"Hamari Love Story"(MayUr SS) PartVII(Ending) - Page 9

Originally posted by: Kanuk

Hey Bhoomi , once again a very nice story.



Sorry had exams so couldnt read earlier

Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver

sorry Bhoomi,
i'm so late... u can throw tomatoes on me...
actually i had been @ my aunts place ..so i didnt get time 2 read d SS....
dil se sorry...😃
k.. cumin 2 d SS... fantabulous yaar.👏..
really luvd d way u describd mayur journey...deir dreams, aspirations, ups & downs dey had 2 face....😳
just awesum.. feelin so short of words....
truly touchd my heart...
congos dear 4 d nominations in ff awards.🥳
thnx a ton 4 d pm...
waitin 4 more ss ....
luv u lots...🤗
-supriya

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur

Heyyyy bhoomi
Lovely ending to a lovely story
Loved the song
Loved there confession so much
I loved that terrace thing
Will wait for ur another story

hey it was fantabulus....

i loved it...

plz pm me wenever you write nything on mayur...... plz...

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

hey it was fantabulus....

i loved it...

plz pm me wenever you write nything on mayur...... plz...

Hey Bhoomi!

This one is the best SS I've ever read. I love the bonding MayUr share with each other. That was truly amazing. The reason why she backed out of the documentary was really nice. Then the dance rehearsal at the auditorium was fabulous. I could actually imagine the whole thing. And the song you have written was excellent. I could actually feel the pain of loosing our dear ones. The way Mayank rushed towards her and hugged her was too good. Then the way they both messaged each other forgetting the world around them. Nupur saying the words of Mayank aloud... If something is just too much for heart to handle it inside, words come out to say it and then she says those words was very nice.

Then the Nupur's and Mayank's balcony scene was just wonderful. Their perceptions towards life was too good. The car scene, where Mayank tells Nupur about his father and then about the short movie he made with all the happy memories brought teas into my eyes. And I loved the way he is trying to help all those children suffering with Cancer. You have chosen the perfect songs to describe their feelings.

I loved the Nupur gave up her contract to work with Mayank. Mayank as an actor!! That was something unexpected! The story of the movie was somewhere near to their very own lives. The lyrics he had written for the movie were just awesome.

The ending was the best of all. Especially the song sequence. The lyrics of the song was so beautifully written and the feelings have been wonderfully described. The lyrics where Nupur and Mayank confess their feelings was amazingly brilliant.

And the last poem,

Life kuch nahi sirf Tu hai,
Tu sath rahey to har pal lagey new hai,
Har pal mey naye sapney naye goals hotey hain,
Sath hum inhey dekhtey dream kartey aur buntey hain,
Nazar Naa lagey aisi khubsurat hamari jodi hai,
Mayank aur Nupur yeh hamari Love story hai.. is too good.

Thanks a lot for writing this beautiful story Bhoomi. 😃Do write more. And do PM me from next time. And I'll definitely ask my Bro to read this story too.

- Sindhu

Originally posted by: Sindhu92

Hey Bhoomi!

This one is the best SS I've ever read. I love the bonding MayUr share with each other. That was truly amazing. The reason why she backed out of the documentary was really nice. Then the dance rehearsal at the auditorium was fabulous. I could actually imagine the whole thing. And the song you have written was excellent. I could actually feel the pain of loosing our dear ones. The way Mayank rushed towards her and hugged her was too good. Then the way they both messaged each other forgetting the world around them. Nupur saying the words of Mayank aloud... If something is just too much for heart to handle it inside, words come out to say it and then she says those words was very nice.

Then the Nupur's and Mayank's balcony scene was just wonderful. Their perceptions towards life was too good. The car scene, where Mayank tells Nupur about his father and then about the short movie he made with all the happy memories brought teas into my eyes. And I loved the way he is trying to help all those children suffering with Cancer. You have chosen the perfect songs to describe their feelings.

I loved the Nupur gave up her contract to work with Mayank. Mayank as an actor!! That was something unexpected! The story of the movie was somewhere near to their very own lives. The lyrics he had written for the movie were just awesome.

The ending was the best of all. Especially the song sequence. The lyrics of the song was so beautifully written and the feelings have been wonderfully described. The lyrics where Nupur and Mayank confess their feelings was amazingly brilliant.

And the last poem,

Life kuch nahi sirf Tu hai,
Tu sath rahey to har pal lagey new hai,
Har pal mey naye sapney naye goals hotey hain,
Sath hum inhey dekhtey dream kartey aur buntey hain,
Nazar Naa lagey aisi khubsurat hamari jodi hai,
Mayank aur Nupur yeh hamari Love story hai.. is too good.

Thanks a lot for writing this beautiful story Bhoomi. 😃Do write more. And do PM me from next time. And I'll definitely ask my Bro to read this story too.

- Sindhu