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Part 14.Wedding Bells

04 August 2011

04:29

 

Story Intro

Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..

Edited by -Magicia- - 12 years ago

beautiful updates.
loved them
 geet is so sweet
maan got irritated but soon he calm with her little touch
continue soon,

buddy it seems interesting want bigger updates

awesome ... loved part 11 ...

awesome ... loved part 12 ...

awesome ... loved part 13 ...

awesome ... loved part 14 ...

just read all your parts it was really awesome...superb...amazing...waiting for the next update

Omg omg that's great but please make the parts longer it will be great update soon your work is great please update another part