part 16
oh Geet was desperately waiting for Maan but when he came she was planning to count till 60 but finished with 30...
their 3rd kiss?
wow...
what a wish...
lovely...
the story was nice...
cont soon dear...
awesome update...just read the note when i was wondering why i didn't get a PM. Luckily for me i keep links of my fav FFs especially when the writer takes a break and then check it once a month...
Please add me to your PM list
Originally posted by: crazedfan19
I was just wondering, after reading your ff, Maan would be one hottie of a sailor or a pirate hahaha😉
AMAZING concept!!!! LOVED the update!Aisha.
Very nice part
I so like this Maaneet
Geet was so restless waiting for Maan.
Loved the way you described her redoing things over and again.
Good morning kiss was awesome.
Waiting for more of their journey.
Waiting for the next partplz pm me after updating
Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
awesome part.
loved maaneet
geet waiting for her date and then count down all loved it
loved their good morning kiss.
continue soon
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