Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
res for being the first one to comment on 6th part! yipee!
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di......i have no words to describe the beauty of the first paragraph.....
somehow i could feel all the emotions encircling my heart and touching my soul......
how sweet! they spoke lines but understood paras? wow di!
i knew nupur would do his film.......they had to come in a love bond....
but nupur did so much to be in his movie.......she nearly staked her reputation....
wow! hero toh mayank ko hona hi tha!
par main toh yeh soch ke khush ho rahi hoon kki woh log kaise kahenge that its love......
di.......yeh joh story aapne mention ki hai......use aap likhiyega as a oneshot.......
i would love that........but with dlgs too......
i want to desperately see that confession thingy.........cause u write that heavenly!
these poetic or we can can say, these lyrical lines were too good......
are toh kahoo na ki pyaar hai!
beautiful update di!
i loved it completely!
beautiful completely!
love,
Mahak
Hi Mahak,
Yipee u came first.. chalo chalo kaunsi treat ab.. hmm lets have a mango jucie with pices of mango on top ahhh chilled its yummy i have liked it so much.hope u too loved drinking it ..
Aww u liked that para ..i was hoping with the last part that this part hope u enjoy and like this parai am so very glad u did dear..enjoyed those lines dear.. really glad that it otuched u somewhere..
Nupur cant see him in stress right ..so it wasnt anythign much for her to do.. ahhah Hero to Mayank hi hona tha..warna readers would have felt disppointed ..heeh and Mayank khud bhi apney likhey words for Nupur ko Nupur ko hi koi aur kehtey huee dekh kaise sakta.. hahah
hmm so u feel i should be writing a OS for that story whcih i mentioned in it.ahh dont know if i would.. cant say no mood now to write a story but a poem so woudl post that after this finsihes.. u want the confession part.. oh just read the next parat and hope u like it.. woh story hi hai usmey.. but .. now i wont say more.. u completely liked it and loved ur comments dear.. i know i am too fast with my updates but i had to ..and glad u r here to read it and reply to my parts.. its makes me feel immensely special..thanks a ton dear.. tc
Bhoomi
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