~The Fear Within~ Part 29 Pg. 44 2-27-10 - Page 16

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WoooHooooooo Finally RM met!! Prateeekkkkk sucha sweeetheart Can i call him dad?? ☺️ i soooo wish Prateek call him dad awww!! 😳 😳 Srsly ur update made my day !! i was soooo pissed off wtih the RM scenes!! but ur update made me feeellll sooo better Thank you sooooooo much!! dear!!! 🤗
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Wow imane dis one awesome fanfic!!!!!! 👍🏼
i started reading it 2 day wen u PMed me (for which i thank u )n i didnt get off till i got 2 da end ............
imane dis fanfic is sooo WOW
loved da way rahul got rid of kajol LOL ....
n YAY muskaan n rahul have met up again, hopefully we'l get some cute rahul n muskaan scenes........ 😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
DOST!!!!!! I love love LOVE this part! you were so damn good!
OMG they met! OMG!!!! and she didn't get mad! i was expecting a whole different reaction, but hell... that was so unexpected!
Have to mention Prateek... he is too cute! So adorable, but he's a clever kid!
Yay! I'm so excited!!! They're going to spend time together... even if it's in a toy store! I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
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OMG they finally met ...this part was simply WONDERFUL.>>>AMAZING>>>BEAUTIFUL>>>AWESOME>>>ek dum FANTASTIC ....i loved all the dilogues ....this kid is soo cute i wished muski n rahul had huged ☺️☺️...me too can feel rahuls old self returning ...wohooooooooo thank u for such a wonderful part 🤗
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Part 17

~Rahul and Suku Back at the Hotel~

Rahul: Suku kuch toh bolo? Main tumhay yahaan per itna sub kuch bata raha hoon aur tum ho kay yunhi behti hoon…

Suku: Kya bolo Rahul, mujhay toh yakeen nahi horaha… shamajh nahi araha kya karo. Tum ajj se pehlay itnay khush kabhi nahi dekhay… I am just so overwhelmed…

Rahul: (smiles at his own excitement) sorry…main bhi na…I got so carried away… khair raat bahut hogaye hain tum so jao. Kal subah mujhay Muskaan aur Prateek kay saath jana hain… (he gets up to leave)

Suku: aik minute Rahul…

Rahul: Haan…?

Suku: (comes to him and gives him a quick hug) I am very happy for you…Saach mein tumhari khushi se zayaada mujhay kuch nahi chiyay. Yeh sub shayad kismet mein likha tha. It's a quite concidence lakin phir bhi yeh kissi miracle se kum nahi hain. Meri yahi dua rehay ge kay tumharay cehray ki muskaan kabhi bhi na kum ho, yunhi khushi raho. Hameesha.

Rahul: Thank You Suku.

Suku: Good night Rahul…

Rahul: Night Suku. (He says closing the door behind him as he exits her suite)

Suku: (prays quietly to herself) Oh god…please Rahul ki yeh khushi banai rakh na. Na jaanay isski kismet mein aur kya likha hain, per Muskaan Rahul ko kabhi voh pyaar de paaye ge jis ka voh kub se intezaar kar raha yeh toh app he jaantey hain, issi liye please un dono ko hameesha saath rakhna…please…

~Next Morning at Ridzi and Muski's place~

Ridzi: Itni subah subah kaha ka irada hain? (She asked as Muskaan carried Prateek down the stairs dressed and ready to go)

Muski: Ridzi voh maine bataya tha na Rahul milla tha…(She explained tying Prateek's shoe laces as he ate his breakfast)

Ridzi: Haan yaad aya, vahi Rahul na jo teray ghar kay saamnay rehta tha, Mumbai mein?

Muski: (nods her head) haan vahi, ajj kal Paris aaya hua hain, actually Suku hain na uski best friend usnay he convince kiya ussay apni birthday yahaan celebrate kar nay kay liye.

Ridzi: Yeah, you told me last night. Suku ka husband Karan bhi araha hain ajj aur Rahul ne apni khud ki surprise birthday party ki wajah se tum dono kay saath time spent karnay ka waaada kiya hain…

Muski: (placing Prateek's long drive necessities in a bag) Arey vah! Tujhay toh sub pata hain. Kal raat toh meri baatein saach mein sun rahi thi, aur mujhay laga tu so gaye hain. Khaie yeh bhi yaad hain na kay ajj sham uski birthday mein tujhay bhi invitation hain?

Ridzi: Mujhay?

Muski: Haan tujhay…kyun koi aur appointment hain

Ridzi: Nahi per main vahaan…I mean yum dono dost ho main toh…

Muski: Dost ki dost ho, meaning meri dost ho, issi liye ana paray ga…

Prateek: Haan mausi app bhi toh apnay shop per ja rahi hoon kyunki app ka jana must hain per sham mein Rahul ki birthday mein agar app nahi aye toh mein bahut naraaz hojao ga…you must come..

Ridzi: (smiles at his cute request) Fine baba…If I must come then I am coming…

Muski: Good job prateek! Mausi ko itni jaldi mana liya…

Prateek: No problem Mom! (he high fived Muski)

~With in 20 minutes Muskaan and Prateek reach at the hotel where Rahul was staying. It was Rahul's birthday- not just any birthday but it was the happiest birthday ever as he finally felt himself returning back to the colors of life he once thought he had lost forever. He woke up looking fresh and energized, the smile that appeared on his face when he saw Muskaan in front of his eyes never left him. It was a bright day and he knew it will stay that way as he intended to spend this day to the fullest with someone whom he had loved so truly and purely that no words can every do justice to his emotions. He got dressed like the way he used to, no glasses, no stiffness, nothing too formal. Everything was casual just like he used to be, white t-shirt with faded jeans and nice pair of Nike. He looked and felt amazing… he heard his cell phone go off when he was about to head out his room.~

Rahul: Hello?

Muskaan and Prateek: "Happy birthday to you…happy birthday dear Rahul…happy birthday to you"

Rahul: (smiles) thank you…thank you so much…

Prateek: Rahul tum kaha ho?

Rahul: Umm apnay room mein, app batao app kaha ho?

Prateek: Car mein…

Rahul: Acha aur apki car kaha hain?

Prateek: Aik min Mom se pooch lo…

Rahul: (laughs at his cuteness)

Muskaan: (turns on the speaker phone) Rahul hum neechay parking mein, Hotel De Crillon ki visitor parking mein, floor 2-b. Tum kaho toh lobby tak ajao?

Rahul: Nahi Muskaan uski koi zaroraat nahi hain. Suku ki bhi nikalna hain, she'll take the hotel car. Main usko see off kar kay five minutes mein milta hoon…

Muskaan: you sure?

Rahul: Yeah…absolutely…

Prateek: Rahul kub aao gay… (he called out from the backseat)

Rahul: Prateek app bus thodi der Mom kay saath wait karo mein araha hoon…alright champ be there in five minutes…

Muskaan: okay then…we'll see you…

Prateek: Come soon….

Rahul: I will champ…keep smiling till then..

~Rahul hangs up the phone and heads out his room. Suku was already in the lobby waiting for him. They had planned everything out. Suku was going for some last minute arrangements for the party and on her way back she was going to pick up Karan from the airport. Rahul wanted to be at the airport to receive Karan but Suku insisted not to ruin his day with Muskaan and Prateek. Rahul walked Suku to the hotel car which was waiting with a driver in the parking lot and waved good bye telling her to take care. In about 3 minutes he managed to get up the parking floor where Muski and Prateek were waiting for him in the car. As he searched for the car Muskaan honked and got his attention towards her black sedan. Rahul smiled and waved at her as he walked towards the car.~

Rahul: Hello everyone… (he greets them as he opens the car's door to get in)

Muskaan and Prateek: Happy birthday!!

Rahul: (laughs and gets in the car) Thank you again…

Muskaan: toh birthday boy batao birthday kaise jarahi hain…so far…

Rahul: just perfect…(he looks at her and smiles)

Muskaan: (smiles) yeh toh achi baat hain, infact bahut achi baat hain…chalo iss birthday ko aur perfect banatay hain. Prateek ne tumharay liye kuch special kiya hain…

Rahul: (turns his head to face Prateek in the backseat who was holding a cup cake with a small candle on it, it said "happy birthday Rahul" with icing)

Prateek: Mom aur maine subah cupcake bake kiya tha. Especially app kay liye…maine likha…mom ne banaya…acha hain na?

Rahul:(touched deeply by his gesture) Bahut, bahut acha hai…

Prateek: Toh phir make a wish..jaldi se…(Rahul looks at Muskaan then back at Prateek, he closes his eyes and wishes for something, then blows out the candle)

Muskaan: Yay…(clapping along with Prateek) chalo Rahul ajj sham kay liye tumhari practice hogaye…Prateek ki zidd thi aur mujhay bhi cupcakes bake karna pasand hain apnay betay kay saath…kafi bachkana lagta hain per kya karo main aisi he ho…

Rahul: Nahi Muskaan it's perfect…(he pulled Prateek to the front and hugged him sweetly as Muskaan gave him a kiss on his cheek. He looked adorable as he hugged RM at the same time after feeding the cupcake to both of them. Rahul fed him some as well and once again thanked him)

Muskaan: Chalo Baby abb app peechay apni child seat mein chaly jao, Mama is ready to drive…

Prateek: Mom main Rahul kay pass behto ga…

Muskaan: Prateek zidd nahi karo jaan, appki safety seat peechay hain na issi liye app ko vahi behtna hoga, Rahul bara hain issi liye agay behta hain…

Prateek: Per mujhay belt nahi lagana ata….

Muskaan: Oh acha…main kar deyti hoon…

Rahul: (stops her from getting out) It's okay main kar deta hoon…(he gets out and safely places Prateek in his child seat, puts his belt on for him, and lovingly messes his hair, Muskaan watches him and smiles. Prateek had never been happier before, Rahul comes back to the frontseat and finds Muskaan in her thoughts still smiling looking at Prateek.) chalay Muskaan?

Muskaan: (snap out the trance) huh?

Rahul: kya hua? Tum theek toh ho na?

Muskaan: (smiles realizing Rahul is back in the front seat) Haan…haan main theek ho...ready to go…

Rahul: ofcourse…chalo…per aik minute…(he comes a bit closer to her as he notices some cupcake icing in the corner of her lower lip. Muskaan feels a bit uncomfortable and Rahul smiles as he knows her well enough to not do anything that she might find difficult. He pulls himself back and simply points to where the icing was) Voh tumhari face per icing lagi reh gaye…

Muskaan: (looking in the rear view mirror she wipes it off with a tissue Rahul handed her) Thanks…

Rahul: Your welcome...

~ Muskaan begins the long drive towards Paris's biggest Mall. Prateek and Rahul were talking, it was mostly Prateek's childish but cute questions such as "why do cars stop at red lights?" "why are there so many shops in a row?" and many more. Rahul was answering him like a child as well, no one could tell that Prateek was in conversation with one of the best Neurosurgeons. Muskaan couldn't help but to smile while overhearing the conversation taking place in her car. She could have never talked with Prateek like the way Rahul was talking to him. She loves Prateek more than anyone, but with her ongoing responsibilities as a single mom and everything else with her new job only gave her limited time with Prateek. It was nice to hear his laughter echoing around her, nice to have his childish naughtiness back in action, and most of all it was absolutely perfect to have Rahul, a void Muskaan always had in her life whenever she was happy.~

Muskaan: Here we are…Chalo Prateek are you ready? (Muskaan said parking the car)

Prateek: Mom main toh kub se ready tha, khoob saaray toys laynay hain mujhay…cars, video games, aur… (he said as Muski got out the car and opened the back door to get Prateek)

Muskaan: Bus Bus…abhi gari se toh uttar jao phir list bata de na….(she said as she undid his seat belt from the car seat. He jumped out like a frog) Arrey ruko toh…

Rahul: Jaanay do Muskaan, voh zayaada dur nahi jaye ga…he is just excited…

Muskaan: (smiles) You'll spoil him Rahul…

Rahul: (they were both walking while following Prateek) Baacha hai, spoil karna toh zaroori hain…

Muskaan: Acha… toh phir jub voh zidd karay ga na tum khud he sambhal lay na…

Rahul: Theek hain…

Prateek: Mom, Rah0ul come fast…Toy Store agaya…! (He was already at the store calling out to them, Thye both looked at eachother and smiled before proceeding to the little man's instructions)

~Shopping around in the store was more than 2 hours Prateek had talked Muskaan and Rahul in to buying almost everything that he wanted. If Muskaan said no to something Rahul convinced her otherwise and if Rahul had his doubts about a certain toy Muskaan made him see reasoning behind it. As they proceeded towards the cash register and paid for their shopping the nice lady at the cash Register had something else to offer after they made their purchase…~

Store Employee: voulez-vous entrer dans un magasin l'chelle des parents et des enfants de la concurrence? (Would like to be a part of dad vs. mom in store competition of car racing?)

Muskaan: umm..(she was about to refuse when Prateek understood what the lady asked and instantly answered for her)

Prateek: oui! bien sr

Muskaan: Nahi Prateek..hum compete…

Rahul: Kya hua Muskaan? Usnay kya kaha?

Muskaan: (a bit embarrassed) Voh store mein koi Dad Vs. Mom Competetion hain and the winner wins the latest toy car and all… Prateek ne…

Rahul: Haan kar di?

Muskaan: Haan per main na kar deyti ho…

Prateek: Mom please…please…mujhay voh brand new toy truck chiyay…aur voh sirf iss competition se millay ga please…Rahul kehlay ga na maray liye…

Muskaan: Prateek…yeh game Mom Vs.Dad ki hain…RaHul toh Friend hain na…

Prateek: Nahi…voh Dad bhi hain…

Muskaan: (looks up shocked at Rahul) Prateek please zidd na karo…aur tum jaantey ho na Rahul sirf aik…

Rahul: Muskaan jaaney do na…ussko yeh sub shamajh mein nahi aaye ga…it's just a game…maan jao…

Muskaan: Lakin Rahul…

Rahul-Prateek: Please….pretty please…

Muskaan: Fine…lakin aggar mein jeet gaye toh?

Prateek: Mom app nahi jeet sakti kyun ki aggar Dad meaning Rahul jeeta toh mujhay Hot Wheels ki Brand New Super Fast toy car milay ge per Mom jeeti toh Barbie Tea Set…and I hate tea sets…main koi girl tohdi ho…

Muskaan: Acha toh yeh kya baat hai…Mom ko harana hain aur Rahul ko jeetna hain…

Rahul: Kyun meri jeet manzoor nahi hain…?

Muskaan: haan hain per apni jeet se zayaada nahi… (she laughs) Prateek meri side per ho ga na?

Prateek: No Mom… Main Rahul ki side per hoon…Mujhay Car chiyay tea set nahi…(he teams up with Rahul, high fiving him…Rahul smiles and give him a piggy back as they get ready for the competition of racing two remort controlled cars on a run way that the store managers had set up for the competition.)

~Muskaan and Rahul both get ready for the competition as they both are handed the remote controls for the cars that they will be racing. Contestants and shoppers at the store gather around to watch the excitement as well. They were the first "couple" to agree upon this competition. Rahul had Prateek holding on to him like a monkey, they could totally be passed as the perfect father and son couple. Muskaan on the other hand was eager to have competition on her hand, it was exciting for her. She raced up as if she was actually racing on formula 4 track. The race began and the cheers from the crowd grow louder from the mom's side, Muskaan was leading. Rahul had this all under control, it was an old trick of letting the opponent get ahead just to overtake her the next moment. Anyhow it was a win-win situation for her because no matter who won it was all for Prateek's sake and the super cool Hot Wheeler that he wanted so bad. Muskaan tried her best for the tea set but just before the finish line she glanced over the other side and saw Prateek cheering on Rahul with all his heart, the determination in his eyes was completely something to die for. Rahul was engrossed in the game while Prateek was clinging on to his back like a cute monkey, it was enough for Muskaan to get distracted, thus losing the race at the last moment, it was intentional but not really. Rahul and Muskaan smiled at each other as Muskaan shrugged her shoulder and throwing her hands up in the air, giving up happily to her beloved son and friend. Prateek won the Hot Wheel's Brand New Truck. All three posed for the picture as if they were really family, for a moment no one could mistake their identity as the perfect couple with an adorable son. Muskaan felt odd as Rahul placed his arm around her for the picture but having Prateek's million dollar smile was worth the shivers she felt down her spin upon his gentle touch. ~

~Food Court at the Mall~

Rahul: Mujhay nahi pata that um itni achi car racer ho?

Muskaan: (feeding Prateek his French Fries she smiles) Hmmm..sekhna para yeh jo hain na tumhara Champ iskay saath kehl nay waala koi nahi tha…issi liye sekhna para…

Rahul: (senses a bit of seriousness in her tone) Naye cheezoon ko accept karna he zindagi hain…yaad hain aik dafa tumne he mujhay yeh kaha tha?

Muskaan: Haan per itna sub kuch aik saath badal gaya kay khud ko bhi badalna para…(she handed Prateek his sandwhich which he was enjoying with his favorite apple juice unaware of the conversation Rahul and Muskaan were having)

Rahul: Nahi Muskaan tum ajj bhi vahi hoon, kuch bhi toh nahi badla sirf time kay ilawa. Ajj bhi jub tum Prateek ko khush dekh kar hasti ho toh tumhari muskaan tumhari ankhoon mein jhalakti hain, waqt badla hain jazbay aur rishtey nahi.

Muskaan: (looks up at him) Shayad rishtey bhi badal gaye… khair choro yeh sub…

Rahul: Nahi baatein adhuri nahi churi jaati…(he paused as Muskaan picked up Prateek in her arms, after all the shopping her was exhausted and sleepy, they begin walking down the Mall's main street, rahul continued) Muskaan if you don't mind me asking kya inn paanch saloon mein tum aur Armaan…

Muskaan: Kabhi nahi milay… bahut baar maine chaha kay usko phone karo, usko humaray betay ka batao, per har baar…har baar Rahul meray haath kaapnay lagtey, mujhay darr lagnay lagta kay kahein voh mujhay Prateek se dur na karde. Kahein voh pehlay jaisa pagalpan na laut aye aur aik baar phir mera sub kuch mujh se dur hojaye. (her eyes were tearing up)

Rahul: Tum jaanti ho voh kahan hain?

Muskaan: Nahi per Paris anay se pehlay jub main ussay milnay gaye thi tub voh Shilpa kay saath tha, uskay apartment mein…

Rahul: aur…aur Prateek? Kys voh yeh jaanta hain kay Arm..

Muskaan: (shakes her head) Nahi…aur saach kaho toh jub tak voh iss saachai se dur hain theek hain. Na jaanay voh yeh sub jaan kay kaisey react karay ga? Jaantey ho Rahul jub jub Prateek mujhay apnay dad kay baray mein poochta hain main kissi tarah se baat badal deyti ho…Ridzi aur maine kabhi ussay kissi cheez ki kami nahi honay di per tumsay millnay kay baat lagta hain, yeh kami uski life mein thi, bus main khud nahi dekh na chahti thi.

Rahul: (looks up at her and sees her looking down as if she had said too much or something, to ease her misjudgement, he reaches for Prateek who had fallen asleep on Muskaan's shoulder) lao main utha leta hain Prateek ko… tumhara haath numb hojaye ga agar yunhi pakray rahi…

Muskaan: you sure?

Rahul: are you kidding, Prateek ko kuch khilati toh ho nahi iska weight itna light sa toh hain…

Muskaan: Main nahi khilati? Are you kidding…tumnay dekha na kitna ziddi hain yeh kahnay kay baaray mein. Sandwhich bhi ghar se bana kay lana para… (they were passing by some jewelry shop as Muskaan was telling his all this he was looking at the display that held a beautiful locket)

Rahul: Muskaan aik minute…

Muskaan: Kya hua?

Rahul: chalo na… (he pulled her in the jewelry store with his free hand and Muskaan was just surprised but followed him anyways)

Muskaan: Rahul hum iss store mein kya kar rahay hain…tum jaantay ho yeh kitna expensive…

Rahul (had an associate pull out the locket from the display) shhsh…tum na ajj bhi itni hi ziddi ho jitni pehlay thi…aur haan main jaanta ho yeh expensive hain per please main vacations per pichlay 7 saloon se nahi gaya. I think I can afford…

Muskaan: (smiles) Rahul per yum kya lay rahay ho? Koi mill gaye kya?

Rahul: (laughs) Pata nahi…per agar tumhara mujhay tang karna band hogaya ho toh tum yeh try karo ge please…(he dangles the real silver locket infront of her while having Prateek in his other arm, he was fast asleep) aur jaldi karo issi pehlay Prateek uth jaye…

Muskaan: Lakin Rahul…

Rahul: (takes her hand and puts the locket on her palm) Now Muskaan please…

Muskaan: (gives in yet again) Theek hain…(she goes and stands infront of the mirror in the shop, Rahul follows standing behind her holding Prateek, She struggled closing the locket as her messy curls were in the way. Rahul and so he comes a bit closer to her and pushes her hair aside with his free hand. Muskaan looks up at his close proximity and for a moment his the reflection he saw in the mirror made her smile sweetly. Rahul was holding Prateek, Standing behind her, she was smiling, they looked so perfect. There was silence and the moment stood still for the two, they both looked at eachother through the reflection. Muskaan had closed the locket, Rahul's hand was still on her shoulder, he smiled) Theek hain?

Rahul: Nahi…perfect hain… (he said turning her around making her face him)

Muskaan: Kis kay liye liya hai abb toh bata do…?

Rahul: (turns her back around so she is facing the mirror, he points to her reflection) Uskay liye…

Muskaan: (smile fades) Rahul per main yeh…

Rahul: Nahi lay sakti, acha nahi lagta, bahut expensive hain…aur koi excuse miss ki hain toh voh bhi kehdo…

Muskaan: Aisa nahi hain Rahul…voh…

Rahul: Dost kehti ho na…subse acha dost toh phir mera gift accept karnay se mana mat karo…please…

Muskaan: per birthday toh tumhara hain aur tum mujhay?

Rahul: Ummm toh phir theek hain pichlay 5 saloon ka jo bhi birthday miss hua hain na uskay liye…

Muskaan: Rahul tum na bilqual pagal ho…abb chalo…

Rahul: Madame pagal main nahi app hain…afterall I deserve a thank you don't I (they were exiting the store as Rahul complained)

Muskaan: No, you deserve so much more. Per yeh jo "so much more" hain na voh meray pass nahi hain…lakin jis kay pass bhi hain na I promise voh tumhay tumharay aglay birthday tak mill jaye ge… (she ruffled her hair and started to walk ahead)

Rahul: (smiled at her sweetness then followed behind)

~They were both headed for the parking lot as it was time for them head back. Suku had called Rhaul to make sure he is on his way back as the drive back was pretty long. Muskaan placed a sleepy Prateek in his car seat; she knew he would be sleeping the entire drive back. All his excitement was used up and he was charging back to it by sleeping. Rahul and Muskaan smiled watching him sleep peacefully from the front of the car. As they drove back Muskaan asked Rahul about his past five years and he managed to answer as positively as he could, hiding his pain and suffering from her.~

Muskaan: Here we are bak to your hotel…

Rahul: Hmm we are back…bahut jaldi ghuzar gaya time nahi?

Muskaan: Hmm…acha waqt jaldi hi guzhar jata hain…

Rahul: (smiles) This was the best birthday I ever had…

Muskaan: Thanks…phir bhi tumhara koi gift nahi liya abhi tak…

Rahul: Tum mill gaye issi bhar kar aur kya chiyay… (There was silence between the two for a moment)..umm chalo main chalta hoon…tum Prateek aur Riddhima kay saath ajj sham arahi ho na?

Muskaan: (nods her head) Hmm…

Rahul: Theek hain Sham mein miltey hain… (he gets out the car and waves her good bye, she smiles and waves back reversing out the parking lot)

Precap: Birthday Party…Some old memories…


P.S: Part 17 will be coming up shortly...am done but have to edit some more...i know i kept you guys waiting for so long...so i really hope these back to back parts make up for the long wait. Have fun and Comment back please...😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

AMAZING part!!

thanks for the pm!!
do continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great Part imane....Luved it...It was just soooooooo cute....And I luv this line: "Tum mill gaye issi bhar kar aur kya chiyay'" Also, I luv this litle guy Prateek...He is adorable...!! 😳 😳

Ahhh really enjoyed reading this update...Cant wait for next part...Please continue soon....😛

Thnx for the PM...😊
Luv Vikshu...
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Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

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