THE HEART'S SECRETS AR FF PART 21 NEW PART!!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: rhama2

wow!!! was the first word that came to my head after reading it!!!
the concept is so different!!!
i loved the whole part
it was very natural and beautiful!!
the thoughts that came naturally to her head on hearin that her dad was going to keerti's place and that she might get raped/pregnant on babysitting the teenage guy shows her curious state of mind!!!
also love the description of the hero in the beginning!!!
waiting for his entry!!!-"armaan"
READ CHAPTER 2!!
can u pm me the next time u update???

love:
aishwarya

p.s. where is the whole story taking place??
is it italy? coz of italian accent? or france coz of french braids?
asking out of curiousity!!
LOL! 😆 actually, i was first thinking about having the setting take place in Barcelone...but the place is actually Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada!! i have to say, you're very observant! no one had noticed or thought of that factor yet!...or has atleast asked me...thanx!

awaesum yaar... Edited by cute_madhu - 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

awaesum yaar...

WOW.....amzin update//loved tis prt to bits..

 

will give detailed compliment later..buh till then..

heres mah quota......👏

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Love ya loads......t.ccccccc

THANK YOU SOOOOOOOO MUCH! YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOUR COMMENT MEANS TO ME! IT REALLY HELPS ME IN GOING ON WITH WRITING MORE...LOVE YOU LOADS!❤️ ❤️

 

 

 

                        -Ur's Ever Madhu😳

OMG........ i luv it... itz soooooo cuteeeee..........Just WONDERFULLLLL...... Plzzzz PM me....

i just read the 2nd part
and it was as awesome and wonderful as the first one
the descriptions abt the mansion,then keerti giving ridz the cool look makeover from the winter look,
and BANG ON the entry of armaan was all fabulous!!!!

waiting for the next part
love:
aishwarya

p.s. by the way what are flip-flops?? shoes??
Edited by rhama2 - 15 years ago

hiiii,

hey sifters...wow this is quite a story already hun....love the freshness of concept, the age difference from the charaters we are suppose to imagine here and all that...its sounding greart, continue soon, n do PM me!

Originally posted by: spln

hey sifters...wow this is quite a story already hun....love the freshness of concept, the age difference from the charaters we are suppose to imagine here and all that...its sounding greart, continue soon, n do PM me!

Hi there! omg! i'm such a huge fan of your work! thanx so much for the comment!...plz pm me too when u update yours! take care!