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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
okk frnds here is d special poem 4 dis ff which depicts all d emotions of dis ff all emotions of geet---------


naina tore bole,bole hame kaisi kaisi baate re
suraj birha ka dhale nahi 
kaise kate rate bolo piya re
kisne ye sindoori ranga hai rang
subah ke mathe pe bolo piya re

naina more bhole,bughe kaha
teri jhooti baate re
man ki hatheli pe rakha hai kya
kyun na bata tere palke uta ke
thora jatate hai piya more
thora chupate hai more piya se

naina tore bole hame kaisi kaisi baate re...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Hi

Nice FF, thank you very much please add me in your PM list 
your update is short expecting more from you

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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
hey ..
luved it alot..
geeet ne acchi advice di ...
thanks for the pm..
and maaneet meeting again at the wedding ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
nice start... pls make these updates longer 😊 waiting for more..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Awesome strt..❤️

cntnue soon...

add me in ur pm list..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
nice part!
cont soon!
add me to the pm list plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Loved ur FF
Pls add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28


PART 5-


Maan-Well the adress  is this one

Adi-yup maan well decorated gate na'''''our rohan atlast getting maried wow!!!

Chalo lets go inside

Maan- I told him that ill not be able to attend his wedding,you think he believed that well then it will be a surprise for him

Rohan-mistake(whispers in maan's ears)

Maan-yaya don't start that again 'I know you and your plans well'

Rohan-saalo welcome comeon man group hug

Adi-2 years and you have changed a lot ,last time you visited delhi for a surgery you were fat,suddenly doctor remmembers his health

Rohan raised his eyebrows

Maan- yup you are planning to be my competitor or what???dole shole hmmm''''

Rohan- well ill tell the truth to you guys '''''..tum logo ki hone vaali bhabhi almost makes me starve''''.seriously '..rolls his eyes

Maan-haha'''''.. that's needed for you thank god she is a doctor herself, now bachchu  lets see lovelife of a neurologist and a paediatrition.

Rohan- you know she likes my muscles'''''n has threatened me that she will flirt with another doctor if I don't maintain my gym routine ang diet charts.

Maan-seriously you have someone to think about you'''''someone to love''''''''someone

Dilo me tum apni betabia leke chal rahe ho,to zinda ho tum

Nazar me khwabo ki bijlia leke chal rahe ho ,to zinda ho tum

Hava ke jhoko ke jaise azad rahna sikho

Tum ek daraiya ke jaise lahro me behna sikho

Har ek lamhe se tum milo ,kholo apne baahen

Har ek pal ek naya sama dekhe yeh nighjen

Jo apne ankhon me hairaniyan leke chal rahe ho,to zinda ho tum

Dilo me apni betabiyan leke chal rahe ho,to zinda ho tum

Yes somewhere he also felt the void,somewhere he also wished that there was someone who would hold him when he was breaking,

haath se phisalti ret ko koi rokne ki koshish karen

ankhri saasn me koi jo haans lene ki koshish karen

har sukh aur dukh me jo himmat rakhne ki koshish karen

pyaar ki pyaase ko jo pyar ki nadia dikhane ki koshish karen

 yeh zindagi aasan nahi magar jo is zindagi ko jine ki koshish karen

Adi-maan lets go in

Maan came out of his thoughts ''.lets go

Muski-geeettt oh my god

Well just because this lehenga is heavy I cannot jump otherwise teri to kair nahi you missed the haldi ki rasam

Geet-yup I know I did not want to but had no choice,had to buy your gift also naa

Muski-geet''''.i love you,I I ''''''.really love you

Geet- don't you dare cry ,your makeup will get spoiled

Rohan- I will never tolerate my wife saying I love you to anybody else''''

Muski-firstly to be wife and well its geet and if you think of stopping me then it will always be 'to be'.

Rohan-owhowwow threatning haan''''.acha suno meet my friends geet

A tall,handsome maan turned

Geet-maan,adi''''''..ek din me 4 times not bad haan,mera picha kar rahe ho,well I have no problemo

Adi-geet flirt kar rahi ho ,maan ko nahi pasan''''''

Geet-well then maan will be mistaken adi I was thinking of you

Winks at maan and laughs

She holds maans hand,oh her soft hands

Her beautifull set of teeth

Expressive eyes

Heavinly smile

Her'''''''.oh maan stop day dreaming

Maan has a smile on the corner of his face

Geet-maan that grin can turn bigger,show your all teeth,you are scared that we all will come to know that you don't brush

Maan-haha oh geet

Throws his both hands and pulls her into a bear hug

Rohan,adi and muski gaping wide eyed'''''.

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Precap:maan-geet who main''''''..

Oh my god shes a real beauty,maan stop gaping but shes a...

Geet in a towelll and muskis mehandi😃

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Edited by chandreyeeroy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
frnds i hv been reading maaneet n nly maaneet ffs for past almost 7-8 months,so i will lyk to dedicate my dis ff to sum splcl writers...
1)muskaan dii with all hr ffs(her ff truly magical ws d 1st ff i read ever)
2)dilibadat-paulo diis ff r just gr8888
3)ffs lyk:you complete me
4)the mystry girl
5)a new dimension to love
6)irrevocably yours
7)remorse,immortal luv,enigma,n all saphires  ffs
8)kasak n maaneet mohabbtein
10)naadiyaa diis ff spcly simply luv
n yaa ofcource new york tyms n my irrestible kidnapper
i will relly like to thnkk all of above ryters 4 dere ffs...if u all cum ovr sum interesting ffs plss let me also know na
       
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
aha nice part!
cont soon
thanks for the pm!