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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: varshita
update karo naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Kar diya hai darling.😊😊😊

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#212

Hi Dear

I read the whole update..It was shocking for me too specially main vamp was Sherry..😡Why did she hated Raj so much?????It was emotional when Raj begged for Naina's life..

Loved the way in which every1 handled the difficult situation..So fianlly Sherry died but Raj was in utter pain of losing his loved1 ...

But in the end all was fine...😛

Last scenes were really cool

Raj kahan ho tum?" Naina asked.

She searched him n found him playing with their two naughty and sweet kids Raina and Nihaal.

"Kya Raj tum bhi na baccho k saath bacche ban jaante ho." Naina complnied smiling.

"Haan aur aao tum bhi ban jaao baccha na." he said n pulled her hand.

Here Abhi and Nandini:-

"Nandini kahan reh gaye thi aap?" Abhi asked her.

"Bus aap k ladlon ko lene gayi thi school se." Nandini told him.

"Oh to humare sher aa gaye." He kissed his both children. Do pyaare pyaare se bete hain Abhi aur Nandini k, Namit aur Prakhar.

"Papa aa gaye." Two small kids jumped with joy when they saw their papa.

"Haan aa gaye papa aur ye tum logon ki chocolate." He gave it to them.

"Ye Alekh tub hi na in dono ki aadat kharab kar raha hai na." Neelu said.

"Haan aur teri aadat bhi apun ne hi kharab ki hai na." He winked Neelu.

Nishant a boy and Ashlesha a gal kid; this is the small and happy family of Alekh.

HAPPY ENDING

But wat abt Huda,yudi Pooja n Ali..Hope they r fine too.

Do start some new fiction as u r n exceptional writer👏

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#213

Hiii Vertika ,
i read it n liked it dear....am really very shocked😲😲😲 it's SHERRY !😲 i never thought that all these things r done by sherry.why the hell she do that😡 that tooo with Raj who luv her like his sis. apne Papa ki maut ka badla lena chahti thi but Lala ne jo kiya tha kya sahi tha...😕😕😕am really feel Sorry for Raj.😒
well am happy that Ali, Pooja, Huda , Yudi also join them n Saved Naina.aur major Vidyarthi paid too much for what he done😭😭😭 he sacrifice his life.
yaar waise Raj n Naina finally have an a complete family. the name of their kids r very nice like them...😳am also happy for Abhi n Nandini & also for Alekh n Nilu.u made a perfect ending.
am gonna miss it sooooo much.
n for ur wonderfull job u deserve this ...👏
👏
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Rituka

@rituka7

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#214

the update is as usual awesome
i love this fic .
it is damn cool

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Riya

@Riya_16

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#215

Hello!!!Vertika!!!

What an update.......with so much happening.....

That vamp was Sherry!!!!!😲😲

Thank God Naina was saved.........

😊

Poor Raj....he had to go through so much of pain...and grief...😭😭😭

Brilliant.....😃👍🏼

specially the last part...Raj and Naina with their kids....

how sweet....

You are a very talented writer...and on the completion

of your fic you deserve ....👍🏼

The update was too good....mindblowing.....

Take care.

Love

Riya.

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litika

@litika

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#216

awwwwwwwwwww ending bahut hi cute thi sabki apni apni families .....i really liked ur fic it was really good........start another fic soon...plz...will be waiting😃

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#217

hey that was so cool and sweet

Sherry Eagle thi my god i cannot even imagine how Raj was feeling at that time

that was so bad poor raj

but all wells if end wells

so wonderful story love raj naina romance and sceneces too

plz continue with ur new fics and with already started ones too

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404_NotFound

@404_NotFound

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#218

wow what an emotional update..i was shocked to know it was sherry behind all this..poor raj..he loved her truely as a small sister but she turned out to be a devil.

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#219

👏👏👏

wat n updt......brilliant...........d way it began wid d thrill n den emotional n den at d end cute romantic1.....

superb!!!!

ur fic was amazing.........d way it started naina searchin for raj n den rn love n romance also abhi n nandini
wid huda ,ali ,pooja n yudi.....not frgt aalekh.......den came d thrill n action part..........

gr8 dialoges as well...........it had all d elements of good fic..........

it was a rocking fic⭐️⭐️⭐️