MRITYUNJAI-Some Love Stories Never Die MGff cmpltd - Page 40

Superb update dear.
sory fr d late cmment
actualy my board exm f 12th r on so busy for it prptn.

Hi sayanee
finally complete this
After read this I'm speechless
it's giving me goose bump
awesome, brilliant, beautiful STORY , parts
loved them
loved the maaneet conversations, emotions, it's giving us ans of many unanswered questions
so beautifully depicted the scene of maaneet
loved it
I fall in love with maaneet of this FF
continue soon.

P.S Tara Tari continue kar re noi roj ekhne post karbo continue kar continue kar bole

awesome.. amai eta thekeo add kore ne

dev did everything for her...to save her ...but in all this an innocent girl got sacrificed...

Waiting for your lovely update 😍

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Waiting for your lovely update 😍

Originally posted by: Tammana_Maaneet

awesome update Sayanee...
loved it... it was just lovely...
i was going with the flow...
the pauses at each ones' mind fights was awesome...
Devdutt realising his sin,
Rajalakshami not committing suicide,
Maan's love realisation...
everything went in a gr8 flow...
so he confessed it to her...yippie...
continue soon, wud be waiting...

Originally posted by: rsroopali

awesomeee

luved ittt

n its just true tht luv makes u blind seeing devdutt

but atleast he is remorseful n those stupid panditsss just 2 satisfy there urges use god names 

n ;uved whn geet's 1 song can bring a smile on devdutt face

it shows wt place geet has in devdutt's life 

but hope he abolishes the custom 

n maan haiii

im speechlesss

the way he told geet to be his wife was just aweee

i was like wowww awesomeee

n luved tht rajlakshmi did nt drown her self n will wait for her luv shantanu

awesomeee

hatsss offf

Originally posted by: 97531

Awesome update dr,

loved it,

the way u described Devdutt's character is superb, 

A great man with values nd poor creature in guilt,

his love for Geetasri forced him to this to rajlakshmi,

but he riped Rajlakshmi's soul for his LOVE can't decrease the rate of his SIN.

maan asked her to married to him 👏 , that's great,

do continue soon dr,

will b waiting.

Originally posted by: 286pearl

its really excllent update in every manner...

thier maan understand her through raj laxmi...

n raj laxmi decide meet his soulmate ... wow

devdutt is nice for geet be his remors 4 raj laxmi...

 

i wish devdutt is savor of geet n manendra from

madanmohan tample preirs or say volchres...

 

very impressive n thoughtfully written ...

yr gist of writing is mindblowing...

 

i just imagine a film on this story ... wow...