A Walk Back In The Past- Completed KaSu FF. - Page 5

Your story is super amazing. His small small caring is so damn cute yet innocent. Love the way you portray KaSum. Kabhi kabhi toh lagta hai that KaSum are made for eachother and they should be together. And yeah i pray for the day when kapil announce to the world that he loves sumona and only her. Sorry my mind got distracted but your story is superb. next part soon

🤗 awww the story is heading towards a very cute and beautiful ending ufff... These small movements where kapil kissed sumona while she was sleeping and his dialogue bhagwaan saree cuteness ise hi kyu dedi, when he brings her favourite choclate and she have it after five years, so beautiful

Chapter 9


As he was closing the cabin door he heard

" Oye tu mennu bas itna bata ke mera puttar kitthe hai ? Mera kappu. . Matlab kapil sharma ?"

He turned around and his eyes widened.

"Maa ?"

"Woh raha ! Kappu !!" He approached her and she gave him a tight hug.

" Tu kitna patla hogaya hai ?"

" woh sab toh theek hai maa par aap yaha kar kya rahi ho ?"

"Teri behen pooja ki zidd thi ke mein yaha aaoun. . . Hayyo rabba itni vadia jagah pe kaam karta hai tu ? Shabash mera puttar ! " After admiring each and everything about the decorations she sat on the sofa near.

"Maa ek khushi ki khabar sunaoun ?" Asked The happy happy Kappu.

" Ki ? Tu shaadi kar raha hai ? Kitthe hai kudi ? Mennu milwayega nahi ?-

He rolled his eyes cutting her off.

"Maa yaar. .Aap na apni zuban bina break ke mat chalaya karo please z . . Sumona ! Sumona milgayi. . "

"Sacchi ? Apni sumona ? Teri woh bengal ki khoobsurat ?" He smiled as she translated Bengali beauty into hindi. She too knew it he loves calling her with that name.

"Haan maa apni sumona milgayi ! Dekho yeh company usi ki hai. . Mein kehta tha na ke usme bohot kabiliyat hai . . Dekhlo meri baat sach nikli. . " He said looking at her cabin.

" Kya baat hai ! " Her eyes pooled up. She caressed his cheek and kissed his forehead.

"bohot accha laga beta teri sumona tujhe mil hi gayi itna dhoondne ke baad. . " Kapil nodded.

" Chal toh. .mujhe milwayega nahi meri beti se ? Kitne saal beet gaye aankhen taras gayi thi use dekhne. "

" Jaanta hoon ma. . Par abhi nahi. .abhi aap ghar chalo" He held her hand and was about to walk out.

"Nahi nahi mein toh apni putta naal milkar ji jaana wapas ghar"

"Nahi maa. . Mein kal pakka milawadunga " He tried his best to stop but his mom was being herself. Stubborn.

"Kal toh mein use apne ghar mein rukne kahungi. .lekin aaj toh meine usse milkar hi jaana hai bas. . Tu hatt parey. ." She moved him aside and walked away.

"Maa. . " He called defeated and she ignored.

" Oh ji. . . Tussi mennu toh ni jaante par meri beti nu jaante ho ? Sumona kitthe hai ? Meine usse milna hai " She stopped a person passing by one of sumona's colleague who was a britisher.

"Wh. . What ? sorry I dont know Hindi" The gora replied.

" Phitte muh ! Oye tera rang toh gora nahi hai phir tu kyun angrezi mein chapad chapad kar raha hai ?" She questioned carefully observing the man.

"Chal chadh tu. . Umm. .Sumona. .Sumona Chakravarti. .Boss teri kithhe ? " she used her hands to talk to the man and again man was clueless but when he heard Sumona something finally registered in his Brain and pointed towards her cabin.

"Puttar ji ?"

She wiped her tears and got up touching her left cheek.

She stood stunned when Kapil's mom entered the cabin.

"Aunty ? Aap ?" She immediately moved forward and hugged her whilst kapil stood outside the cabin and watched everything from the otherside of the glass.

" Meri bacchi. .kaisi hai tu ? " She asked caressing her head.

When she realized he was watching her she slowly set back.

"Mein theek hoon aur aap kaisi hai ?"

"Kahan se theek hai tu ? Itne saal kiase humse door reh rahi hai ? Chal yeh sab chod aaja. .ithhe bait" They sat on the sofa.

Aunty took out a box of sweet and took one laddoo out of it.

When she looked up to feed sumona she saw her teary eyed.

"Arey ? Dekh rona toh mujhe chahiye ! Nai mujhe tujhe daant na chahiye. . Lekin kya karoun teri patli halat dekh kar mann nahi kar raha . . Chal muh khol aur jaldi se khale " Aunty took the laddoo closer to her mouth and she took a bite which brought back those sweet memories when she used make the laddoos whenever they had any special occasion at home back in India.

" Beta. ."

" Ji aunty. ."

"Tu toh muskurana hi bhool gayi"

A/N

:'( Kappu yaar sumona ko muskurana sikhado jaldi se please !! I want u guys to be happy happy !

Lots of Pyaar :)

Aaye haye ladki twadhi to punjabi bhi badi changi hegi punjabi maa ne aake to chaar chand hi lga diya story 😉

Wow read all 3 chapters update and all were mindblowing👏

The update was super awesome. Great job dear!! Loved the full on punjabi maa of kapil and its good to see that she still likes sumona. The fav dialogue is begal ki khoobsurti! It was very cute. Update soon!

All 3 chapters were fab! Wooohoo..I love this story yar..him kissing her in her sleep was super cute..the pipe climbing scene best.. His mom was damn adorable! Hayye..u go girl! I'm loving ur writing..keep it up! Always waiting for more. Lots of love 😊😳

Originally posted by: Kashish95

"dekho bakwass band kro " ..."aur ye btaoo" ...was th best part ...revived all comedy circus memoriess...sometyms i wish k sumona becomes much more successfull than she is today ..she is one talented actress but her role in tkss is comparitively vry small...wish she gets more powerfull role while she continues to be part of kapil's show too

Chapter 10


Sumona had no answer to Aunty's questions and she had no intention to let a mother know that her own son has made sumona so different.

" Nahi aunty. . . Mein aapke ghar mein nahi ruk sakti. "

"Aaye haye ! Mera ghar tera ghar kabse hogaya bhai ? Chalna dekh teri pooja di bhi wahi hai. . Woh bhi tujhse milke bohot khush hojayegi. . . " Aunty dragged her bags but again some gora stopped her saying

"Ma'am I will keep the bags. . "

"Hmm. .toh chalein maa ? " Kapil asked keeping his phone in his pocket.

" Haan aur tune sumona ke liye kamra khali karwaya ki nahi. . ."

"Haan guest room hai na. . . Ab pura ghar hi inka hai. .aur inke liye toh ghar kya dil bhi Khali hi hai " He mumbled the last part looking at her who again ignored but those words reached to her ears.

' Jhoot ' She thought.

"Sach keh raha hoon" He said and she was left surprised wondering if her thoughts were so loud that he heard them ? Before she could react he followed his mom out of the house.

She decided to spend 3 days in Kapil's house with his mom and his sister & Sister's little daughter named aruhi at least she was not the same she started to talk a little freely and whenever they would sit together and recall the stories she would either feel emotional or smile a little.

"Kappu uth na ! " Pooja kapil's elder sister shook him but he groaned and went back to sleep hiding his face under the duvet.

"Neeche sumona aur maa tera intezaar kar rahe hai. . Tune kaha tha na ke aaj shopping le jayega ?" Preeti informed parting the curtains.

"Oh. .sumona bhi chal rahi hai kya humarey saath ?"He immediately moved the duvet and sat rubbing his sleepy eyes.

"Haan kal hi toh bataya tha. . "

"5 minute mein neeche aata hoon di" He got off the bed and rushed into the washroom.

"Arey wah ! Sumona ka naam sunte hi itni energy. . . Matlab yeh aaj bhi usse pyaar karta hai. ." Pooja smiled.

Sumona's eyes were fixed on the laptop and in her plate was a paratha rolled in the tissue paper. She took a bite and kept it back her eyes still glued to the screen as she typed something. There was Aunty on the dining table who was busy talking to someone on phone and pooja who was trying to feed her 3 yrs old stubborn daughter.

Kapil grinned seeing everyone busy. He reached near the dining table and leaned closer to sumona who jumped from inside when his cheek brushed against hers.

She looked at him but he was looking at the paratha smiling.
Her lips parted as she observed his features. His lips and eyes were always the most admired features by her. His little eyes displayed the emotions crystal clear to her and his lips made his face brighten whenever they curve up in smile.

He took her paratha near to his mouth and looked at her.

"Woh. . " This closeness made her words die in her throat as he smilingly took a bite from the exact same spot as she did minutes ago.

She blinked and gulped not knowing what to do. She turned her attention to laptop and he sat down on the chair next to hers.

From the corner of her she was watching him. Of course its was hard to resist the Hero :)

He extended his hand and took the glass which was half filled with water. After examining it he found the brown lipstick mark on it which confirmed it was hers.

He looked at her and again she diverted her gaze. With a mischievous smile he drank the water again from the same spot making her cheeks burn under her skin.

A/N

Aww. . . Sumo ko bhi kuch kuch ho raha hai ;)

Thank u all :) and am sorry for late update !

One more thing ! I really feel like talking to u all but couldn't even reply to ur lovely comments cause of busy timetable :(
Do tell me when majority of u are online on IF so that we can have a little chat !
Pata nahi bas kisi se khooobbb saari baatein karne ka mann kar raha hai.

Lots of Pyaar !!!!

Awesome update. Uff! Loved the dining table scene very much. Kaash ki sumona jaldi se maan jaaye that she still loves him and then there will be loads of romance in the story. By the way i came online usually in afternoon that means around 1to 1:30 pm