ff meri zindagi Maan... part 34 pg 139 - Page 5

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Part:- 7

N:-" kaise hai maan verrji" she said with lustful eyes on maan
Maan looked at her angrily mand said
Mk:" Dev tumhara Kaam kaisa chal raha hai"
D:" absolutely fantastic bro"
Da:" chalo buhat baatein hogayi Dev Naintara aap log thake hue aaye hai jaakar aaram kar lijiye"
D:" jee dadima"
Both Dev and dadima left from there now only maan and naintara were in the hall ma'am was about to go Naintara stops him and said
N:" Maan itna gussa... Aacha Mahon hota" she said with evil smile
Mk:" mujhe tumhari ghatia aur fazool ke baton mein koi interest nahin hai samjhi tum" he said angrily
Naintara came near to him and put her hands on his chest and playing with his buttons
N:" comn maan don't be so hyper, you know how handsome you r, you I love u"
Maan was like he will burst out any moment, he jerks her away and she fall on floor
Mk:" how dare u tumhari himmat kesi hui mere se is tarah ki bakwas karne ki.., if u ever try to touch me again then I will kill u mind it, if I am tolerating u in my house so that not means that u can do anything listen u r my brothers wife and stay in ur limits, don't u ever try to cross ur limits again i hate u and always i will" he left from there
Naintara get up from there and said to herself
N:" Tum kuch bhi karlo tumhe mein apna bana kar ho rahungi sweetheart" and smiled evilly
She went to her room saw Dev putting his clothes in wardrobe
She hugged him behind and said
N:" r u not tired" she said huskily
Dev turned around and put his both hands on her waist and pull her towards him and
Dev:" where were u sweetheart I was waiting for u" he said nuzzling his nose on her neck
N:" sorry baby I was in hall"
D:" hmm"
Poor Dev didn't knew her intentions because he loves her very much
Dev picked her up and put her on bed and kissed her all over her face, she did the same thing to Dev and both slept for a while

At night:-
R:" didi eat something"
G:" I am not hungry you eat"
R:" what happened didi"
G:" I don't know rajji but today i am missing mom dad very much"
Raaji saw tears in her eyes and hugged her tightly
R:" you know what didi you gave me everything, even mom and dad's love, you never let me miss them, you are my everything, you know what one day mom told me that ek rajkumar aayega aur woh aapko apne saath humesha keliye lejaiye, aapko buhat pyaar dega, her khushi aapki ankhon mein kabhi ansoo nahin aane dega, aapko har takleef se bacheye, aap dekhna aapke saare dukho ko aapna bana lega, aap dekhna"
G:" no one is here to marry me, and he will never come, who will marry a blind girl like me haa tell me who will marry a blind girl no one no one" she was crying and hugged her tightly
R:" nahin didi I know he will come one day, he will I am sure he will come and and give you all happiness, now u r my sweet didi plz don't cry"
G:" sorry I also made u cry"
R:" chalo didi I am hungry, and if u will not eat then I will also not anything"
G:" okay baba comn let's eat something"
R:" that's like my sweet didi"
Both eat their dinner with laughing and jokes
And rajji was seeing her laughing and praying to her babaji
R:" babaji meri didi ko sari khushiya dena"

In khuraana mansion:-
Dev, Naintara and dadima were waiting for maan on dining table, no one starts dinner without him
Especially Dev
D:" bro. Where are you I am hungry come fast" he shouted from downstairs
Mk:" coming" also shouted from upstairs
Maan came downstairs and sit on his chair
Mk:" cmon Dev let's start"
D:" thank god you came where were u"
Mk:" I was doing some important work"
N:" cmon veerji thora time humare saarth bhi spend kijiye" she said looking at him with hungry eyes
Mk:" I don't like wasting my time on silly things" he said coldly but also anger in his eyes which was not unoticed by Dev, Dev know he don't like her but he don't know the reason why
D:" okay cmon let's eat I am very hungry"
Nanintara was eating less and looking at maan more, Maan noticed all this but don't want cerate a scenes in front if his brother and dadima, he quickly finished his dinner
Maan left from there and went to study room.
After dinner Dev also went to study room. He want to spend time with his bro
Dev knocks the door
Mk:" yes" busy with some files
D:" bro"
Mk:" are Dev Tum aao andar " he closed his files and sit with his bother on couch
D:" I am sorry bro kahin aap busy tau busy the"
Mk:" no I was just looking some files but you here something important"
D:" ahh no I just want to spend some time with my bro"
Maan smiled

Precap:- Mk:" dadima meri shaadi keliye Larki dundna shuru kar dijiye"


Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 12 years ago

first one...yeah!!!!!! I hope Raji ki baat jaldi se sach ho jaye...No Maaneet moments...aab iski saza hai...do another update and that too with loads of Maaneet moments,...please

Originally posted by: ritzy09

first one...yeah!!!!!! I hope Raji ki baat jaldi se sach ho jaye...No Maaneet moments...aab iski saza hai...do another update and that too with loads of Maaneet moments,...please

You're sazaa On my sarkhon 😃

awesome update

wow i loved it !! precap sounds intersting ..

Part:-8

Mk:" you... Here something important" he said casually
D:" bas i want to spend some time with my bro"
Maan smiled at him and said
Mk:" okay sit"
Both sit on couch"
Mk:" so Dev how is your work going in Canada, is everything okay"
D:" absolutely bro everything is okay, I was missing you that's why I said Naintara I want to meet my family and Naintara was also very happy from my decision"
Mk:" how long you are going to stay here"
D:" ahh 8 months"
Mk:" okay"
D:" any problem bro"
Mk:" no not at all"
D:" I have a request bro"
Mk:" what"
D:" you will be angry" he said with funny face
Maan smiled at his antics
Mk:" no cmon say I will not be angry" he said with smiled
D:" promise"
Mk:" oh god cmon Dev you are behaving like a kid"
D:" bcz I know you will be angry"
Mk:" if you said this again then I will be angry"
Dev:" r u sure"
Maan glare at him angrily, Dev quickly said
D:" I want to see my bhabhi"
Maan was shocked at shouts
Mk:" whattt that's what you were trying to say me from past 20 minutes"
Dev smiled nervously
D:" yes I want to see my sister in law "
Maan looked at him with angry eyes
D:" why have I no right to see my bhabhi" he said innocently with baby face
Mk:" plz Dev I don't want to discuss this topic"
D:" why bro why you know how much dadima want all this, she want to see her elder daughter in law, it's her wish what's bad in this, I don't think so cmon now u r behaving like a child, I also want to see my bhabhi, how many times dadima said to you about marrige, can't you fulfill her wish"
Maan had tears in his eyes and said
Mk:" I know dadima want to see her daughter in law but don't know why my mind say something else and heart something else, I don't want hurt someone, I am fully dead from inside Dev, I am fully dead from inside, i don't want someone cheat me again bcz this this time I will not survive, I will dead, after sameera's cheat I am fully shattered, I don't someone else in my life, I don't want someone, I am shattered Dev" he said while crying bitterly
Dev hugged him tightly, he also had some tears in his eyes and said
D:" you have to bro you have to control yourself, every girl is not just like sameera, you have to forget her, you have to throw her out of your mind and heart, you have to take one step more bro you have to, just one step then you'll see everyone will love you, they are scared from your anger, just love them bro then see how everyone will love you, just one more step hmm"
Maan smiled at him and said
Mk:" I will try "
D:" that's like my bro"
Both hugged each other once again and maan said
Mk:" now cmon its very late now you must be tired go and sleep I will see you tomorrow"
D:" you are also looking tired, u also go and take some rest"
Mk:" yeah good night"
D:" good night bro"
Dev left from there and Maan sit on his chair, thinking what just happened now
Maan closed his eyes and saw beautiful hazel eyes, he didn't opened his eyes bcz he want to see her beautiful eyes, her beautiful face
Mk:" mera tumse koi rishta nahin hai par phir bhi aesa kya jadu kar diya hai tumne mujh per ke ankhe kholu tau tum nazar aati ho ankhe band karu tau Tum nazar aati ho, kyun kar rahi ho Tum mere saath aesa, why u r doing this to me"
Maan opened his eyes and saw someone standing near the window in beautiful white anarkali, her hair were fully opened she was looking gorgeous
He went to her and shocked to see her, yes geet his geet
Mk:" you" he said softly
G:" you were thinking about me right?" she said with beautiful smile on her face
Maan also smiled back
Mk:" Tum yahan pe" he whispered

(Tere naam se jee lo tere naam se mar jaon
Tere jaan ke sadke mein kuch aesa kar jaon.)

Geet caressed his cheeks with her hand, Maan closed his eyes and enjoying her touch, he was feeling like inheaven

(Tune kya kar dala mar gayi mein mit gayi ohh ji haa ji hogayi mein Teri dewani dewani Teri dewani dewani)

Maan opened his eyes and she was not there, he gets scared she can't see where is she, where is his geet o god where is she, he was moving here and there looking for her madly, then he saw someone laying on couch
He runs there and saw his geet, yes she was his geet, on one can separate his geet from him
Maan sits beside her and bends down and kissed her forehead

(ishq junoon jab had se bhar jaye haste haste aashiq suli char jaye,
Ishq ka jadu sir char kar bole
Ishq ka jadu sir char kar bole
Khub laga lo pehre raste rab khole, yahin ishq de marzi hai yahin rab di marzi hai, tere bin jeena kesa aa gudh garzi hai)

Maan kissed her eyes on by one, kissed her nose, then her cheeks, very softly he kissed her chin, not hurting her

(tune kya kar dala mar gayi mein mit gayi mein ohh ji haa ji, Teri dewani dewani... Teri dewani dewani)

Mk:"yeh kya kar diya tumne mere saath"
Geet get up and put her head on his shoulders and whispered
G:" I love you"
Geet put her hand on his eyes
Maan opened his eyes and shocked to see her no where
Mk:" kaha gayi mujhe tau tumhara naam bhi nahin pata"
Maan was finding her everywhere
Mk:" kahin woh Sab mera khwaab tau nahin tha, woh yahan kese ho sakti hai" Maan hit his head with hand and smiled to himself and said
Mk:" aaj kal tu khuli ankhon se bhi khwaab Dekh rahan maan suder jaa" Maan smiled widely
Mk:" aab tau tumse milna hi pare ga mujhe miss beautiful warna Tum mujhe aese hi pareshaan karti raho gi" Maan smiles naughtily
He went to his room and slept with beautiful smile on his face

In morning:-
Everyone were waiting for maan for breakfast
He came down with little bit smile on his face, he was still thinking about his miss beautiful
Dadima, Dev opened their mouth in big wide O, they never saw him smiling like from past 5 years, they both were hell shocked, dadima and Dev looked at each other with shocking face and Naintara smiled evily
Da:" Dev beta kahin hum khawab tau nahin Dekh rahe"
D:" pata nahin dadima mujhe lagta hai mein bhi khawab hi Dekh rahu" he said with mouth wide open
Maan came and sit on chair
Mk:" Nakul"
Nakul came with his coffee, his hands were shivering, he was scaring so much, he thought he is gone today
Nakul:" so...soo...sorry bhare saheb"
Mk:" it's okay"
Dev choked water which he was drinking and looked at Maan with shocked face
Mk:" r u okay what happened"
D:" I am okay bro I think you should see a doctor"
Maan was like what the hell
Mk:" why"
Dev checked his forehead and said
D:" r u okay"
Mk:" what silly question is this Dev" he said irritatingly
D:" you are so cold today"
Mk:" what"
D:" no nothing"
They heard a sound and saw Nakul on floor in unconscious loll
Poor guy couldn't digest maan's coldness and faint
Everyone were shocked
Mk:" o god what happened to him Dev checked him"
D:" bro I am not a doctor" he said with funny face
Maan glared at him angrily
Mk:" I mean splash some water on his face"
D:" oh"
Dev took some water and splashes on his face, Nakul get up with jerk like he saw a lion in front of him ofcourse he saw a lion haha Maan he was a lion
Mk:" what happened to you"
Na:" no.. No nothing sahib ji"
Mk:" get back to work now"
Na:" ji"

In geet's house
R:" didi chale mandir"
G:" haa bas aayi"
Geet came in beautiful golden chudidar and her hair were half closed she was looking Wowww
G:" let's go rajji"
R:" wow didi you are looking too good"
G:" really"
R:" hmm"
G:" okay cmon let's go"
R:" you know didi pandit ji said all khuraana members are coming today in mandir"
G:" tau"
R:" you are not excited "
G:" for what"
R:" I heard you know the owner of khuraana constructions Maan Singh khurrana, he is very handsome, good looking"
G:" so.. now come we are getting late"
R:" seems like you are not interesting him"
G:" why will I be interested in him"
R:" bcz every girl love him"
G:" cmon now"
Both left for mandir

In khuraana mansion:-
D:" we should leave now"
Mk:" where are we going"
D:" to mandir" she know Maan will never come
D:" let's go Dev cmon Naintara"
D:" yeah let's go"
N:" yeah let's go"
They were about to leave when maan stop them and said
Mk:" wait I am also coming"
Dadima was shocked, now Naintara was also shocked and Dev was going to faint bcz he know his brother never believes in god
D:" now seriously you need a doctor"
Mk:" shut up Dev I am also coming now let's go other wise khuraana family will be late for mandir"
Dadima was very happy for him and said
D:"Hume humara maan wapis mil raha hai" she said with tears in her eyes
Maan sit in car with dadima and Dev and Naintara in another car

Geet and rajji came to mandir and meet to pandit ji
P:" Tum dono aagayi aaj pura khuraana parivar aaraha hai"
G:" jee Hume pata chala"
P:" savitri ji ne kaha tha ke woh is bar bhi tumhari pyari si awaz Sunna chahti hai"
Geet smiled and said
G:" zaroor"
R:" didi aap yahin pe rehna mein waha churiyan dekhne ja rahi hu theek hai"
Geet smiled at her little sister
G:" okay but come soon"
R:" okay bye"
G:" bye"
Raaji left from there, just everyone heard the car sounds and girls held their breath maan Singh khuraana is coming o my god
Dadima, Dev, Naintara and Maan get out from car
Maan was wearing white shirt with black trouser he was looking freaking hot
They all came in
P:" namaste savitri ji"
Da:" ji namaste"
P:" kese ho maan bete"
Mk:" jee mein theek hu"
P:"aur beta tum, choti bahu rani Je kese hai aap Sab log"
D:" jee Sab theek hai"
P:" pooja shuru kare savitri ji"
Da:" ji zaroor... Ahh pandit ji kya woh Larki"
P:" jee woh yahin pe hai aarti wahi gaayi gi"
dadima was very happy and said
Da:" jee shukariya"
Pandit went to geet and asked to start the pooja
G:" jee mein shuru karti ho"
Geet start singing, everyone stand there with their fold hand
Maan was like wow
Mk:" yeh awaz kahin Sunni hai" he said to himself
He didn't see Geet because her back was facing him
The people were enjoying the aarti especially Maan
He never came here before but he was enjoying her sweet voice, dadima looked at him and smiled at him, Maan prayed in his heart
Mk:" meine kabhi kisi bhagwan par yakeen nahin kiya par pata nahin kyun aaj pehli baar aap pe yakeen karne ka dil kar raha hai, ek baar sirf ek baar mujhe usse Milwa dijiye, taras Gaya hu mein uski ek jhalak dekhne keliye plz ek baar mujhe usse Milwa dijiye"
After aarti geet turns around, maan's eyes were closed, he saw her beautiful face again and smiled, he slowly opened his eyes and saw the same girl his geet yes she was his geet
Maan was staring at her madly he thought he was dreaming but no she was in real
Geet took one step forward and and she slipped and about to fall when two pairs of strong arm hold her
Geet's eyes were closed her dupatta fell on her face, covering her beautiful face, Maan was angry on that dupatta, the biggest wall between them
Maan slowly put his hand on her dupatta which was on her face, he looked at her beautiful face, her eyes were still closed, she was feeling the beautiful sensation in her body when he touched her face,
Yes she was in real his geet was in real
Geet slwoly opened her eyes she thought in her mind
G:" why I am feeling this touch so familiar why, who is he, do I know him, no how cud I, why I am feeling his touch so peaceful why o god what is happening to him"
Everyone looking at them with shocked face especially dadima and Dev
Da:" kya hum Jo soch rahe hai aap bhi wahi soch rahe hai Dev"
D:" haa dadima pehli baar kisi Larki bro touch kar rahe hai she must be very special"
Naintara was burning with jealousy and thought in her mind
N:" how dare she how dare she touch my Maan how dare" she was really angry
Maan and geet both were still lost in their world
P:" geet beti tum theek ho"
Both came from their trance and Maan felt embaressed
G:" Maaf kijiye ga woh mein.."
Mk:" mujhe pata hai aap Dekh nahin sakti"
Geet and everyone stood there shocked
Da:" did he know her"
D:" don't know maybe"
G:" jee aapko kese pata hai"
Mk:" mein aapse pehle mil chuka hu"
G:" from me when and where"
Mk:" when I saved you from that truck accident remember"
Geet remembered that accident and smiled at him
G:" oh tau aap woh hai"
Mk:" yes I am the same one"
G:" kesa itafaq hai us din bhi aapne mujhe bachaya aur aaj bhi"geet smiled
P:" bete Tum inhe janti ho"
G:" jee inho ne hi mujhe accident se bachaya tha"
P:" ohh yeh Maan Singh khuraana hai savitri ji ke sabse bhare pote"
Geet was shocked Maan Singh khuraana the same handsome guy which was raaji talking about
G:" aap Maan Singh khuraana hai"
Mk:" kyun aapko mera naam aacha nahin laga" he said with naughtiness
G:" nahin Aesi baat nahin hai" she said while smiling
Dadima came near them and asked
Da:" geet bete kesi hai aap"
Mk:" geet" maan whispered and smiled
G:" namaste dadima mein bilkul theek hu aap kese hai"
Da:" hum bhi bilkul theek hai bete buhat khushi hoi aapko ek baar phir yahan Dekh kar"
G:" mujhe bhi buhat khushi hui"
Da:"aapki choti behan nazar nahin aarahi"
G:" ji woh yahin hogi"
Da:" aacha"
Da:" bete humare chote pote aur unki patni bhi aayi hai Maan ke saath"
Geet smiled at maan's name
Da:" yeh humare saath hi khare hai humare chothe pote Dev aur unke patni Naintara"
G:" jee namaste"
D:" namaste buhat khushi hui aapse mil kar"
Maan was staring at her madly and dadima noticed this and smiled
Just then rajji came
R:" didi mein aagayi"
She looked at maan and said
R:" jee aap yaha pe" she said with surprising face
Maan looked at her
G:" rajji yeh Maan ji hai meta matlab hai maan Singh khuraana, dadima ke pote"
R:" what is he Maan Singh khuraana"
G:" kya hua"
R:" nothing"
Da:" kesi hai aap rajji"
R:" mein theek hu dadima aap kesi hai"
Da:" humhe aab chalna chahiye... Apna kayaal rakhiye ga geet aur humse dobara zaroor milyega hmm"
G:" jee aap bhi"
P:" rajji beta yeh pooja ki thaali andar rakh wado"
R:" jee pandet ji"
Dev, nainatara and dadima left from there
Now only Maan and geet were there
Mk:" chale hu geet"
Mk:" if u don't mind can I call u geet"
G:" it's okay you can call me geet" she smiled
Mk:" chalta hu apna kayaal rakhiye ga"
Maan was about to go when he whispered in her ears
When maan ear touched geet's cheek , she shivers and blushed
Mk:" apna kayaal rakhna ho sakta hai agli baar mein na hu tumhe apni bahon mein thamne keliye"
Geet blushed hardly, her cheeks were red from shying Maan notices and smiled at her
Mk:" bye" he whispers
G:" bye" she also whispers and blushed
Maan left from there and sit in car, dadima noticed his smile and asked
Da:" kya baat hai beta hai aaj aap buhat muskara rahe hai"
Maan looked at her and said
Mk:" no nothing"
Dadima put her hand on his and said
Da:" Hume geet buhat pasand hai"
Maan looked at her with shocking face did she know anything
Mk:" kya matlab"
Da:" hum aapki dadi hai hum Sab kuch jaante hai"
Mk:" you know everything what do you mean?"
Da:" you luv geet right" she smiled widely
Maan was shock and said
Mk:" nothing is like that"
Da:" cmon Maan I know you love her, I saw that love in ur eyes you have to accept this"
Maan looked at her and smiled and said
Mk:" yes I love geet"
Dadima hadTears of happiness
Da:" finally I found my elder daughter in law, she is very sweet, very beautiful,very caring I know she can't see, I don't care once she get married to you we will took her to hospital, geet is vey good girl and I know she will be very happy"
Mk:" I know geet is very good girl , I never seen a gril like her, she is very brave Girl I love her so much dadima, I can't live without her"
Da:" I know you love her very much"
Maan hugged dadima they reached home

Geet was still blushing and rajji came there and saw geet smiling and blushing, rajji was confused
R:" didi what happened to you are you okay"
G:" yeah I am okay chale"
R:" haa chalo"
Pandit ji came
P:" Tum dono jaa rahi ho"
G:" ji pandit ji kaafi der hogayi hai humhe chalna chahiye"
P:" theek hai beta aram se jaana hmm"
Geet smiled at him and said
G:" jee namaste"
P:" namaste beta"
Both left from there


Precap:- maneet moments

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