JaNNe tU yA JAne na(AR)...part9 pg 13 9/7 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
heyy......that was really good!! please continue soon!! :))
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
that was fantastic plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13

hi

thks for the pm dear

nice part yaar

AR scenes are cuteeeeeeeeeee

sooooo sweet

update sooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
great ff! cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
hey ridz wowwwwwwwwww yaar evry1 goi fr shoppng wowwwwwwwwwww superb yaar nd ar chooooo chweeeeeeet yaar hlpng atul awwwwwwwwww cut nd ridz ar hd their romantic momnts in romantic plce wowwwwwwww fire escape jaha koi ata jata hai nahi grt yaar cnt wait fr nxt prt plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont ooooooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
hmmm loved part 2,
AR romantic scene was very well written
continue soon dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey!!!!
   thanks guys 4 liking my work............i promise some of great AR moments........do reply...........
-ridhima😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wll be waitng fr tht update cont soooooooon
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hey, guys
thanks 4 liking my work.......i will update soon after diwali.......
HAPPY DIWALI TO ALLL....................👏
-ridhima😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 3

 Hey guys,

SORRY....SORRY...4 the late update........thanks for liking my work

Pls comment,

 

Precap:All decide to go for shopping……ar-ri share some passionate moments

 

Aditya & Nikita

Locker room:

[nik & adi liked each other a lot but they used to fight on small things (like ar-ri) but still they had feelings for each other but their ego did not let them confess]

ni was sitting on the bench

Ni:"na na na na………………"

Adi  was studing an important case file.

Adi:yaha koi shanti se kam bhi nahi karsakta

Ni:"kabhi khud pe hasa……….."

Adi:mai tum se baat kar raha hu!!!!!

Ni:"na na na………..

Adi standing up and faces nikita, she was hearing a songs on her ipod and did not hear what adi said.

Ni:tum ne kuch kaha?????

Adi:ha kaha ke apna besura mu bandh rakho muje kam karma hai

Ni:tum ne muje besura kaha ……

Adi:ha kaha to…

Ni:how dare u!! saying she raised her hand to hit him,but he catches her hand and she looses her balance but adi held her by her waist

Both r lost in each others eyes

Song starts playing

"is this love……….

Adi:(moving towards her lips)
Nik: (she closes her eyes)😳

Nik leans forward & adi also come forward and were so close they felt each others breath they kissed each other passionately

They heard giggling sound, they broke apart and were socked to see all "ig"(intern gang) standing there with a surprised look on their face!!!!!!

Adi & nik were so embarrassed

Nik:who muje…….duty pe jana hai (she leaves)

Adi:muje bhi…….

 

At:yeh log to chupe rustam nikle

Mu:ha yaar muje to smajme nahi a raha ke ye dono……

Ra:arman tu itna kyu muskura raha hai

Ar:tuje kya pata aaj muje kitni khushi ho rahi hai……looks at ridhima smiling

An:aise konsi baat hai……

Ri:who kuch nahi di………..

An:whatever…………….

Ar:so guys yaad hai na ki hame shopping pe jana hai

Mu:ha who hum kaise bhool sakte hai!!!!!

Ar:to thik hai mai tum logo ko pick up karlunga

Ra,mu an,ri:cool

At:are adi aur niks ko bhi

Ra:muje nahi lagta ki who log hamare saath aenge…..especially abhi jo hua uske baad..

All:ha yaar

An:to mai unhe inform kar deti hu ke who log hame mall ke bahar mile

Ok

Ra:to chale

An:ha ridzi chal

Ar:signals her not to go with anji

Ri:di aap jao muje thoda kaam hai mai aa jaungi

Ar smiles

An:ok par jaldi karma……..

Ri:ji

All leave ar-ri standing there

 

Ri:kya hai kyu muje di ke saath jane nahi diya????😡

Ar:kyuki……moves forward

Ri:stepping back ward………….kyu

Ar:batadu………………

 

Precap:a girl wearing Capri and red halter walked out of gupta house……..she was looking so gorgeous …………………..

 

How was it guys!!!!!

I know it was small but my exams r on so I m a bit tired.but promise to bring some great ar-moments in next episode

Pls comment

 

-ridhima.