THE HEART'S SECRETS AR FF PART 21 NEW PART!!! - Page 5

Originally posted by: tanasha1993

Loved the 2nd part...and something

fishy is definitely going on...as you said

there is another motive of ridzy going

there...but what? omg the suspense

is killing me...wow! you have no idea how excited i feel to know that people are actually interested in finding out the real motive behind the whole visit at a stranger's house for 2 weeks!!!

oh and I needed to clarify...

do they know each others name? i would have loved to answer that question...but if i do, i'll be giving away too much information...because knowing each other's names is a huge significant factor to this story!!!

its just a random question...do cont soon yea

cant wait to read more

and if possible PM me...

 

love

tanu

Hey ... the story is turning into a mystery story now? Whats with this Peter? Is Peter not his real name? And why cannot he fall in love with Ridz?? Well, too confusing. Waiting to read on.

Originally posted by: suv.patki

Hey ... the story is turning into a mystery story now? Actually, i've read a lot of stories on this site, and with a few exceptions, most of them are just about flirting and love...so i thought that maybe it would be interesting to add a new twist...it's still a full on LOVE STORY...but it has a bit of adventure to it...Whats with this Peter? Is Peter not his real name? Just for fans to know, Peter is not his real name...his real name is actually Armaan, and the story will reveal that in the next part or so...and there is a concept behind him not telling her his real name and not loving her truely...YET. but there are many hints in part 3 that reveal why he can not do so! i promise you, it will be all clear in the next part...😊And why cannot he fall in love with Ridz?? Well, too confusing. Waiting to read on.

omg wat is dis???????? im confused .com (LOL). dis jus gets interesting update by update. the first thoughts dat came to my mind were dat hez either an absloute nutcase or..............n dont laff or..........a vampire..... i no i no it sounds stupid n dont ask hw i came to dat conclusion but i did. i guess i was a big fan of buffy the vampire slayer. well wat eva he is, he definately hidin summat big. dont no y but got a gut feeling he got summat to do with the murder she witnessed mayb not directly but mayb thru family unless his all family are or were serial killers( as ders no mention of dem being dead or alive oly wat keerti noz). luk at me blabbin on anyways do continue soon dying to no wat happens nxt

Originally posted by: rani 19

omg wat is dis???????? im confused .com (LOL). dis jus gets interesting update by update. the first thoughts dat came to my mind were dat hez either an absloute nutcase or..............n dont laff or..........a vampire..... i no i no it sounds stupid n dont ask hw i came to dat conclusion but i did. i guess i was a big fan of buffy the vampire slayer. well wat eva he is, he definately hidin summat big. dont no y but got a gut feeling he got summat to do with the murder she witnessed mayb not directly but mayb thru family unless his all family are or were serial killers( as ders no mention of dem being dead or alive oly wat keerti noz). luk at me blabbin on anyways do continue soon dying to no wat happens nxt

lMFAO!!!🤣 WOW! omg this is the cutest comment i've seen yet! hahaha...thanx soo much! don't wry, when i read my part again, i also thought for a second that maybe i was getting too much into this all...but really, that's the amazing part of writing this story! thanx for the comment!!

lov iram

hey, this is such a different story...getting interesting with every part...he cant kiss on her lips?? wats that?!!! the physical bits, its going a bit fast but u made it clear that even they r feeling its fast...so, thats fine...wats with his family? mystery mystery hmm...plz post the next part soon... i like the way u r writing it😊

awesome part..... continue soon