ff meri zindagi Maan... part 34 pg 139 - Page 2

Charaters:-
Maan singh khuraana:- most richest and handsome boy in Delhi abut full of attitude, hates women except his sister and dadima, he is very angry person but very good by heart" Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 12 years ago

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Part:- 3

Maan and Adi were attending their meeting, this meeting was very important for Maan and for his staff, the biggest project ever which they were going to sign
In conference hall:-
Mk:" hello mr chopra"
C:" hello mr khuraana"
Mk:" please be seated"
C:" thank you"
Mk:" Hume presentation shuru karni chahiye"
C:" yes sure"
Adi starts the presentation and it went for one hour

C:" I must say mr khuraana your staff is very intelligent we are impressed"
Mk:" thank you"
C:" tau kab kare yeh project sign"
Mk:" whenever you want"
C:" tomorrow we will arrange a big grand business party, so may be then is that okay"
Mk:" it's okay"
C:" see you mr khuraana"
They left from there

Maan was in his cabin. His cell phone ringed it was dadima
Mk:" jee dadima"
D:" bete woh"
Mk:" oh plz dadima kahin aap phir se yay nahin shaadi ka topic lekar baith gayi"
D:" humare baat tau sun lijiye"
Mk:" jee"
D:" appke chothe bhai ka phone aaya tha"
Mk:" kya Dev ka phone kaisa hai woh"
D:" woh theek hai aur usne kaha hai ke woh next week ki flight se wapis aarahe hai Naintara ke saath"
Word "Naintara" made him very angry
Mk:" tau"
Dadima notice his voice is changed into anger

D:" Maan hum jante hai aap kya soch rahe hai"
Mk:" dadima mein aapse ghar pe aale baat karta hu abhi mein thora busy ho bye"
He cuts
D:" hello hello maan"

Maan was trying to busy himself in projects, but nothing seems to work
He hate Naintara, she was the one who tried to seduce him but when she thought he will never trap and then she trapped his younger brother just for his money, for his fame"

Maan was going home, when he saw a beautiful girl, she wore beautiful white shalwar kameer omg his favorite colour, her hairs were flying in the air, her beautiful hazel eyes
But suddenly the truck was coming to her side maan thought omg

Mk:" omg yeh Larki pagal hai samne se truck aaraha hai aur yeh kitne maze se waha khari hai"
Maan quickly came out from his car and run to her, now the truck was just 7 feets away
Maan grabbed her arm and pulled her towards him, she collided to his stone chest, the people were around gulps their saliva, and that girl who was none other then geet was shocked what happened
Maan shouts angirly
Mk:" omg andhi ho kya Dekh kar nahin chal sakti sirf saat feet ki duri pe tha woh truck agar mein nahin aata tau tum khoon mein lipti hui hoti, what the hell of you think of yourself"
Geet had tears in her eyes and said
G:" I am sorry mein woh"
Just then rajji came
R:" didi kya hua aap theek hona"

Precap: maan:" what"


😲 😲 Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 12 years ago

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Part:-4

G:" mein theek hu rajji tu kaha thi"
R:" sorry didi"
R :" aapka buhat buhat shukariya aapne meri didi ki jaan bachaiye"
Mk:" it's okay par aapko dehaan rakhna chahiye"
R:" meri didi Dekh nahin sakti"
Maan was shocked
Mk:" what"
R:" ji haa isliye unhein pata nahin chala"
G:" aapne meri jaan bachaiye uskeliye shukariya"
Maan was still lost in her, her beautiful eyes her lucious lips
R:" aap theek hai"
M:?"
R:" hello"
Mk:" haa"
R:" aap theek hai"
Mk:" haa mein theek hu... I am sorry mujhe nahin pata tha ke aap nahin sakti"
G:" koi baat nahin ismein aapki koi galti nahin hai"
Mk:" thanks mein chalta hu bye"
R&g:" bye"
Maan sit in his car and went to home"
Rajji and geet also went home
R:" pata hai didi yeh admi dekhne mein tau buhat dangerous lag raha tha"
G:" kyun"
R:" kaafi gusse wala tha aap ne Sunna nahin"
G:" par jesa bhi hai usne meri jaan bachaiye hai isliye mere woh babaji ki tarah hi hai"
R:" kya baat hai didi" teased her
G:" chup kar chal abhi"

In khuraana mansion:-
Dadima was in hall reading magazine
D:" are maan aap aagaye"
Maan didn't notice her because he was lost in gets dreams
D:" maan maan maannn"
Maan:" kya hua dadima Sab theek haina"
D:" sab kuch tau theek hai par aap theek nahin lag rahe"
Mk:" kyun mujhe kya his hai"
D:" yeh tau aaphi kau pata hoga"
Mk:" aesa kuch nahin hai"
D:" kahin koye hue lag rahe hai"
Mk:" mein theek hu mein thak Gaya hu mein apne room mein jaaraha hu"
D:" theek hai shaam ko dinner keliye aajaiye ga hmm"
He nodded and left to his room dadima was still in some confusion
D:" kuch tau hua hai maan ko"
She went to kitchen
Maan was in his room
He was still lost in her thoughts
Mk:" kya hogaya hai tujhe baar baar woh Larki kyun mere khayalo mein aarahi hai o god"
He was still remembering her beautiful hazel eyes , her lips her beautiful hairs
Mk:" ahhh stop it maan "
He went to take bath
After half an hour he came back from his shower and went downstairs for dinner, dadima was waiting for him
Maan was still lost in her
D:" kya kaye ge aap"
Mk:"?"
D:" Maan"
Mk:?"
She shake him
Mk:" jee"
D:" kya baat hai hum kaafi der se aapko notice kar rahe hai kaha koye hue hai aap"
Mk:" kuch nahin bas business ke baare mein soch raha tha"
D:" business ya phir kuch aur"
He looked at her
Mk:" Aesi koi baat nahin hai"
D:" aacha chaliye khaana kha lijiye"
Mk:" jee"
He start eating and again lost in her eyes
And dadima notices this
D:" kahin pyaar ka chakar tau nahin" she thought
Mk:" dadima Dev ne aur kuch kaha phone pe"
D:" aapko miss kar rahe the"
Maan smiles little bit

Precap:- dadima meets geet

Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 12 years ago

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