lovely update...they are meeting so often now...good..precap is exciting..as far as other F's are concrened try In love with he enemy its awesome...seducing mR. perfect is also good
Originally posted by: chandreyeeroy
frnds i hv been reading maaneet n nly maaneet ffs for past almost 7-8 months,so i will lyk to dedicate my dis ff to sum splcl writers...
1)muskaan dii with all hr ffs(her ff truly magical ws d 1st ff i read ever)2)dilibadat-paulo diis ff r just gr88883)ffs lyk:you complete me4)the mystry girl5)a new dimension to love6)irrevocably yours7)remorse,immortal luv,enigma,n all saphires ffs8)kasak n maaneet mohabbtein10)naadiyaa diis ff spcly simply luvn yaa ofcource new york tyms n my irrestible kidnapperi will relly like to thnkk all of above ryters 4 dere ffs...if u all cum ovr sum interesting ffs plss let me also know na
Wonderful update...
luvd it..
cntnue soon..
Muski –um excuse me friends ,I think after the flight journey you will be tired ………..
Rohan-mmm yup see we have booked the entire wing a of this hotel for our guests and all the functions will be held on the gardens and the banquet halls
The manager arrives by that time and hands over geet her room keys
Geet- thnxx,,,,,hmm room no 208
Maan-oh wow mine is 207
Adi –and im so far from all of you 201……………baby face
Muski-nope adi you are quiet close to rohan's room 202
Adi smiles and says –I like my bhabhi
Muski-see roham maintain your figure else ill run away with adi he already seems to like me…………😉
Rohan-adi mera yaar hai who mughse kabhi gaddari nahi karega n rahi baat tumhaari……………..well I say geet is sexy too…………😛😛
Maan- chalo guys enough of teasing ………………..ill like to go 2 the room have to check some mails and attend some business calls
Adi nudges geet
Geet-maan I don't know ,may be I don't have any rights to say something but cant stop myself
Maan gives a questioning look-go ahead geet you can say whatever you want
Adi and rohan smirks while muski gives an approving look😆
Geet- I think you should keep business at a bay and engage yourself in the occasion fully…………..enjoy
(dramatic xpression)phir kal ho na ho…………………..😒
Everyone laughs at this
Maan-jo hukum mere aka
Adi- kya baat hai maan aaj suraj dakshin se ug rahi hai
Maan Whispers into his ears-adi,aaj apne jaise ek insaan se mila,hamari situations same hai but unhe handle karne ka tarika alag hai,shes much matured
Adi pats his back
In the evening ,maan ready and guess what he is wearing???a casual jeans and a polo t-shirt total casual look(haila hell look superb In tht but nt proper 4 a mehandi ceremony naaa!!!)
Adi comes to his room n shook his head in dissapoinment-maan wear something traditional na see like im wearing kurta pyjama
Maan-no not even in my dreams I hate that rope to be tied for the pyjama
Geet enters their room at that time and says- fine maan who told you to weat a pujama
Maan- geet wh wh…what ar….are u saying???
Geet-that instead of wearing a pyjama wear your jeans and wear a shervanins on top……….simple
Both maan and adi gives a small smile,huh dumb what happened to there super intellegent mind………………….why couldn't they think something like this…………..oh ya maan remmember your brains are personally booked by K.C.😕
Geet- I just came to say that when u all think of going down just give me a call too
Maan n adi nodded grinning foolishly as if they have been ordered by their teacher.
Awww…………………….
Maan barged into geets room only to find her in a towel jumping up and down with terror written all over her
Ohhh my god shes just………………….maan stop daydreaming ,but shes soo
Just like a nanhi pari who got scared seeying a mouse or something,little did he know that she was actually his pari his dream his soul
But do dreams come trueee,maan stop thinking and help her out else it will surely remain a dream
Maan-geet stop shouting ,what happened???
Geet-I ….maan……………..bathroom………………..mouse……………………oh god its jumping
Maan grinned huh I was near it's a mouse not a rat
He went to the bathroom only to find that the mouse was sitting in the bathing mug
He picked the mug and threw it out of the window and came out to declare
Maan-Geet mouse story finished
Geet felt releived only to overcome by shame soon and turned her back towards him…………..
He smiled and said –geet get ready I am waiting out……………..while going out he threw her churni at her
As soon as geet stepped out of her room both maan and adi's jaws were dropped,
Adi-oh wowwwowhow
Maan-geet…… lehenga………….purple n blue……………..u ……..r ………gorgeous
Geet-adi n maan stop staring please u both r making me feel concious,n any way you both r looking nice
Maan-not as amuch as you senorita
Adi-oh wow majnu maan haa
Pehli baar janab file aur presentation chodke ladki ki taareef kar rahe hai
Maan shot a draggering glance at adi,which adi least cared about
Geet was laughing at both of these
Maan was still thinking about het till they reached the banquet hall below
Oh god her slim waist,her milky skin,her beautifull brown eyes
Maan how many times should I tell you stop just stop………..oh god I think my hormones have suddenly become active and r jumping like that mouse
N my heart is beating faster than light
Adi whispers into maans ear as geet is talking to muski-maan stop staring this girl is seriously having great effects on you
Maan- adi I cant help it coz shes different she didn't throw herself at me,shes natural ,shes sooo
Adi- maan babu aap to gaye
Maan- adi I want to know her more …………………..i want to be her friend
Adi-we are staying here for 3 more days enough time for msk to accomplish a task na
Maan- adi I have to be…………..no I want to be just maan n not msk with her
Geet on the other hand is thinking about maan n tells muski-hes different,he did not make any move when I was in a towel in front of him,he helped me n tried not to make the situation embarassing…………………….
Muski-akhir mere rohan ka dost hai
Geet-huh yaya
Sooon after muski was done with her mehandi and then the sagai ki rasam began
Muski made rohan wear his ring first
Then rohan bent down on his knees and says in front of every1 –muskaan I never got a chance to formally propose you na so…………………………dr.muskaan patil will u be my life,my reason to live,breathe and …………………………ummm………..woh ek minute
Maan-whispers in his ears 'well u b my soul'
Rohan-haan will u b my soul
Muski-I know maan bhai is a shayar but rohan tell me onething hospital ke cases chodke 3 lines nahi yaad rah jate tumse
Rohan- who main to bas……………….
Geet- chaddo na muski now be a good girl and tell yes though aise proposal ke baad to koi bhi bhaag jayegi but he loves you a lot so maaf bhi karde na…………..
Muski with tears says- rohan jaan , I love you tooo…………..kya karu mai tumhara haan
Rohan- baad mai bahut kuch karna mere saath abhi ke liye haan bol do bas
N afer that rohan slipped the ring on her finger n kissed it got up n hugged her
She was blushing he was happy-cute rohan-muski jodi(awww kash koi mughe bhi aise propose kare.)
Maan and geet saw union of their friends a couple much in love in front of them………………..
Precap:geet walks through the lobby frustated…………….
Maan caals her and is shocked to see her in tears
Maan-what happened geet (wiping away her tears)
Geet-nothing
Maan firmly holds her by shoulders and demands an answer
Geet for the first time noticed a determination,a strong pillar who can support her………..
She walked towards her room and left the door open for maan to follow…………which he did
geet scared of mouse...
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