"Hamari Love Story"(MayUr SS) PartVII(Ending) - Page 5

Awesome , Mind Blowing , Perfect ,Nupur Must Have Faith and trust on Mayank both are made for each other thanks you so much for all 4 parts Dear you have written very beautifully and each and  every word look like comes from your heart and every time i read from you i feel fresh .thank you Bhoomi for this Awesome FF waiting for next part ...

 

another superb fic bhoomi. Such a lovely concept.

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

i am the first one to comment on the fourth part also!

now i seriously think that my destiny is favoring me in this case atleast......

lol....i can imagine nupur on a horse like a dacoit......

ooooooooo..........so nupur is special for mayank!

i loved the lines......they were poetic and beautiful....

di......i know how difficult is to decipher ur feeling for a person who is ur frd......we think that we can't risk our frdship by that too.....but sometimes both's feelings are mutual.....

wow........both are so made for each other......i love them really.....and yup.....nupur could trust mayank because mayank is the one for her....

i so loved this update.........but i am sure that i wud love the next one more.....i have a feeling like that!

brilliant update! they are seeming so close na?

loved it di......

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

i love it bhoomi
nups thought maynk will do item number and maynk blush well she now amynk very well and i love maynk's confidence .........the way he said about friend and those word i love it.....and now they feeling something it was quite good.......nupur tell him about her fear i love the way you write lovley

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Awesome , Mind Blowing , Perfect ,Nupur Must Have Faith and trust on Mayank both are made for each other thanks you so much for all 4 parts Dear you have written very beautifully and each and  every word look like comes from your heart and every time i read from you i feel fresh .thank you Bhoomi for this Awesome FF waiting for next part ...

hi bhoomi every time i read its part my hand want to press the like tab but sad i can press this only one time .......
i love maynk and maynk mom
he never feel low doing household work i like it.......there are some people who thought kitchen is only for girls but i think maynk is so different and her mom she is too .....the idea was so lovely and i love it.......and maynk mom teasing and her lines was too effective ...after reading this i miss maynk's mom in show very much......and then the drive i love maynk's word and nupur tell about her family.........
i love it ......maynk's word "happiness bahut muskil se aati hai is true ....."
i love it bhoomi
want to read next part soon

hey

will edit on Monday... but read the updates...

😃 i was waiting...it wil be wrong if i say update soon 😛 ...but still lovely part..i luv the way u right it may be ur previouss ff or the os u hav written...