Kasum os - unconditional love part 3 updated on pg 2 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

20

Views

4.2k

Users

11

Likes

37

Frequent Posters

TunesOfHeart thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Great start. Loved both the parts, short but worth read
Do continue soon!!
aashup thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#12
God. ... Yaar tum kapil ke show m scripting to nhi krti 🤣
What punches yaar 🤣hats off
Awsome and cool udate it is
Dyeing to read next update
😊
Naturegirl99 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Welcome to the Kasum writing world..and what a grand entry! Yar kidhar the tum itni der? Too good..I laughed aloud while reading it..the funniest ff on them so far. Loved loved loved it..Ur writing is pure delight to read. Keep it up..and Plz do update soon waiting. Cheers!
luvakanksha thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Part 3

Kapil stood in front Sumona's house and was about to ring the bell, but stopped.
Kapil - Mai red roses kyun le aaya? Kahin woh kuch galat toh nahi sochegi? Kya Kapil tum bhi, tu usko directly kayi baar I love u bol chuka hai, pagal ladki aise hasti hai jaise world ka sabse bada joke mara ho.
Kapil rang the bell n waited. But Sumona wasn't opening the door. He shouted her name n started knocking the door. The door remained unattended so he thought to call Sumona.
Kapil - Sumona darwaza kyun nahi khol rahi ho? Mai Bahar khada hun
Sumona - ohhhkkk wait I i am com cominggg
Kapil - kya hua aise shivering awaz kyun aa rahi hai...
But his questions remained unanswered as Sumona kept the call.
Kapil waited for another 2-3 minutes n saw the door opening.
What he saw gave him a shock. The red roses he bought were now the ground. Sumona looked terrible, her nose was red, eyes were teary n she was shivering in the blanket she was covered in. She could barely stand on her legs. Kapil was speechless. He suddenly saw Sumona falling backwards due to weakness, but Kapil was quick to break her fall. He was shocked when he touched, she was burning with fever. He picked her up in his arms n took her to her room. Her eyes were closed, Kapil started panicking now. He made her lie down on her bed. Her room was a mess. Full of used tissue papers, n huge amount of tea cups atleast 7 of them. Kapil called his doctor n asked him to come to Sumona's house immediately. Kapil covered her with one more blanket and started picking up the tissue papers n cleaned her room. He ran to the kitchen n bought cold water, he took out his handkerchief n dipped it in cold water n started putting it on her head.
Sumona was murmuring unnecessary things in her fever.
Kapil- pagal ladki yeh iska thoda sa viral fever hai, bevkuf. Aur Chanda bai kahan hai? Aur yeh Sumona bhi toh ek no ki gadhi hai aaj chuuti kyun di maid ko? Aur DE bhi toh subah mughe nahi batah sakti thi akeli hai Ghar Mai, main aa jaata. Par nahi...
Door bell rang.
Kapil - doctor hongey.
He ran towards the door n opened it, he held the doctor hand and ran dragging him behind, it was sheer luck that the doctor didn't tripped due to kapil's force. He stopped running once he reached near Sumona.
Kapil- doctor Dekho jaldi bohat fever hai isko.
The doctor was panting for air because of the run.
Doctor - Mr Kapil relax. Peeche haton let me check.
Kapil moved back n doctor checked Sumona.
Kapil- kya hua doctor yeh pagal ankh kyun nahi khol rahi?
Doctor - Kapil just shut up, n let me check u get me a glass of water.
Kapil ran towards the kitchen n bought water.
Doctor- thanks, Mr Kapil, Sumona ko viral hai, her fever is 102 degree right now, aap usko thande paani ki patiyan karein aur Har ghante uska temperature naape. Agar 4-5 ghante Mai usko hosh na aaya toh we have admit her in the hospital. Yeh dawanyi fever k liye, jaise hii uthe usko kuch khila k DE Dena, pls don't give anything heavy to eat. N if any problem comes just give me call.
Kapil - ok doctor thanks, your fees?
Doctor - yes rs 800, 200 ki medicine the rest my Consultancy fees.
Kapil- ok yeh lijiye.
Doctor - don't worry Mr Kapil ur girlfriend will be fine soon.
Saying this doctor left, Kapil was stunned by doctor's assumption therefore he was not able to correct him.
Kapil shook his head, n ran towards the kitchen, he opened the fridge n took out tomatoes n dhaniya. He immediately put the tomatoes on boil. He went to the bedroom n started putting cold stripes on Sumona's forehead. He called his mom in amritsar n learnt the recipe of tomato n dhaniya soup. While simultaneously putting stripes on her forehead. Then he got up n made soup for her, n went again to the bedroom, he checked her temperature again, it was 99 now. Sumona started opening her eyes much to kapil's relief.
Kapil - Sumona, thank god are u ok.
Sumona - hmmm, ahhh Mera Sar.
Kapil - kya hua?
Sumona - it's paining, she said almost in tears.
Kapil immediately wiped off her tears.
Kapil - sshhh I m here, hmm relax.
Sumona - papa k pass jaana hai woh Mera Sar Dard dur kareinge he is my superman.
Kapil - sshhh jayenge unke pass u relax, I'll just come.
But Sumona immediately held his hand
Sumona - no don't go mughe akele dar lagta hai Kapil, plssszzz, n she started crying again.
Kapil was amused with this child like women in front of her, only he knew how was he controlling his laughter in front of her cute antics. He immediately went n sat besides her wiped her tears.
Kapil - sshhh close ur eyes.
Sumona obeyed him like a little girl.
Kapil- now only open it when I tell u to do so ok.
Sumona - hmmm
Kapil immediately ran towards the kitchen took out a bowl washed it n served soup he made in it. N walked back to the bedroom.
Kapil- ab khol apni aankhen Sumona.
Sumona opened her eyes.
Kapil - now sit.
He helped her to sit n Sumona clutched his shirt to help herself up. Kapil bought the bowl in front of her.
Sumona - chiii yeh kya hai?
Kapil - chiii???? Soup hai Sumona, ab kya itni bimaari Mai biryaani khilau tumhe?
Sumona - Mai yeh nahi piyungi, yuck.
Kapil- ok thik toh bye then.
Sumona immediately clutched his shirt again with tears in her eyes. N opened her mouth.
Sumona - aaa
Kapil smiled n started feeding her the soup. He gave her medicine.
Sumona - yeh kadwi hogi?
Kapil- nahi roshogula jaise meethi hogi, pagal ladki dawanyi jaise hogi Khao Chup chap.
Sumona was still clutching his t-shirts with both her hands, as if he would vanish if she would leave it. She again opened her mouth.
Sumona - aaa
Kapil kept the tablet in her mouth n made her drink water.
Kapil- Sumona u can leave me now by the way
It was only then Sumona realized that she was holding his shirt. She immediately left it n moved back.
Kapil got up, but Sumona again held his hand.
Sumona - kahan ja rahein ho.
Kapil- Sumona yeh bowl aur glass rakhne ja raha hun bas do minutes Mai aaya.
Sumona - yeh rehne do side table pe u sit na with me pls.
Kapil sighed n kept the bowl on the side table.
Kapil- Chanda bai kahan hai?
Sumona - aajkal woh chuuti par hai iske rozze hai.
Kapil - ohhhkkk.
Sumona - thanks.
Kapil - shut up warna Mai chala jaunga.
Sumona - sorry
Kapil - bye Sumona
Sumona - nahi nahi nahi no sorry no thank you I remember.
Kapil- subah bataya kyun nahi ki itni haalat kharab thi?
Sumona - subah fever nahi tha only cold n headache, afternoon Mai hua fever I tried calling u but couldn't.
Kapil sighed
Kapil- my adorable cute pagal Bacha ab Leto n sleep, I will massage ur head.
Sumona - ok.
Sumona slept as soon as her head hit the pillow due to the pill may be. Kapil checked her temperature again n it was normal now. He got n Cleaned the side table. When he came back he started massaging her head n he didn't knew when he fell asleep.

Precap
Kapil - I love u Sumona
Sumona - kuch bhi, quit joking Kapil.
Kapil - I m serious.
Sumona looked here n there to confirm, she was sure it's a prank. Ali, Kiku, Chandan, sunil n the biggest prankster preeti must be hiding somewhere.
Sumona - kahan chuppe hai sab, Tim sab milkar mughe bakra banana rahein ho?
Kapil could not control himself anymore, he was n angry n frustrated. So he kept his hands firmly on waist n pulled towards himself n to Sumona's shock his lips were on her, kissing the hell out of her.
Edited by luvakanksha - 9 years ago
UrjaLuvsWahi thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#15
The precap is making me too excited! This part was so cute..the soup, the care, sumona's innocence..everything was beautiful!
mansi_as18 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#16
God... ek kappu mjhe bhi dedo yaar... hae mar jawan... kinna sona update tha... and precap to... šŸ˜‰ u got me all excited there
TunesOfHeart thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Wow
Shooo shweet of kappu!!! Kitne acche se khayaal rakha apne bone wai biwi ka!! And bimaari mei bhi jokes and all! Loved this side of kapil and the precap was very amazing and the kiss!! I just cant wait for that!
update sooon!! Or i will die with curiosity!!
khjgj thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#18
I need the next part SOOONNN ! After that precap I seriously cant wait dude !!!! And aisa Kapil bazar mein milega kya ? Mujhe bhi ek aisa super caring Kappu lado na pleash :( I am so in love with his caring side which you showed so beautifully ! Sumo ke liye he called his mom in Amritsar & got the recipe of soup how thoughtful ! Alll tthhheee luck in the world to you girl This one is so awesome :)

Lots of pyaar :)
Edited by Kappumyfav - 9 years ago
Aaruhi1 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Hey where are you 😭 I was waiting for sooo long. Oh let me introduce myself I am shriti big fan of kasum I live in America. I am an Indian or you can say punjabi. šŸ˜† Pls continue please please please please 😭
Kapilian_Ipsita thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Hey..i am new in india-forum...a huge KaSu fan..i love this story soo much..u r super creative...witnig for the next part..but aap itna achha precap deke patani kaha chali gyi ho..???
can't wait for the new part..
lots of love..!!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".