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Posted: 9 years ago
sbse pehle to for your 25th chapter...oolalalal...kya baat...bs yhin to chiye tha 😉😆 hehehe yaar i luv this part *hiding my face* but seriously luv luv luv for this chapter...and girl you have written it in such a way that it is hot but yet cute...in this hot scenes you never forget to keep up with their cuteness and simplicity...luv you for this chappy...
now 26th chapter...hogaye siyeppe... lag hi rha tha bt vo kehte h vo samandar hi kya jisme tufaan na aaye 😉 so i a eager to know aage kya hone vala h...lets hope for the best...
lots of love :*
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: UrjaLuvsWahi

Chapter 25 ke bare mein main kya kahoon?? *hides face* So frking hot that was..uff temperature badh gaya yaar room ka! I cant get over that scene! Thank you for this one! *blush blush*

Im worried abt sumona now...pata nahi kya hua hoga jo woh itni hurt hai...im anxious to know!



I should be hiding face! Most welcome but pleasure was all mine 😉 Haan yaar you wanted the story to be longer so there will be challenges coming up and KaSum will have to face it with love, patience, anger and what not ! Lets see how it goes. . Mujhe bhi idea nahi hai how do I end this story 😛

Thank you :)

Lots of Pyaar
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Uff... hotness personified in kasu... ☺️ damn... temp bad gya yaar... pari ne sameer ko thappad mara 🤣 are ab kya ho gya... kyu bechari sumo ko koi chain se jeene nhi deta 😔




😆 Yaar comments padh kar toh aur bhi embarrassment horahi hai ! 😆 Haan na Smart princess as Kappu says 😉 Few more twist & turns in the story before we reach the end :) Hope you will enjoy it.
Thank you Mansi :*

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhirpalak

Hi buddy😊oh my god beautiful done😛love love love you you you. In short love you😳yeh romance uff😳sumona is crying. But why???. Actually today is my birthday😆so aaj ke din gift meh mujhe next update Dedo pls Di😭mera birthday will be memorable. Aur update birthday special dena pls pls pls. Aapki Behen ka birthday hai aaj



😃 Heyyy Palak :) Happy Happy Happy wala birthday to you chweeto 😃 Glad that you liked it. Waise hum rehte alag alag jagah pe na iseliye time difference hai. 27th is your bday or 26th ? Will update it soon chweeto rakhlena bday gift samjh kar 😉 Love you more chweeto :) Happy Birthday again.

Lots of Pyaar :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aashup

sbse pehle to for your 25th chapter...oolalalal...kya baat...bs yhin to chiyetha😉😆hehehe yaar i luv this part *hiding my face* but seriously luvluvluvfor this chapter...and girl you have written it in such a way that it is hot but yet cute...in this hot scenes you never forget to keep up with their cuteness and simplicity...luv you for this chappy...

now 26th chapter...hogaye siyeppe... lag hi rha thabt vo kehteh vo samandarhi kya jismetufaan naaaye😉so i a eager to know aage kya hone valah...lets hope for the best...
lots of love :*



Bas kar babes already itni embarrassed hoon mein !!! So happy that you notice every little thing in the chappy :) Thank you so much babes :* Love you mooorrreee :) Wah wah ! Kya baat kahi hai ;) Badi smart ho babes aap ;) Updating it sooon ! Yeah & lets see aapki umeed kaam aati hai ki nahi siyyappa hi hota hai :(

Thank you :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 27th.

Goes to Palak urf Chweeto ;) Happy Birthday to you and Have an awesome year ahead :) Yaad se cake bhijwadena ;)

Enjoy !

Kapil's confusion was now fading away slightly when he saw Dadi in the room. She came and sat on the rocking chair. Her hand resting on her stick.His mom stood beside Dadi.

"Puch mujhse kya puchna hai " She sated and he took a deep breath trying to stay normal.

"Aapne Sumona se kya kaha ?"

"Yehi ke agar woh tujhse shaadi karna chahti hai toh usse uss bachi ko chodna hoga " Dadi informed calmly.

"Kya ?! " He has seen Sumona's love for Pari and has also experienced the love she had for him.

"Haan. . Ab kya woh apni shaadi mein apni bachi ko leker aayegi ? Woh toh uski sagi bhi nahi hai. . . Pata nahi aaj kal ke bacche kaise badoun se puche bina faisle kar lete hai. . Agar woh bacchi ko nahi chodegi toh tu bhi usse shaadi nahi karega " Dadi said looking at Kapil who was shocked to know that his own Dadi did this. How will Sumona ever choose between her daughter and her man ? What kind of a choice is this ? its a clear defeat.

" Dadi yeh kaisi situation mein daaldiya aapne Sumona ko ?"

"Teri Sumona ne khud kaha ke woh Pari ko chodne ke liye tayyar nahi hai toh matlab woh tujhse shaadi nahi karna chahti. . " This was definitely something to laugh on. He was sure Sumona hasn't said she doesn't want to marry him. Its Dadi who doesnt want them to get married and this has hurt him badly.

"Aur waise bhi log jab uss bacchi ko tum dono ke saath dekhengey toh pata nahi kya kya sonchengey. . Samaaj mein humara naam badnaam hojayega " She said cleaning her glasses with the corner of her dupatta.

"Accha ? Aapke issi samaaj mein se kisine Pari ko sadak par chodiya aur MERI SUMONA " Dadi's hands halted hearing so and she looked up at him.

"Tameez bhool gaye ho apni ?"

"Nahi bhoola iseliye aapko samjhane ki koshish kar raha hoon ke meri Sumona ne ek choti si bacchi ko sahara diya. . Pyaar diya. . Mamta di. . Aur aaj bhi woh yehi khwaish rakhti hai ke woh Pari ko ek acchi zindagi de sakey aur mujhe isme kuch galat nahi dikhayi deta. . Balki garv hai mujhe apni Sumona par " His heart swelled with pride and more respect for her grew.

"Kya jadoo tona kardiya hai usne humarey bete par ?" Dadi questioned looking at Aunty.

"Yeh kya badtameezi hai Kapil ? Aise baat kartey hai badoun se ?" Aunty questioned holding his arm.

"Aur nahi toh kya karoun maa ? Yeh "log kya kahengey" iss sawal ne lakhoun ko khush zindagi jeene se roka hai. . Sumona ne jab Pari ko apnaya tha tab usne logo ke baremein nahi soncha balki uss be sahara bacchi ke baremein soncha ! Aap log kyun nahi samjhtey ? " He felt broken inside. His own family whom he expected to be his support system was standing against.

"Tu kyun nahi samjhta ? Hume bahu chahiye naki ek bacchi ki Maa !" Dadi got up.

" Shaadi ke baad aapki bahu maa hi baneygi. . Lad rahi hai woh aapke iss samaaj se apni bacchi ki khushi ke liye. . Aur jab mein uska saath dena chahta hoon toh kyun rok rahe ho mujhe ?" It was so painful to actually argue with his own family & he hated doing so.

The room went quiet. Pin drop silence it was until Kapil decided to break the ice. He missed someone right now.

"Agar aaj Papa hotey na Maa toh mera saath dete. . Sumona ko apni bahu banatey aur Pari ko apni sagi poti se zyada pyaar kartey. ." His eyes welled up with tears. His heart was shattered in millions of pieces right now.

"Bachpan mein hamesha yehi suna hai ke badoun ki izzat karna chahiye. . Aur mein nahi chahta ke meri shaadi se koi bhi naraz ho. . Mein intezaar karunga aap logo ke faisle ke liye par Sumona se hi shaadi karunga aur Pari meri hi beti hai. . " A minute more and he knew he will break down in tears and cry like a baby.

A/N

Life hai jannat thodi. . Problems toh bohot aayengey they will have to face it. Sorry guys for making Kappu & Sumo cry :(
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Posted: 9 years ago
This part was way too emotional for me. Aansu agaye yaar. So beautifully shown though. Each n every line was so realistic. This is such a big problem..society..ke log kya sochenge woh kya kahenge humare bare mein n what not. It actually ruins everything more than unites people. I just hope dadi agrees. Tht last part where he mentioned his dad was the saddest part!
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was so emotional... kappu ne to rula hi dia yaar... 😔 kya log bhi jab dekho samaj samaj karte rehte h... sahi bola kappu ne... isi samaj m se to kisi ne pyaari si pari ko sadak p chhod dia tha 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
Last chapter was so emotional 😭
Kapil made me cry.😭 Kapil lines just touched me.
"Bachpan mein hamesha yehi suna hai ke badoun ki izzat karna chahiye. . Aur mein nahi chahta ke meri shaadi se koi bhi naraz ho. . Mein intezaar karunga aap logo ke faisle ke liye par Sumona se hi shaadi karunga aur Pari meri hi beti hai. . "
These above lines are so beautifully written.
HAts off to you for writing such story👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Di 😊 thank you so much for this wonderful gift. Cake Kya party Bhi doongi don't worry😉. Sorry for late commenting birthday tha na toh party and all 😛 aap Kahan rehate Ho? Uss hisab se time difference bataongi 😛 Di the story is greeting more and more interesting well Di it's just a thought don't mind it😆 Agar sumona ke Bhi parents add karo aur sumona ke parents uss ke shaddi kissi rich person she karvae and if she don't agree than they will kill pari (sorry it's rude) so jab yeh baat kappu ko pata challe toh vo sumona ko uske shaddi we bhaga ke le jaye aur wo Bhi Sab ke Samane with a gun in his hand 😛. And then he will fight for the world for his love😳 what say😆 just a thought to make story more interesting. For more information you can see the video of Maula song from Mirza the untold story it will look amazing. Bakki you know better😛



Thank you mujhe itna Sara pyaar dene ke Liye aur update jaldi Karana waiting 😳
Lots of pyaar and respect 😛 and I love you for this sweet name (Chweeto) love you

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