Short story :You Belong To Me(Shanak)part22page33 - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
thank you😊

Originally posted by: shalini_s

waiting for the Khandelwal mansion scenes

The waiting is over

Originally posted by: mjht_lover

eagerly waiting for the next part 😊

I've updated it for you😉

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84

@amrita2010.that was really short and sweet.can't wait to enter k mansion.

thankyou so much
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wonderfullll update.
Plzz continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


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Posted: 15 years ago

thank you please continue soon...it was really great....

i like how khanak has feelings but is trying to hide them lol...and yes include the husband-wife scenes...its only natural that he wants to be with his wife...and vice versa
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Posted: 15 years ago
beautiful!!! cant wait for hubby and wife scenes!
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part yaar
its nice to see the family acceptin Khanak leavin khushboo of course🤢....WOW of course we want some hubby wifey moments re😍☺️...
plzz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great update Amrita......👏
Its nice that Khanak received a warm welcome from the Khandelwal family - minus Khushbu!
Hubby wifey scenes are most welcome if they fit the scene. If your script requires it, then go for it....LOL!!! (Trying to sound like a true professional by calling it your script)!!!!
Keep up the good work......😊
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waiting to see how Khanak wins over the Khandelwals...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kool FF, brilliant update!!
plz cont soon..

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Posted: 14 years ago
@dhrashtee, thankyou dear
@Fatima, ahhhh,thanx
@mjht_lover, thankyou dear,
@neha2005, thanx, I hope I don't go off limits
@Noorya, thanx dear, will add some😉
@FebruaryFlower, Thankyou, ahhh, this isn't a script, I just try to write what ever comes to my mind, I never plan a future track, once I start it goes on😆
@shalini, I will try my best
@Fallen Angel, Thankyou
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi all, sorry for the late update again, I was out of town and today only I came, hope all are good
You Belong To Me - Part 13


Khanak sighed with relief as she entered into the bathroom. All she wanted to do is take a shower so that she could sleep well. She discarded her clothes and jumped into the huge bath tub and leaned her head on one of it's side. She closed her eyes to think about what was going on in her life. When did she fell in love with Shaan? She didn't know the answer for this question, but one thing she knew is that it's not just within a single day or within a single moment she developed deep feelings for him. He is a nice guy, that any girl would dream to be his wife. She was lucky that destiny brought them together.

She was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't notice Shaan standing near the bath tub, mesmerized by her beauty. He wanted to be there looking at her lovely face, forever. His eyes studied her beautiful face, from her forehead to her chin. The rest of her was covered with the bubbles floating in the water. He knelt beside her hand and caressed her forehead. She turned her head at once and her eyes widened on seeing him next to her. She crossed her hands across her chest and looked at the door which flew open.

'Shantanu? You are here?'she found it difficult to believe what she saw. 'I couldn't sleep, so I thought to take a shower..by the way the door wasn't locked' he shrugged his shoulders as usual while explaining the reason he was there. 'I don't think it's such a big issue, because I'm your husband' he added further more. He removed his t-shirt and jumped into the tub splashing water everywhere. 'you don't have to permssion even' Khanak asked. 'oh! Come on, my dear wife, this isn't related to my work or where I go, and I don't need any permission to be with you' he reminded her that she belongs to him.

Khanak stretched her hand out to take the bath robe that was aside of the bath tub, but he held her hand and pressed his lips against her palm placing a soft kiss. He has every right to hold her hand, which he would never let go off. His action proved that he won't let her to be alone instead he will always guide her. She felt his warm breath against her cold palm and lowered her gaze not to show it to him. Little did she know, that he was more aware of what had happened to her. He knew that his nearness always melt her inside, making her longing for him.

He dragged her to him, taking her mouth by his with surprise and lied on his back at the otherside. In no time she responded to his kiss rolling her tongue into his mouth and locked her hands at the back of his head. She ran her fingers deep into his hair as their kiss grew more wild. She was clinching her hands all over his body, touching him and learning each and every single part of his body. He was more conscious than her, and he wanted to see how much she needed him. He let out a huge grin, bringing a halt to his kiss as he moved his lips down to her necks. He ran his hands all over her perfect body, tracing all the curves in his memory. He lowered his face from her neck to her chest, finding the perfect place to rest his head. He listened to her heavy breathing and soft moans as his tongue explored every bit of her body. She knew that she was enjoying it as much as he was. She knew that this man drives her crazy, set fire on her. He kept on teasing her until she couldn't take it any longer. He then gave her what she wanted and they both stayed there entwined in each other's arm.

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