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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesomeee!
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Awesome update,,,

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Posted: 12 years ago
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7 cmmnts haan though i wntd next update only aftr 10 cmmnts bt  next tym i wnt 10+1 cmmnts n yaa hit d lyk button too
dis updates 2nd prt made me almost cry yes i ws crying while typing so hope u guys lyk it
part 8-(its long)

Part 8

As they enter the disco the boys head towards the bar and the girls find themselves a comfoting couch

Adi n rohan orders drinks for themselves and maan orders three apple juice

Maan gives the girls their juice and sits with them whereas muski thnxx maan and goes towads the dance floor pulling geet with her

Then muski pulls rohan to the dance floor and both dance to the tunes while adi is still drinking maan and geet are standing there and watching

Geet-you don't dance or don't know how to dance

Maan- you bet,I thought you are not in a mood

Geet- I thought you are not,you are having apple juice???

Maan- I don't drink other than office parties and that also minimal just to raise the toast

Geet- I don't drink at all but for me being in a nashiiilllaaa mood alchohol is not needed you wanna see

Maan- go ahead let me see you groove…………………

Geet pulls maan to the dance floor along with her

Maan- leave me baba…………………..

Geet-nup not at all and now be ready to see how well you can dance………………

Then the song changes to hot and cold by katy perry--------------------

Geet places maans hand at her waist  and looks challengingly at maan

You change your mind
Like a girl changes clothes
Yeah you, PMS
Like a bitch
I would know

And you over think
Always speak
Cryptically

I should know
That you're no good for me

[CHORUS]
Cause you're hot then you're cold
You're yes then you're no
You're in then you're out
You're up then you're down
You're wrong when it's right
It's black and it's white
We fight, we break up
We kiss, we make up
(you) You don't really want to stay, no
(but you) But you don't really want to go-o
You're hot then you're cold
You're yes then you're no
You're in then you're out
You're up then you're down

Maan accepts the chalenge and tithetens his grip

Both move their hips to the groove

We used to be
Just like twins
So in sync
The same energy
Now's a dead battery
Used to laugh bout nothing
Now you're plain boring

I should know that
You're not gonna change

[CHORUS]

Someone call the doctor
Got a case of a love bi-polar
Stuck on a roller coaster
Can't get off this ride

You change your mind
Like a girl changes clothes

 

Maan stretches his hand and geet rolls and comes to him,he drive his other hand from her hair sensually down her waist

Geet shivers and clutches his shirt tightly

Cause you're hot then you're cold
You're yes then you're no
You're in then you're out
You're up then you're down
You're wrong when it's right
It's black and it's white
We fight, we break up
We kiss, we make up
You're hot then you're cold
You're yes then you're no
You're in then you're out
You're up then you're down
You're wrong when it's right
It's black and it's white
We fight, we break up
We kiss, we make up
(you) You don't really want to stay, no
(but you) But you don't really want to go-o
You're hot then you're cold
You're yes then you're no
You're in then you're out
You're up then you're down, down... 


Maan forses her to look into his eyes and she gives him a sweet smile that takes his breath away

The sensual song no longer was having an effect on them

They were into their own world two trained salsa dancer or two trained souls no longer could be differenciated

Maan picks her high up and she throws her head back and enjoys the new sensation

Then both again come face to face only to know that yes they were something

Rest all in the disco were gaping at them and appreciating their passionate dance

Yes that day they were drugged …………………….by each other

As the song came to stop they came back to their conciousness only to be greeted by a smirking muski ,rohan and adi

The three were questioning them with their eyes and maaneet were looking down as if they have committed some serious crime

Then to lighten the mood adi-im damn hungry so I think we can treat ourselves to the resturant next to this lane

The walk to the resturant was silent and as they seated themselves ,all were caught in an awkward situation

Muski- guys nice dance

Rohan- ofcource maan is trained salsa dancer

Geet-really you know maan even im trained in salsa and contemporary

Adi- gr88888888888888 jodi

Maan coughed,geet nervously looked down while rohan and muski giggled

Adi- I mean in dance

Soon their order arrived and they enjoyed their dinner and went back to the hotel

In the lobby-

Adi- I had gr88 fun today………oops phone guys need to go byeeeaaa

Maan- pinky ka phone

Muski-whos she

Rohan-KC ki employee

Geet- and why will an employee call someone at 1:00 night

Maan-because shes his ahem ahem tooo

Muski –oh wow

Maan- yup meri saali sahiba is very helpful kind and sweet

Geet- im soo excited tommorow is finally the wedding day

Maan-lag to aise raha hai shaadi in dono ki nahi tumhaari hai

Muski-geets always like that…….meri geet side hugs her

Rohan-mer saali

Geet-ooowww my sweet jijaji

Maan-meri ummm pata nahi

Geet after hearing this blushes and even hugs maan and whispers into his ears good night mr.pata nahi

All head towards their rooms after wishing each other goodbyeaasss

 

The next morning maan and rohan are having tea and maan becomes very serious and asks,

Maan-Addiction is different from love

Infatuation is different from love

Want and need is different from love

But are not all of above part of love??? How can we differenciate between them and love,what is love???

Is it freindship?

Is it attraction or what we define as crush in our teenage ages??

What does it mean when people say love is life……………………..then am I not leaving???

Is someones being in my life immportant,will it change me,affect me

How can someone be a part of me

How can someone be as important to me as my breath?????

Rohan-love is where you will like if she can feel your heartbeat

Want her to be part of your breath

Be a part of her body
let yourself hide in her embrace

Be her dreams,destiny……………sacrifise yourself to her

When somebody searches for you they should find you in her eyes

Be a man for the man

When you are in love you will accept her eith all her faults

Let her rule you,let her try to improve you

You will only want her for support cause she will always stand by you

Just hold her hands at the correct time and she will be yours, else you may loose her in a manner to never get her back

Remmember maan always remmember one thing---care for her,love her,support her cause she will return all those to you ,but after owning her if you don't keep your promise ,you will simply loose and be the cause of her death,may be not physically but you will rip appart her soul and that will be the worse condition for you.

Maan- but why me??

Rohan-2 words maan---- guilt and remorse

Loosing her will not allow you to die or live

You will be covered by such darkness from where none will be able to save you other than her.

Never loose her maan never,cause she will die sattisfied that she has loved and cared for you as long as she was there,but you will be left behind in this cruel world alone ,desserted and a living body dead soul

Her eyes will haunt you

Her dreams which remained unfulfilled will haunt you

maan holds his hands but rohan continues-maan just love her that is enough for her and will take care of her

if you physically be present and not mentally she will feel the void,she will die…………………..only you will be able to save her but may be she will be back to you physically and  leave you to repent

she will still cry for you but will not be able to help you

and if she is able to do so name her your angel

at  that time adi enters the room and says and faces a serious faced maan and a teary rohan

adi caughs-guys whats the matter,rohan why are you crying????awww I know you will miss your bachelor days and you must be thinking of the future tortures ,don't worry ill tell muski bhabhi not to beat you

all the three of them have a laugh just then rohan gets up suddenly and leaves them and goes to muskis room where all the ladies and geet is sitting

rohan goes  suddenly hugs muski ,sobs and hides his face in the crook of her neck

muski got worried and started enquiring to which he says between tears looking at her eyes

rohan- jaan just stay with me till my last breath ,there is nothing else I expect from you cause the rest you know to handel,aaj jo rishta me ham bandhne ja rahe hai usme kabhi akela na chod dena…………………..muskaan meri taraf dekho …………………….you are not a part but my life and more than that tum ho to mai hu nahi to mai kuch nahi

shaadi ke saath vachan shayad vidhi ke liye mayne  rakhta hai parantu mere kiye sirf tumhara mere saath hona mayne rakhta hai

muski tiptoes ,understands the depth of his words and kisses his fore head and says only a sentence-rohan tum mere pehchaan ho,mai pyaar tumse dil se man se tan se karti hun,so saath to rahungi hi

then to lighten the mood------

aur agar phir kabhi kuch ulta sidha soch bhi liya to tum to dimagh ke doctor ho thik kar dena use and bring me back on the track

rohan hugs her back and then realises that he is sorrounded by all his sasuraal relatives and runs away from there

geet comes and says-muski im truly happy for you

and thinks kaash mere liye bhi aisa ho

muski could well understand her-geet tughe bhi koi milega ,isse acha,tughe geet se geetuu banane vala

and winks at her while geet looks at her desbeleivingly

precap-muski-rohan wedding n reception and maaneet back to delhi

kya who phir milenge???

Who will approach whom???

Or will they again bump on each other………………lolsss

 cmmmnt guys plsss

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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
loved the update...
it was emotional update..
the dialogues were awesome...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Awww that was soo sweet and beautiful!
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
wowww..so nice story...lvd it...pls update soon d nxt part n pls add me in ur pm list...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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9 lyks n 7 cmmnts well u give me 10 cmmnts n 15 lyks n u get next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
nice update...loved maan ka confusion regarding love...loved maaneet dance both lost in each other...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Waiting 4 upd. Pls upd soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 9-ppl plsss cmmnt more ...n hit the lyk button

The wedding night-----

Geet-whispers in muskis ears rohan messaged me that baarat has arrived

Muski- geet im nervous,bhai(muski younger bro vicky) do something na

Bhai-dii relax ,you are behaving as if you are sitting for an iit examination ,just chill

Geet- don't worry muski rohan will manage everything and seeying him you will forget all the worries …………………..,hope so

On the other hand -----

Rohan on ghoda whispers in adis ear-im nervous,I can fall any moment from this horse

Maan- shall I help,im very much tempted to ride the horse

Rohan- why not   …………… I and muski are already over with court marriage, you climb on the horse and  take the baaraat to muskis house I am quiet sure that wahape tughe koi na koi yo mil hi jayegi

Adi who is intended on pulling maans leg says-koi ya koi already fixed hai you know shes hot and shes cold

Maan doesn't say anything,just avoids the croed and goes ahead

At that moment he realised,

1. That in his teenage years he was never attracted to any girls because they used to treat him like a madhumakki ka chatta with them being the madhumakkis and apart from that he was very studious as he knew from a very young age that he had to take care of KC

2. When he was finally over with studies and joined the company he had a plan…………….. to make KC reach new hights

3. Finally after being the CEO  , owner of 81% of share of the company he finds his life boring and still ……………………….girls ufff,with that he came out of his deep thoughts or rayher was pulled out bythe loud noice of the trumpet but then he saw her standing beside muskis mom and a light smile touched his lips quiet unknown to him.

Muskis mom did the aarti and soon the beautifully decorated hall was filled with people,women discussing about their saarees and jwelleries ,men talking about stock market and stuffs

Though maan was modern ,a business tycoon but still he preffered to be a baaraati here,rohans friend and see to it that all the guests are comfortable

Maan ,adi and rohans dad helped rohan to be seated  at the mandap

Soon muski decended down the stairs wearing a heavy lehenga…………………as she passed by maan smiled at her and said aloud-hamari saali jii to bari khubsurat dikh rahi hai,muski smiled and whispered thayt lehenga is damn heavy.

As geet followed muski he whispered into her ears-aur hamari  saali sahiba ki dost to ………..hai subhan alla

Geet blushed and said- awww maanu is looking cho cute…………….cuteee pie

Maan-I cute…..ewwwon

Geet giggled

Soon the ceremony began and maan,geet and adi were an enthusiastic spectator to it.

At the time of bidaayi none except muskis mom cried,but recovered soon,these days be it daughter or son due to studies and later jobs children have to stay away from parents and so it doesn't matter much,but still maa ka dil

They had booked a special suite ,for the newly married couple and everyone called it an early night cause muski was not feeling well

Next morning------------

Geet,maan and adi knocked muski and rohans door at morning seven

Geet hugged muski as soon as she opened the door-------------

Geet-muski how are you feeling now

Muski-im absolutely fine

Maan- she was never unwell for not to be fine

Adi +geet-what do you mean

Rohan-muski and me wanted to avoid after marriage rituals sooo

Geet-huh……………besabri haan…………suhag raat manane ki itni jaldi

Rohan- geet ,maan and adi sit on the bed and listen to me first

Muski-don't scream or say it to anyone

Geet-what is it

Muski-im…. Im…… actually our court marriage was over a month before as you know

Rohan- and she is already 34 sooo

Maan- wait a minute……………………muski you are pregnant

Muski nodded,geet was about to scream but maan placed his hands on her mouth

Rohan-well for us its not a matter but for elders it is and they may create some issues

Later in the evening geet had a flight for that evening whreas maan and adis flight was next morning

Rohan-you are a wonderfull girl geet I thank muskaan for gifting me a sis

Adi-aadhi gharvali

Maan coughed

Muski intentionally-maan his pranks don't bother me much why does it affect you

Geet blushed and said-bye adi

Adi- bye geet hope we will meet soon and you do have my number

Geet turned to maan but couldn't say bye

Maan just came and hugged her and whispered –geet tum bahut achi ho,koi itni asani se mera dost nahi banta hai aur jo ek baar mere kareeb ata hai use mai door jane nahi deta so no byeaa

Geet came out of the hug and smiled and said-meet you later

Next morning even maan and adi took leave after praising for the superb reception party of last night

 Uff finally guys done with maaneet
+adi at mumbai now 3 will be back to delhi

Precap –ummm welll

Mere sapno ki pari kab ayegi tu

Oops  geet photographing 4 KCs add
cmmnt frnds plsss