~The Fear Within~ Part 29 Pg. 44 2-27-10 - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago
Awwwwwww choooo chweeeeeeeeet Rahul n Prateeeek scnece was SO CUTE!!!!Thy hav becom FRIENDZ awwwwwww!!! 😳 😳 Thank god that Kajal girl RUN AWAY!! 😆
it wasASWESUM!!! Update!! hun!! 👏 👏
thxx for the pm do continue soon i cn't wait for RM MEETING!!!!! 😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
Kuch Na Kaho! ROFL! My favorite scene from that movie!
Dost you rock yaar! Kya ladki hai. She's sooo.... AGH! Achha hua peecha chut gaya.
Yaar yeh Prateek is too cute yaar! Bechaare noo ghussa dilaata Muskaan ne.
I had a feeling this kid was going to be the reason why RM would be together again. So Sweet!
update soon Dost!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Note:

I know guys that it seems like the movie "Kuch Na Kaho" is mirroring my story...but to be honest this is probably the only scene i got inspired by and took Rahul and Prateek in consideration for it...I had planned it differently but it turned out like this with the whole fashion show deal and all...So don't expect the same "Kuch Na Kaho'" plot for this fic...as the story from here on will be a lot different. Thanks for the comments...
Edited by imane568 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awwwwwww tat kid is so cute ...i feel like going and hugging prateek tight ...the way you are presenting him is so adorable .....Rahul- prateek scne was chow cute ....uptade was fantastic ...👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey imane that made a very cute read! the abhi ash movie this was i know, the R-P scene, just can't place which one... but very well placed! prateek is a cute kid :) sukeerti is playing super smart, unfortunately not smart enough, eh ??!! :D

upadte soon!, cheers!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 16

Muskaan and Ridzi Backstage:

Ridzi: Muskaan show shuru goaya finally…Thank you so much for the help… (she hugged her)

Muskaan: No problems…I just hope tumhari models aur unkay attitudes meri coordination ko bahut zayaada mind na karay…I tried to be as polite as I could…

Ridzi: oh please…agar voh behave nahi karay gee toh unka pay check bhi behave nahi karay ga…

Muskaan: (laughs lightly) Acha bata prateek kaahan hain..? usko lay kay aati hoon…

Ridzi: Voh pool side per hain…guar se pooch lay na bata dey ga…thanks again Muski…

Muskaan: Kaha na no problem baar baar thanks keh kay itna ajeeb sa feel kara rahi hain…

Ridzi: Sorry…

Muskaan: Acha tu yahaan sub sambhal main Prateek ko vapis lay kay aati hoon…

Rahul and Prateek @ Pool Side:

Prateek: (enjoying his ice cream) Vaisey voh aunty na bahut pretty thi…app nay unhay scare kyun kiya?

Rahul: Hmmm thi toh bahut pretty per not my types…(he said wiping his nose that had ice cream on it)

Prateek: Type…? Aunties ki bhi type hoti hain?

Rahul: (laughs) Hmm hoti hain…

Prateek: Vaisey ajj se pehlay maine kabhi kissi ko Dad nahi bola…app Dad types lagtey ho…app ko Dad bol sakta hoon..

Rahul: (Prateek innocent tone gave Rahul a sudden shocked and he looked at him a bit confused) Kyun app kay ghar me Mom aur Dad nahi hain?

Prateek: Mom aur Mausi hain…Dad nahi hain…(he said lightly licking his ice-cream off the cone)

Rahul: (connected the dots in his head and felt a bit sad of him) Oh…toh yeh baat hain… But I am sure Mom aur Mausi he kafi hongay…you know Dads are more strick on rules and all…Mom toh bahut spoil karti hongi, har baat maanti hongi tumhari…

Prateek: Ofcourse…main unka one and only baby jo hoon…

Rahul: (ruffles his hair and smiles at his cuteness)

Prateek: (finishing his ice-cream) Acha abb mujhay chalna hain…agar guard ya Muasi mujhay vaapis lay nay agaye toh main trouble mein ajao ga…but it was nice meeting you Rahul…(he shook his hand very gentlemanly and then ran off leaving Rahul smiling at his kidult ways. Just as he was about to get up he noticed Prateek had left his swimming goggles on the bench and so he picks them up and follows after him.)

Muskaan and the Guard:

Guard: I am sorry maam bbut I have no clue where he ent…he was just playing in the water…

Muskaan: (worried) No…You have to look for him…and how could you leave a child alone like that…

Guard: Please Maam we are looking for him…but you have to calm down…

Muskaan: Look you have to right to tell to calm down! It's my kid that you have lost!

Guard: Okay please could you give us his name…something that will help us find him…

Muskaan: Prateek…His name is Prateek, he is 5 years old…dark hair, brown eyes, he was wearing orange swimsuits… (as Muskaan is explaining everything to the guard worriedly Prateek comes back and sees his Mom worried and talking t the guard, he quickly make his way to Muskaan calling out to her.)

Prateek: Mom…! Mom…!

Muskaan: (Turns around at the familiar voice and sees Prateek running towards her, she gets on her knees as he comes running in to her arms.) Prateek kahaan chalay gaye thay…? I was so worried baby…(she was crying a bit as she hugged her son tightly) Aisey kyun kiya Maama kay saath…kitni baar kaha hain yun bagair batai nahi jaatey…Tum theek ho na… kahaan thay tum…(she pulls him out of the hugs and questions him)

Prateek: Voh main Da…I mean aik friend kay saath tha…

Muskaan: (gets up and picks him up in her arms as well) Friend? Yahaan per kuansa dost hain?

Prateek: Oh Mom, voh app kay jitna bara dost hain…

Muskaan: Meray jitna?

Prateek: Voh chota sa bacha nahi hain…bara hain…aur ussnay ice cream bhi khilai mujhay?

Muskaan: Baby app kis kay saath thay aur yeh kuan hain…

~As Muskaan was utterly confused about this unknown presence in her kid's life, Rahul had made his way closer to Prateek. From where he was standing he could see Prateek in his Mom's arms but Muskaan had her back towards him and so he didn't recognize her. Prateek was also looking for Rahul as he wanted the constant questioning from his mother to come to an end soon and as he spotted him coming towards over Muskaan's shoulder he called out him at once.~

Prateek: Rahul…Rahul… (As Prateek said his name out loud waving at him Muskaan's face turned pale, her heart beat grew faster and she felt herself numb, the name was very familar. Rahul waved back holding up Prateek's Goggles and started to walk towards him.) Mom peechay muro na…Dost say toh milo…phir saray questions kay answers voh dey dega…turn na…(he said poking Muskaan's shoulder)

Muskaan: (without uttering a single world she slowly turned to face Rahul's direction who was nearing her with each step he took, and as she turned holding prateek upon her waist she recognized the person walking towards them. Her past came back once again, and she remembered the first time she had met Rahul when he moved into the house across from hers. She remembered how Suku had introduced the two and how he had shook her hand for the first time ad noticed her badly hurt hand instantly. Then she was brought back to reality as she noticed a changed man walking towards her, or atleast his appearance was. No longer was he dressed in casual t-shirt and jeans, his face had turned a bit stiff, there was no smile, and he wore glasses now, he looked tired and fatigued, he looked as if he had grown 2 times older than the time they had spent apart.)

Rahul: (as Muskaan's features became prominent to him his step grew heavier and he felt his heart sinking again, he didn't want to trust his eyes, he blinked once, then twice thinking his imagination must have played a trick on him, but her slender figure holding Prateek upon her waist remained in his eyes as he slowly moved forward it became even more clear. He didn't know what he was feeling, he didn't know how he had ended up in front of her, once again they were standing couple of steps away yet these steps were the hardest to erase. He felt his eyes burning and his heart aching wanting to let out a scream that he had buried deep inside for the five longest years of his life.)

Prateek: Dekho Mom mera dost agaya…(he said unaware of the past and the meaning of the same word "Dost" that once played an important role in their lives. Muskaan and Rahul both stood staring at one another, not knowing what to say and how to begin a conversation. There was so much to express but Muskaan found herself short of words and expressions. Rahul had no clue of what he was feeling at the moment because his eyes were watering up with happiness of finding Muskaan or rembering how quickly everything in his life had changed upon Muskaan's departure. The time truly stood still for both, nothing moved, no sound, no feelings, nothing at all. Prateek looked at them confused he didn't know what was going on, all he knew that Rahul was holding his swimming Goggles and as he made his way down from Muskaan's grip, he took Hold of Rahul's hand and got his Goggles back, then ran off to play in the kid's pool once again.)

Rahul: Mus..(he was about to hug her but she had put her hand forward so he back away and they both feel odd and weird sharing a pause while looking at eachother.)

Muskaan: Rah…(this time she is about to hug him but he puts his hand forward and they both once again look at eachother and feel tears brewing fresh in their eyes. Muskaan takes his hand and just kind of holds it, and Rahul grips it strongly pulling her a bit closer to him and just looks in to her soft browinsh eyes that had tears flowing from them. They smile at eachother.)

Rahul: (wips her tears away with the other free hand still smiling through his tears)

Muskaan: Rahul…

Rahul: Hmmm Rahul… tumhara dost…Kasi ho?

Muskaan: (looking in to his eyes then looks away) Achi hoon…theek ho…(she takes her hand out of his grip feeling a bit odd at the impulsive nature of hers and he too softly lets go of her hand.)

Rahul: Abhi se nazreein chura li…abhi toh maine koi shikayaat bhi nahi ki…?

Muskaan: Na..Nahi voh baat nahi hain…

Rahul: Hmm baat toh pichlay 5 saloon se nahi hui hain….

Muskaan: (looks up at him surprised)

Rahul: Dosti ka har rule tor kar ajnabi category mein dal kar mujhay itna dur kardiya kay dhoondnay se bhi tumhay dhoond nahi paya…itna bura dost tha kya?

Muskaan: Nahi Rahul please…aisa kabhi soochna bhi nahi… tum se acha aur saacha dost toh koi hui he nahi sakta… aur dekho na ajj tumhari saachi dosti hum dono ko phir se aik dosray kay saamnay lay kar aye hain…

Rahul: (smiles) ya phir Prateek?

Muskaan: Prateek?...(looks around) Prateek kaha gaya?

Rahul: (laughs at her over protective nature once again and putting his hands on her shoulder he points to the kiddy pool where he was splashing water and enjoying himself.) Voh raha…Tumhara Prateek tumse dur kabhi ja sakta hain?

Muskaan: (smiles and calms down) Vaisey tum Paris mein?

Rahul: Beht kar baat karay?

Muskaan: Haan kyun nahi…(they go and sit at a bench nearby the Kiddy pool where Prateek was playing.)

Rahul: Bahut pyaara bacha hain Prateek… (he says watching Prateek play as Muskaan smiles proudly)

Muskaan: Hmm…per bahut badmaash bhi hain…saari tricks aati hain meri na ko haan mein badal nay ki…bilqual tumhari tarah…yaad hain?

Rahul: (Smiles remembering the old times and his convincing nature) Kabhi bhi bhool he nahi jo yaad karta…tum se aisey baat karta tha jaisey tum meray samnay ho, kahein bhi kabhi bhi akela nahi tha.

Muskaan: Rahul tumnay shaadi…

Rahul: Nahi ki…yakeen uth gaya tha…

Muskaan: Kyun?

Rahul: Kyunki meri toh dosti he bahut kamzoor thi, kissi aur rishtey ko kareeb lanay se darr lagta tha…darr tha kay kahein aik aur rishta adhoora na reh jaaye…

Muskaan: Per Rahul…

Rahul: Muskaan please kya hum yeh saari sad baatein kabhi aur kar saktey hain…aur vaisey bhi tumne he mujhse vaada kiya tah kay tum meray liye apnay jaisey koi dhoondo ge per tum toh thi he nahi…

Muskaan: Jagah badal di thi na issi liye?

Rahul: Aur rishtey…voh bhi badal diye thay kya?

Muskaan: (looks up shocked not knowing how to respond)

Rahul: Mazaaq kar raha tha…has sakti ho…(he laughed)

Muskaan: Vaisey glasses kub se lag gaye…? Aur itni sober dressing, Rahul saach mein paanch saloon mein tum mujhay 20 saal barey lag rahay ho…

Rahul: (laughed) Kya karo koi reason he nahi tha achay lag nay ka…toh soocha serious ho jao, you know kuch nahi toh thoda mature he lago ga. Impression acha parey ka after I am a Neurosurgeon…

Muskaan: Haan per tum aur serious types…mazaaq kar rahay ho na…

Rahul: Haan ofcourse…(he said covering up the stiffness in his facial expression by managing to pull off his old smile in front of Muskaan.)

Muskaan: Tu kya chiyay?

Rahul: huh?

Muskaan: Kal tumhara birthday hain na?

Rahul: (Surprised) Tumhay yaad hain?

Muskaan: Bhooli kub thi…(she imitates Rahul smiling as he just stares at her)

Rahul: Mujhay jo chiyay tha voh mujhay mill gaya…yeh birthday kabhi nahi bhoolo ga…

Muskaan: Really? Aisa kya mill gaya?

Rahul: Kya nahi Kaun…

Muskaan: Kaun?

Rahul: Tum…

Muskaan: (simply smiles) Rahul I am so glad…main bahut khush ho kay hum yahaan yun millay…tum shayad yeh jaan kar mujhay pagal samjho gay per inn ghuzray saaloon mein agar koi yaad maine apnay dil kay kareeb rakhi hain toh voh tumhari yaadein hain…jub kabhi bhi Prateek ko dekh kar Armaan ka khayaal ata hain tub na jaane kyun har baar tumhari koi baat yaad ajaati thi…aik taraf voh saari karvi baatein thi jo Armaan aur Meray rishtey ko torti rahi aur aik taraf tumharai yaadein thi jo humari dosti ko hamesha mazboot karti rahi… un yaadon ka shukriya bhi nahi kar sakti kyunki shayad voh yaadein kissi bhi "thank you" se bhar kay hain…

Rahul: Aur koi bhi yaad tumse bhar kar nahi hain… (this last sentence of Rahul made Muskaan look up at him and for a moment they both surrender themselves to it. Lost in eachother's eyes, not knowing the overwhelming emotions going through them.)

Splash! Splash!

Prateek: (breaks the trance as he splashes pool water at them) Mom…Rahul…App dono kitni baatein kartey hain…come on Mom meray saath kehlay bna…Rahul tum bhi aao… (Muskaan and Rahul both get up and go towards him and start to play around in the water.)

Muskaan: Prateek...Rahul app se barey hain…yun naam lay kay nahi bulatey…

Prateek: Per I like Rahul….Rahul, Rahul, Rahul… kitna acha naam hain na…

Rahul: Rehnay do Muskaan…mera naam Prateek se suna mujhay acha lagta hain…

Muskana: Lakin Rahul…

Prateek: Mom kya mein Rahul ko Dad bula sakta hoon…? (Muskaan looks shocked at his innocent request and Rahul looks at Muskaan waiting for her to say something but he notices her hesitant nature in an uncomfortable situation like this.)

Rahul: Champ I think Rahul is better for now… and maine kaha than a Dad sounds a bit tough…

Prateek: Toh theek hain ajj se main aur Rahul best friends…(he gives his hand to him and he shakes it well smiling and ruffling his wet hair.)

Muskaan: Rahul issay dosti bahut mehngi par sakti hain…

Rahul: Per mujhay yeh dosto manzoor hain…aur vaisey bhi Champ aur meray beech app si zayyda achi dosto rahay ge…hain na Champ!

Prateek: Yes! (he high fives him)

Muskaan: Dekhay gay kaan kiska kit na best friend banta hain…per abhi kay liye Prateek ko pool se bahir ana paray ga…it's time to go baby….

Prateek: Rahul Mom ko bolo na thodi der aur….

Rahul: (looks at Muskaan who gestures him a "no" for now as it was getting late) Umm…Champ voh kya hain na yeh jo apki Mom hain na voh ajj theek keh rahi hain, kyunki it's getting dark aur phir pool water is cold toh app ko sardi lag jaaye ge issi liye pool se bahir toh ana he hoga, per we'll come some other time….

Prateek: Mom se pehaly bolo pomise kalay…(he says innocently and Rahul looks at Muskaan.)

Muskaan: Fine baba…I promise…

Prateek: Aur Rahul kal humaray saath toy store waaley mall bhi chalay ga… (he jumps out the Pool and Rahul picks him up in his arms.)

Muskaan: Prateek…(warning tone)

Prateek: Please…please…plz…plz…bolo na rahul…please…

Rahul: Haan Muskaan I don't have any plans…

Muskaan: Per Rahul kal toh tumhari birthday…

Rahul: Haan jaanta hoon aur kal vaisey bhi Suku nay mujhay thodi der kay liye Paris akelay ghoomnay ko kaha hain, Karan bhi kal aayega then they are planning a surprise birthday which is not really a surprise….

Muskaan: Suku aur Karan tumharay saath aye hain…?

Rahul: Suku aye hain Boston se main Delhi se, airport per millay thay, yeh sub usi ka plan tha…Karan ki conference New York mein thi issi liye he'll be a day late…

Muskaan: Oh I see, per you sure Suku ko koi problem nahi hogi…?

Rahul: Nahi…

Prateek: Dekha Mom kissi ko koi poblem nahi hain…abb Rahul humaray saath aa sakta hain? Please…

Rahul: Please…(imitates Prateek and both make a puppy do face at Muskaan)

Muskaan: (laughs and gives in) Fine…theek hain. Rahul aik kaam karo tum meray cell mein apna number dal do, I'll call you….aur Prateek abb app meray pass ajao, Rahul ko pura geela kar diya hain…(she hands Rahul her cell phone and takes Prateek from him so that she could dry him with a towel that was in Prateek's bag.)

Rahul: Yeh lo maine apna cell number issi mein feed kardiya hain aur tumharay cell se khud ko missed call day de hain, subah nikal ne se pehlay call kar dena I'll be ready…Main street per jo Hotel De Crillon hain vahi per Suku aur main tehray hain… (he said giving Muskaan's cell back to her as she puts a shirt on Prateek after drying him well.)

Muskaan: Theek hain… Rahul abb Prateek aur main chaltey hain…

Rahul: Main drop kardo?

Muskaan: Nahi gari hain meray pass…aur Ridzi ka fashion show bhi hain toh bus usko bye keh kar nikal na hain…Prateek subah se ghar nahi gaya hain…he is tired… (She picked Prateek up in her arms as he rested his head on her shoulder looking tired.)

Rahul: Riddhima bhi yahaan hain?

Muskaan: Haan Ridzi yahaan per fashion designer hain aur main uskay kay saath he toh yahaan aye hon…baqi baatein baad mein bato gee…bye Rahul…

Rahul: Theek hain…(he kissed Prateek on his cheek as he was already falling asleep in her arms and waved Muskaan Bye) Take care…Bye…

Muskaan: kal miltay hain…Bye…(She left carrying Prateek as Rahul watched them leave he felt his oldself returning. A smile played on his lips like before and he looked up at the sky thanking god.)

Precap: Day at the Mall, Rahul's Birthday dinner with

everyone, reliving olden times…

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Posted: 16 years ago

absolutely WONDERFUL part!!

thanks for the pm!!
do continue soon!!
Edited by lovebapu18 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Imane.. what I say!!!

It was beautiful!!! The meeting was just perfect!!! 👏

Thank You SOOO Much!!
Update soon!! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thank you so much imane! Beautiful part! Thank GOD RM are on talking terms now.. Love you!

Thanks alot for the PM :) and continue soon :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
simply a great part imane...finallly RM met..it was just just tooo goood..not enough words to express how happy i m after reading this part...to goooddddd...

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