Kasum os - unconditional love part 3 updated on pg 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys this is my very first kasum os, I write stories on Swasan but never ever wrote on kasum, so here I go - in Kapil style "agar story thik lagi toh thik warna forum Sai Bahar ja kar kissi ko batana mat, warna Mata rani paap lagayegi 🤣
Kasum - unconditional love. Part- 1
Tkss sets

Kapil could not believe that the set for his new show is ready n they r ready to shoot, he never wanted to leave cnwk that show gave him a lot, but unfortunately the channel created situations for him to leave. So here he is standing on stage for a new beginning.
He looked at his team, they left that channel for him. Ali, Kiku, sunil, Chandan, Sumona. He still understands Chandan walking out with him, he is his childhood friend. But the others? He remembers having this conversation with them,

Flashback
Kapil - guys main yeh show chod kar jaa raha hun, o have some creative and content dispute with the channel.
Ali- what?
Kapil- Haan bhai, channel nai decide kiya hai to replace me with krushna.
Sunil - aur tughe aisa kyun lagta hai ki we will continue?
Kapil - Matlab?
Chandan- ye lo ji Mai tera bachpan ka yaar hun, Mai there saath chalunga.
Kapil - yeh kya baat hui?
Ali - Mai bhi
Sunil - Mai bhi
Kiku - comedy karunga on stage toh with u
Kapil closed his eyes. Because of him his whole team will suffer.
Sumona - galat, tumhari wajah Sai nahi aa rahein hai tumhare saath, we love you n we want to be with you so that's why we are coming with you.
Kapil- Maine jor Sai bola tha kya?
Sumona - 5 saal ho gayye Sharma ji. Aap Kab kya soch rahein hai patah chal jaata hai.
Kapil- soch lo ek Naya show khada karna padega all over again with different punches characters n one liners, Tum log ek established show chod kar jaa rahein it's completely foolish.
Sumona- foolish hai toh foolish hi sahi, but mughse aap picha nahi chudwan saktein.
Ali- Haan yaar Kapil we r a team n u r my bro.
Sunil - tughe chod k jaane ki galti baar baar nahi karunga.
Kapil- par aap sab...
Kiku- Sharma ji just talk to my hand.
The whole team were in spilits laughing.

Present
Sumona - kya soch rahein ho?
Kapil- nothing...
Sumona - achha?
Kapil- tum logon ko cnwk nahi chudna chahiye tha, tkss is not going as per expectations we r still struggling with trps n Meri wajah Sai aap sab..
Sumona- Kapil? Kitni baar kaha hai ki it's not because of u
Ali - Haan yaar, it's not your fault. That channel was wrong.
Sunil- hum tere dost hai Kapil kya hum kabhi galat ka saath DENGE kya.
Chandan- achha ab yeh sab chodo give me the script.
Sumona - Haan mughe bhi let me read it.
Kapil- yeh lo
Sumona n Chandan left with the script.
Kiku- achha bhai jab serious baatein ho hi rahi hai toh tell me one thing Kapil
Kapil- kya Kiku bhai?
Kiku- Kab batayega usko?
Kapil looked down
Kapil- kya batana hai aur kisse?
Ali- tu achhe se jaata hai bhai
Sunil- Sumona ko batana hai ki u love her
Sunil screamed in frustration.
Kapil- sshhh
Sunil - kya sshhh agar tune nahi bataya na toh Maine batah Dena hai
Kiku - Haan bhai
Ali- problem kya hai Kapil?
Kapil- Ali bhai Sumona Meri bohat achhi dost hai, aur Mai apni inn extra feelings k wajah Sai woh dost bhi kho dunga. Woh apne bade bade hothon Sai mughe na kahegi, aur apni lambi lambi heels Sai mughe aur iss show ko laat maregi aur apne chote chote hothon Sai Mera phone no block kardegi.
Kiku- Arrey par kyun? Why r u so pessimistic about this?
Kapil- hein??????????
Ali- nakaratmak kyun sochte ho balak
Sunil- inkalab zindabad...
Kapil- kya?
Sunil - Matlab jaa kar boldein usko mere Baap.
Director - Kapil sir ready?
Kapil smiled before switching on his Mike he said...
Kapil- Mai sochunga iss baare Mai
Director - Kapil sir ready?
Kapil- yes from my childhood.
Sumona looked up surprised
Sumona - thank god he is back...

I will update part 2 if u guys like this part

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally got time to comment. Firstly I would say I really liked all the dialogues *Clap Clap* This story seems quiet realistic with all the on stage actors involved. Loved the way you showed their banter here šŸ‘ I can totally relate to the story because I always felt that Kappu loves Her but never tried to confess and interviews mein jaise sunil Ali and all tease kar rahe the na dono I felt like they know some secrets about Kappu šŸ˜‰ but are refusing to share with us Koi nai aapki story mein saarey raaz khulte dekhlenge 😃 Great Start to a lovely story :) post the next part ASAP !

Lots of Pyaar & Good Luck for the story bro

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Edited by Kappumyfav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww... such a superb update... luved it... kappu will be kappu always...šŸ˜† continue soonishhh...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pessimistic
Hain???
Nakaratmak kyu sochte ho balak 🤣
Kya dialogue h
Loved it... Great start
Waiting for your next update🄱
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Can i get the update pwleeeseee
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2 a short update would update next part tomorrow.
Kapil was sitting in his office with zanzeer.
Kapil- kaise kahu Mai Teri bhabhi ko ki I luv her zanzu ?
Zanzu looked at him and Kapil sighed what would he suggest, even if he could speak he would ask him to give bones chicken or pedigree to Sumona to propose Her.
Kapil stood on front of mirror n started rehearsing his proposal
Take 1
Kapil- Sumona Mai tenu...hain Mai Punjabi Mai kyun baat kar raha hun?
Take 2
Kapil - Sumona aami tumake bhalo bhashi...nahi nahi nahi Kapil Sumona hates it when u speak wrong bengali proposal chod kar she will start teaching u correct bengali, agar galat bola toh nervousness Mai. Risk nahi leta.
Take 3
Kapil - I love u Sumona I really I really do...nahi English Mai bolunga toh usse lagega I am joking.
Take 4
Kapil - Mai Tumse bohat pyaar karta hun Sumona, Kab kahaan kaise patah nahi par tum hi ho jiske saath Mai apni puri life guzarna chahtan hun...chiii Kapil kitna filmy dialogue hai.
Kapil sighed n got back to zanzeer
Kapil- Inn sab Sai achha toh tera hi idea tha bhai bone chicken ya pedigree.

Next day Kapil went to the shoot again he was the first one to reach so he started preparing for the show.
Kapil's phone rang, he saw Sumona's name flashing on screen.
He picked it up
Kapil -hello Han bol Sumona
Sumona - Kapil I am not well today I have viral bad throat n cold
Kapil- kya Kab kahaan kaise karaya yeh viral tumne pagal ho kya dhyan nahi rakh sakti tum apna
Sumona - sshhh baba cool down sorry par Mai aaj nahi aa paungi aapko akele hi comedy Karni hogi Sharma ji.
Kapil- apna dhyan rakhne Sumona Mai shyam ko milne aata hun
Sumona - kya hua koi tension hai?
Kapil - nahi kyun tum aisa kyun pooch rahi ho? (how can he tell her that he is tensed because of her health that he cares too much.)
Sumona - 5 saal Sharma ji, jab bhi I say that u have to do comedy alone u always say ki woh toh Mai roz akele karta hun usmai kaunsi nayi baat hai. Aaj nahi bola toh isiliye
Kapil chuckled - I m nt tensed Sumona u take care. Bye
Sumona - bye
Kapil kept his phone down isko toh Meri Har baat mazzak lagti hai itni baar show Mai bhi hint DE chuka hun par nahi. Agar bhagwan bhi neeche aake isko batayega ki Kapil loves you she will laugh at him also.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Takes for rehearsing confession šŸ˜† only kappu can do this ... zanzir's idea awesome update šŸ˜†
Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gosh ! That super cute start šŸ‘ The most cutest FF in this forum :) Haha. . Seriously ! Proposing sumona with pedigree & chicken bone that would undoubtedly be a dog's idea šŸ˜† Imagine dogs mein proposal kaise hota hoga ? " I promise to offer you chicken bone in all the 3 meals of the day Now will you marry me ?" šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜† Its funny & Cuteee ! And Kappu's rehearsal you simply killed it ! And then Ofcourse his caring nature towards sumona haaayyyeee 😳 Thank u so much for the brilliant update !!!

Keep shining & Lots of pyaar :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What a fantasy!!! What a fiction!!
I am totally loving it...Totally hilarious it was...
Last 2 lines toh...Itni baar show me bhi hint de chuka hu wala diaogue pe...Hayee...Mai has has ke pagal ho gayee...
Very very realistic, funny & lovely OS!! I love ur dialogues so much! waiting for the next :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely! Pls post part 3 soon!! 😊

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