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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
OMG Kapil was so furious to protect to her lady love😲
I loved this " Mujhe kuch nahi pata ke tum kyun itni badal gayi ho ? Pata nahi kahan chupa rakha hai meri sumona ko. . My bengali beauty knew that she belonged to me alone. No one has any right on her body, heart, mind and soul. . Except me. .I dont care whatever u do. . but this ! I won't tolerate. . . Mujhe meri sumona wapas chahiye till then no matter what it takes to protect her I will do it. . You cant stop me !"😳
It was beautifully written and showed the depth of love of Kapil for SumonašŸ‘
Fabulous update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
aaye haayeee šŸ˜› maar h daaloge aap to matlab šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
God i really luv the way you explain every movement with the feeling which let your readers to get their heart and soul into it luv your writing i've always said it though i actually don't like men getting so possessive and furious over their lady and impose their choices over them but still your writing always make me luv everything 😊
Luv you babes šŸ˜Ž
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Muaaah ! Love u all :)
Thank u so much for such lovely comments.

There will be no Point of Views in the further chapters & Tomorrow is friday so If I get time I might post 3 chapters all together. .
Cause I am just curious to start something fresh after I finish this one and different plots are visiting my mind ;)
But no worries If u guys want me to go slow I will. . . This one is longer than my previous work Besties to Lovers and there are too many stages in Kapil and Sumona's life. . .

U want me to shorten it or its okay u are ready to read many chapters.

See. . I am very confused insan ! I need suggestions mahn. .

And then there is Ramadan coming up so It would be better if I finish it before my exams in Ramadan.

Yo ! Keep rocking as u all always do =)

Lots of Pyaar =)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Are you kidding its a treat to read your as many chapter i read your chapters twice or thrice before going to sleep and if you'll post more of your stories or chapters that will be a treat for me sweety
Luv you
Waiting for your more updates
'eagerly'
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Ab kya kahoun ? Inki cuteness kuch zyada hi hai yaar :)

Thank u all !!!!

Chapter : 7

" Arey tum aagayi beti. . Khana ready hai mein kamrey mein bhijwadoon ya-"

"Nahi Aunty mujhe bhook nahi hai. ." With that she quickly ran upstairs.

Her cook was confused whether to go and talk to her or leave her on her own ? She never ever needed anybody's help she was strong and independent yet at times when she missed her family she lied down on aunty's lap as she massaged her head and made her sleep peacefully.

Dear Diary,

Mujhe nahi pata yeh wapas kyun aaya hai ? Aaj keh raha tha ke use uski sumona wapas chahiye. .wahi sumona jisko mein apne past mein chod aayi hoon. . .

Kyun ? Panch saal baad kyun yaad aayi ise sumona ki ? Jis din isne mera bharosa . . Mera dil toda tha usi din uski sumona ko meine maar diya tha. .

Mujhe nahi jaana wapas apne past mein. .Dar lagta hai. .bohot dar lagta hai phirse usse mohabbat karne se. .uspe bharosa karne se. .use dil dene se. . Bohot darr lagta hai diary. .


The words flowed down as her tears dropped down on the paper spoiling the ink. She rested her head on the diary with her eyes shut. In need of a tight hug or a genuine smile. She has forgotten how to smile in these 5 yrs.

A thud voice caught her attention.

"Ouch ! Yeh pipe se chadna is such a life threatening task " Her eyes widened as she quickly wiped her Tears and turned around to find the man who has been regularly visiting her thoughts.

"Tum ? What are u doing here ? Security"

"Relax ! Itna hyper kyun ho rahi ho? I know tumharey ghar mein darwaza hai wahan se aana chahiye tha par yeh jo tumhara loyal watchman hai na andar hi nahi aane de raha tha " Kapil informed keeping a packet on the table near.

" Yeh kya hai ?"

"Bomb!" He said with wide eyes and she rolled her eyes.

"Waise nice room "

" Tum yahan karne kya aaye ho?"

"Bas bhangra karne. . . " He sat on the bed.

"Dekho bakwaas band karo-

"Aur yeh batao " He completed her sentence and she blinked.

'He remembered ?' She asked herself. 'No no may be aise hi muh se nikal gaya hoga' She was lost in her own thoughts.

He got up and took few steps closer she was still lost until she felt two arms snaking around her.

She gasped loudly.

" I am sorry. . Mujhe itna chillana nahi chahiye tha tum par. . Really sorry yaar kya karta tumhe toh pata hai na gussa aata hai toh pagal hojata hoon. . " He caressed her bare arm with his eyes closed and chin resting on her shoulder. Her hands still hanging in air. Her wish was just fulfilled she got the best hug.

'He cares' The thought brought a slight smile on her lips and second wish fulfilled.

He moved back.

" Sorry. .woh packet mein tumhara favorite chocolate ice cream hai khalena. . Mood theek hojayega Bye" He turned around to leave.

"Suno " He smiled hearing her voice for the first time it was low and soft. He quickly turned to her.

"Sunao"

"Umm. .woh. . Woh I am sorry too. .mujhe waise kapde. .shayad nahi pehen ne chahiye the. . " She clutched her clothes looking down.

He raised his eyebrows as she looked up at him.

"Umm. . Matlab. . Tumhari galti hi thi. . Par phir bhi sorry. .Koi nahi ho tum mere. . Ur fault " She closed her diary as she spoke. Asking for forgiveness to someone felt weird for her.

" Hmm. . Its ok. . Ek aur baat "

"Kya ?"

" PJ's mein bohot hi cute lagti ho" Her hands paused. She felt happy but again didn't want to show it. She turned to face him.

" Mein ab chocolate nahi khati. . . So take it with u " She completely changed the topic.

" Tum ladkiyan hardly kuch khati ho I know dieting and all. .. Par thodi si khalogi toh kuch nahi hoga. ." With that he turned around smilingly.

She tugged her hair behind her ear. She wanted to stop him and tell him to go from the door but her 'I dont care' attitude stopped her from doing so.

" Ouch !" Her heart thumbed. She immediately reached the window and peeped down to see if he is fine but it was very dark and nothing was clearly seen.

"Kap-" Her voice again stuck. She wanted to ask him if he is fine.

" Ah !"

"Are. . . Are u okay ?" She finally found her voice.

No reply from him made her more worried.

"Ka. . Kapil ?" She called.

He took out his phone and clicked on the torch.

" I am okay. . Accha laga panch saal baad tumharey muh se apna naam sun kar. . . Good Night. " Waving he left with a huge grin on his lips.

She frowned shaking her head.
" Ajeeb hai. . But still I hate him. . ."

Before going to bed she made sure she wrote one line in the her diary.

'He remembered many things and. . . . Chocolate after 5 yrs. . . Tasted more sweet '

A slight smile spread on her lips as she took one more spoon of chocolate ice cream.

She just couldn't let her mind take over her heart. She couldn't stop herself from eating that ice cream.

Still she repeated 'I hate him'
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
What a cute chapter!! He caring for her . Pipe se chadna and icecream lana is so cute. Sumona should definetely give him a chance afterall everything is fair in love & war anyway waiting for next part eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 8

Next day in the office :

After a successful presentation and finalizing the deal she came back to her cabin.

"Ma'am. . . May I ask u something ?"

"Yes linta go ahead " She said resting her head on the table with her eyes shut.

"Umm. . . Can I get a day off. . I mean I have compleyed all my work. . My fiance wants me to go shopping with him. . So. . "

She sighed getting up she looked at linta whose gaze went to the white marble floor.

" I am sorry. . " Sumona frowned hearing so.

She got off her seat.

" I know u all think I am a hitler. . But If a day off makes your partner and ur relationship stronger then. . U can take two days off linta " Linta was left wide eyed.

"Wh. . What ?"

Sumona nodded. She knew they hate her because she never tried to be soft to them but still she wasn't that hard hearten as chocolate does changes mood and makes u feel better.

"Thank u ! Thank u sooo much madam ! I mean. . U are superb " Linta was over excited she was about to hug her boss when she stopped and scratched in her hair.

Sumona smiled shaking her head which shocked linta more.

Happy linta walked out of the cabin and As kapil saw her so happy he questioned

" Wow ! Someone is so happy today ? All okay ?"

"Yeah. . No ! Everything is different. .you know sir-

"Linta ! Its Kapil !"

"Oh yeah. . Kapil I just saw madam smiling and she gave me 2 days off ! Can u believe that ?"

"I can. .Because I know my bengali beauty more than anyone. ." He thought but did not voice it.

As Linta saw him smiling and deep in thoughts she snapped her fingers to bring him back.

"So. .enjoy ! I will see u after 2 days linta"

"Yeah ! Byeee "

"Ahem ! May I come in ?" Kapil asked knocking on the door but got no reply in return.

He opened the door after knocking twice and there he found her sleeping on the sofa hugging the cushion.

"Hmm. . . Itne saaloun mein yeh toh badal gayi par iski aadatein nahi gayi. . Dunya ki saari cuteness pata nahi kyun uparwaley ne sirf isme hi daal di hai. . . Well mujhe toh aisa hi lagta hai " He murmured walking to the sofa.

He sat near the sofa and resting his chin on the corner of the sofa he kept staring at her.

"Tum jo dikhti ho. . . woh tum ho hi nahi. . Jitni hitler banti ho bahar utni pyaari ho andar se. . Bas batati nahi ho" He Whispered moving the strand of hair away from her face. His fingers moved in her hair as he smiled looking at her.

"Ek kiss cheek pe de doun toh koi pahad nahi tutega na ?" He asked before leaning closer and resting his lips on her left cheek. As soon as his lips touched her skin he noticed how she clutched the pillow and sighed deeply in her sleep.

He knew she would wake up now so he immediately left the cabin.

A/N

As I said before 3 chappies today :)

I hope u are enjoying it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"dekho bakwass band kro " ..."aur ye btaoo" ...was th best part ...revived all comedy circus memoriess...sometyms i wish k sumona becomes much more successfull than she is today ..she is one talented actress but her role in tkss is comparitively vry small...wish she gets more powerfull role while she continues to be part of kapil's show too

Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

Muaaah ! Love u all :)
Thank u so much for such lovely comments.

There will be no Point of Views in the further chapters & Tomorrow is friday so If I get time I might post 3 chapters all together. .
Cause I am just curious to start something fresh after I finish this one and different plots are visiting my mind ;)
But no worries If u guys want me to go slow I will. . . This one is longer than my previous work Besties to Lovers and there are too many stages in Kapil and Sumona's life. . .

U want me to shorten it or its okay u are ready to read many chapters.

See. . I am very confused insan ! I need suggestions mahn. .

And then there is Ramadan coming up so It would be better if I finish it before my exams in Ramadan.

Yo ! Keep rocking as u all always do =)

Lots of Pyaar =)


arry yra its so amzing to read ur updates ...don't shorten it ,don't u slow down either ...aap 15 updates bhi de do ..we al just njoy ...this one is fabulous...start new plots too ..mummuaahhh šŸ˜›
next regarding this update
Edited by Kashish95 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"dekho bakwass band kro " ..."aur ye btaoo" ...was th best part ...revived all comedy circus memoriess...sometyms i wish k sumona becomes much more successfull than she is today ..she is one talented actress but her role in tkss is comparitively vry small...wish she gets more powerfull role while she continues to be part of kapil's show too

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