keep it up.

Sorry, did not introduce myself...I am Anju.