JaNNe tU yA JAne na(AR)...part9 pg 13 9/7

Hey guys I m a new member , I have written a ff

 

Pls comment

DIL MIL GAYE continues''''''👏

I WILL UPDATE SOON.........
JANE TU YA JANE NA''.

Dr Armaan Mallik: played by Karan Singh Grover

Dr. Ridhima Gupta...Mallik: played by Shilpa Anand/ sukruti Khandpal/jenifer

(any one who is on ur mind while reading)
AR-Ri ,AT-AN ar engaged,rahul nd muskan r married again(they had to in the pressure of their family)

So...here it goes:

 

 Part1

 

Outside OT

Sha:good work dr Malik👏

Ar: thank u sir

Sha: so have a good day!!!

Ar:same to u sir😊

 

Locker room:

R:yeh isq haye bathe bithye janat dikaye haaiye'''''''..

Ar: Oye hoye!!!!!......basket aaj mood bahut acha hai''''.

R: Jabhi tum he dekhti hu to mood acha ho jata hai

A:asi baat hai''''''..

R: haa!!!!!

A:coffee!!!!

R:chalo''

A:after u''''.

 

Canteen:

R:kitna hectic day than na'.

A: ha!!!!

 

A boy enters, he is Dr aditya  (Mayank of miley jab hum tum), He's  a bit shy , intelligent, nd has all that 'Indian sanskar'.he was ridhima's collage friend who was now an intern in sanjeevani, his nature is very like Ridhima's .

 

Ad:hi guys!!!!

R:hi adi!!

Ad:hi ridzi!!!!! Hi arman!!1

A:hi!!!

R:why don't u join us

Ad:thanks

A:(makes a face)aa gaya kabab me hadi

R looking at him

Ad:arman tum ne kuch kaha

A:na

Ad:ridzi how was ur day

R:good aur tumhara kaisa tha

Ad:good

R:muje to bhahot bhook lagi hai,

Before ar could speak

Ad:tumhare liye hot choclate lata hu!!!!!!ar tumare liye kuch

Ar:no thanks cutting in between (controlling his anger why did he always try to come near ridhima)

He leaves

R:tum us se itna rudely baat kyu karte ho

A:tum mujse keh rahi ho jase tum janti nahi

R:who mera acha dost hai,tume jalan kyu ho rahi hai

A:muje jalan nahi ho rahi hai

R:to fir

A:mai jar aha hu tum apne 'dost'ke sath hot choclate enjoy karo

R:arma'..

He leaves'.

 

Later changing room

Ar  was  changing  with his back at the door ,some one was watching him '', suddenly some one hugged him from back

R:naraaz ho!!!!

A:ji nahi dr ridhima ....app galat soch rahe hain mai kaun hota hu tumse gussa hone wala    ab aap mujhe jaane denge....!!!!

Ri  grabs his hand as he was abt to leave......
ar: ridhima  mera haath chodo.....muje jane do

ri:aur naa jaane dun to.....

ar: mujhe chodo naa koi dekh lega.....

ri:nai...aur wais ye to meri line hai na
ar:ri yeh kya bachpana hai.....?????

rid:mere sheru....n she kisses him on his cheeks.....

arm:ae basket yeh kya kar rahi ho....kissi ne dekh liya to....

rid:dekhne do....

arm:acchaa....to yeh baat hai.....and he  turns her around in a twist and brings her more closer to him.....then armaan encloses her in his arms.....

the song starts playing....

ishq leta hai kaise imtehaan.....
ishq mein jeeun....
ishq mein marun ...
ishq hi mera bhagwaan...........................

 

ar:I LOVE U BASKET!!!!!

Ri:I LOVE U TOO!!!

Ri was now blushing''.ar muje chodo

Ar:are tum ne muje pehle pakda aur ab

R:aur ab mai he '''..

Ar tightens his grip over ridhimma....her lips comes too close to his.....!!!!

Ar moves his forward nd kisses her n she responds back passionately

They r kissing when suddenly

A some one comes in she is wearing a short skirt and a halter top'''''''''.

 

Pre:who is that girl'''''..

 

Guys how was it??????

 

PLS PLS COMMENT'''''''''..

 

Waiting for ur comment

ridhima😊

Edited by ridzi830 - 14 years ago

let me guess, the girl is nikita,

hey welcome to ff section n very nice part

Hey dear welcome to the FF section... Gr8 concept.. i liked the first part.. gud to c AR so much in luv............... very eager to knw abt the girl... Plzz continue soon..............😊 n all the best........

hi

hey....that was very good..please continue soon!

PART2

Jane tu ya jane na

 

 

Ar-ri were kissing when suddenly

A some one comes in she is wearing a short skirt and a halter top……………………….

Voice: uhh….umm…sorry….uhh......mujhe pta nai tha ki tum log yahan par…😲

Armaan looked up to see who it was n Ridhima moved away from Armaan….….she is Dr nikita(shweta gulati),their fellow intern

Ni:sorry, I did not know that u were…..

Ar:it's ok

Ar-ri were blushing☺️

Ri-Ar walks out………

 

Outside

Ri is reading a file & ar is staring her😍

Ri:kya!!!!

Ar:winks😉

rid:armaan....stop it....n she smiles....

ar:oye hoye!!!!

Ri:waise aaj tum free ho??

Ar:tumhare liye to mai hamesha free hu!

Ri:aarman…..

Ri:mai soch rahi thi ki kya tum mere saath shopping aaoge

Ar:shopping…….

Just then

Muskan and rahul enters fighting

ra:Abey muskaan ki bachi..kya bak rahi hai..
Muskaan: Oye khothe chup kar……

Ar:guys stop it yaar….

Mu:is rahul ke bache ko bol…

Ra:muje…

An:(entering)cut it guys

At:ha yaar tum log thak nahi jate jagadte

Ni:(coming out of changing room) hi guys!!!

All:hi

Ra:so tum log aaj sam ko kya kar rahe ho kal off hai to kahi bahar jaye what say??

At:ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai,kyu arman

Are: actually (looking at ridhima) mai aur basket aaj shopping karne jarahe hai

An:shopping….mai aur atul bhi a rahe hai

Ni:mai bhi

Mu:mai aur rahul bhi, waise bhi shadi ko 1 mahina bhi nahi bacha  hai aur…….

Ra:shadi humari nahi hai….

Mu:pata hai…..

Ri:stop it guys!!

Ar:so it's decided we all r going

Adi(entering)kaha jane ka plan ban raha hai????

Ri:shopping…..

Ar:hamari shadi ki….

Ra:tum a rahe ho na???

Adi:if all r going then ok

Ar makes a face

Autul's face expressions change,arman notices this

At:excusse me guys!!!mai ata hu!!walks out

Ar:(to ri) mai  abhi aya

 

Outside

Ar:champ kya problem hai!!!!

At:who kuch nahi…….

Ar:jooth mat bol bol kya problem hai

At:arman tu to janta hai na ki maine abhi ek naya ghar liya

Ar:to…

At:to….woh aise me shopping…..

Ar:are to tu is liye pareshan hai!!

At:ha…

Ar:kya ha tu muje bol nahi sakta…anyways tu mera bhai hai aur mere hote hua tuje chinta karne ki kya jarurat hai……

At:par…

Ar:par war kuch nahi….aur maine to (looking side ways) slowly..$#&*!@#$$^&&%*

At:tu mera sacha bhai ha

They hug each other…….chal andar

At:so sab duty ke bad milte hai……….

 

Arman ridhima

 

Ridhima is walking in the corridor singing"u r my mind blowing mahiya…….."

Suddenly…..some one dragged her to the fire escape

 

R: aah!!

 

arm:basket..........shh....quite...mai hu....

Armaan….tum bhi na...darra diya mujhe..

A: hmm…dar gayi!!! he closed is eyes…as he gently wrapped her around his arms….Ridhima  smiled as he came close to her

rid:armaan kya hai...

arm:kuch nahi....

 

rid:to main jaa rahi  hun ok...!!!!!

arm:aap kahan chali dr ridhimma.....itni aasani se thode naa chali jayengi....

rid:kya matlab....

armaan holds her tight towards the wall......he goes near and near to her and he  kisses on her forehead den cheeks ....then he kisse her on her lips..... They both kiss each other passionately and are lost…
 
 Armaan smiled....n looked at her, her  eyes get filled with tears….She was so happy to have Armaan in her life...n though she didnt say it...her eyes said that to Armaan...

Ar:tum ro kyun rahi ho....marese koi bhool.......

rid:armaan tum mujhe hamesha aise hi pyar karoge naa.....?????

 

Ar nodded

Ridhima slowly kissed his chest....n then moved towards his neck….when Armaan gently kissed her hair...he is moving down to her neck...as Ridhima closes her eyes...the feeling of his warm breath on her neck….sent shiverrs down her spin...her hand took a tight hold at his hand...As Armaan kissed her ear...... Ridhima put her arms around his back...n Armaan's grip on her got tighter....He again kissed her neck…n then her cheek..n again went to the other side of her neck..n was abt to go to her shoulder...wen suddenly Ridhima relaise what they were doing,and where they were...n let go off him..she blushed...n proceeded towards the door...

Ar:I love u basket!!!!!

 

Precap:ar-moments coming up!!!!!😉

hey ridz welcm 2 ths fanfic section nd wow yaar wht a grt ff yaar aa,rm,arridz engangd wowwwwwwwwwwww yar soooooooooo romantic yaar all r oooooo happppppppy nd ar again sad bcz ofadi omgggggggggggg yar ar soooooo possessive abt her wowwwwwww chooooooooooooooooooo cute yaar lv 2 read mre nw shoppng grt
ont sooooooooooon
luv yachna

hey thanks 4 liking my work..............................😊
will update soon.......................
-ridhima

Hey Ridz.. cute part.. really liked it.... AR moments were gud..... Atul n Armaan bonding is also very nice..... Well looking forward for the shopping bit.. PLzz do continue soon...😊