|MayUr FF| Is This Love- Part 2 pg. 11 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Mari-ARtian

Loved itttttttttttttttttt.....
it seems interestinggg....
update it sooon....

What chindi comment re 😳
Anyways thanks 🤗

Originally posted by: Alini.

Awesome part......

Nice .....

Continue soon............

Thank you Alini 😊

Originally posted by: Alisha-MJHT

Nice concept and brilliant start. You are a very good writer and do write this as FF.

Please continue soon and please add me to your pm list.

Alisha x

Thanks Alisha. Will PM you whenever I update 😊

Originally posted by: Naina2127

wowow ayesha. amazing start! this sounds so interesting and i cannot wait for the next part :) please do continue soon and definitely add me to your pm list!

Cheers!
~Naina

Thanks so much Naina 😃

Originally posted by: ~pooja_15~

awesome work !

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Farrda

lovely start do continue soon

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: afshanafreen

Awesome Aye.... 😳 ..was brilliant.....
regularly update kar warna 😈...and this shld be an FF

and unke pichle meetings ko bhi describe kar..i wanna read their Tom and Jerry fights 😳

Afshi 🤗
Thank you thank you! Karungi re regularly update, happy? Lets see. I myself don't know what I am gonna update next 🤣

Originally posted by: taman07

nice

Tq

Hey Ayesha, I think we've talked before

Originally posted by: NidzCole_ArTi

Umm...so okay....I wake up after this extra ordinarily long sleep of three hours. 😃 Then I check my phone and sees two missed calls from you. .Idioit! Kumbhkaran part 2! And then I come on IF and check my PM inbox. And lo and behold!
What do I see? 😲 😲 Nautanki 😆
One of my jaanus aka best friends on IF and Hyderabad, (🤣) has written an FF and it's NOT by janwar. It's by Sweeto aka Ization aka Aamir Ki Deewani aka Ayesha. Thank you thank you😎

And I'm shell shocked. And happy. 😃

Very, very, very awesome my Sweeto. But why didn't you tell me before? 😡 Arrey I called you but you, you were sleeping Kumbhkaran's sleep 😡

You write really well (already knew that). Even I knew that

Oh, and just one suggestion. When you are writing the line-
"So you were eavesdropping all the while, right? Bad, Gunjan." Said Nupur.

Make sure that the said is in small letters. Like-

"So you were eavesdropping all the while, right?," asked Nupur. "Bad Gunjan." See, I edited 😳

Oh and don't get pissed off with me or think am a know it all, the above is just something I learned from experience. Thanks for the suggestion Monkey 🤗See, a lazy bum like me edited the whole thing 😲

Anyways, that's all, Sigh!
-Me And I thought your aatma wrote it

[Oh and the above is the BIGGEST comment I've written for anyone on the FF forum. You are special. 🤗 I love you.] Thanks a ton Monkey 😳 Love ya too 🤗

I hope you didn't expect a long reply from me!
Anyways thanks for the comment Monkey.. ILY 🤗