A Walk Back In The Past- Completed KaSu FF. - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sumona z fashion designer in Canada? Ohk!
But Kapil...A photographer??? Really? I can't digest it...Hopefully he will be some one else!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks babes aashup :)
Thanks chit15 and dishi for ur amazing reviews :)
Thanks Fanofcreativity and yaar abhi ek hi chappy is out ruk ja thoda humara photographer is very famous and will create magic :)

Chapter 2

Kapil's POV

It's her. Oh yes, she is the same lady I was searching for almost 5 yrs and here she is ! I found her.

Her mouth opened a little whilst few creases formed on her forehead. I couldn't help but smile slightly at this beauty. My bengali beauty.

My eyes first checked her each and every feature. Starting from my most fav feature- Her almond shaped beautiful eyes which held confusion &. . . Pain ?

Then that cute button nose, Her cotton soft skin was making it hard for me to control my hands. How badly I want to cup her face and feel that skin. Then those luscious full lips covered in dark shade lipstick of red. Ah ! Such a distraction. . . A beautiful distraction.

" Ahem !" A lady with fair complexion made her presence to be acknowledge and our eye contact broke.

She got up.

" What the hell is this man doing in my cabin ?" Wohoo ! So much of rudeness I see. .but why ?

" Hi. . I am Kapil. Kapil Sharma. . . Naam toh suna hi hoga aapne. . " She stared at me blankly. My hand still hanging in air. I bend forward and taking her hand I shook it.

"It's called hand shake. . " Nothing, I Just wanted to feel that skin. I had no plans to leave her soft hand instead I wish we stood like that for hours. She pulled her hand back.

I smiled at the fair lady who smiled back.

" Linta ! How come i didnt see the photographer's details file ?"

" Madam. . I gave it to u but remember u spilled coffee and then-"

" Oh shut up"

" No please continue linta ur voice is gorgeous !" I complimented and she looked at her boss.

" Come yaar ab kya smile karne ke liye bhi u need her permission? " I asked and finally she smiled reluctantly. I can feel sumona's glare at me.

" I need some other photographer" She demanded and linta nodded.

" I will try to get someone else madam" with that she left the cabin.

Her hands clutched the papers in her hand. She was lost in her deep thoughts. Yehi mauka hai Bhai. .

I reached to her and without a word I held her by shoulders and immediately embraced her tight.

I have been waiting for this hug for last 5 yrs ! It felt as If I am home after a long tiring journey. I wanted to ask so many questions to her but none came out as I was lost in hearing her uneven heartbeat and holding her fragile body close to my heart which felt relaxed now. My eyes shut as I felt satisfied.

Lots of Pyaar jo rahe sadabahar ;)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bhai ye kya h jo socho ki yahan ye story head kregi but you do opposite first i thought he is her past in chapter 1 than in chapter 2 starting i thought okay he is just a strange man to her but later it seems to be he's her past dammm i am loving it enjoying it 😃 the mystery in this story is actually making me curious ufff... Yaar now i am dieing to read more chapters of this story please do post it soon waiting eagerly luv you luv's your writing ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I openend my account only to see that whether you updated your story and here you are with an awesome update. Story from kapil's view was the cherry on cake as he says serious things with so much of ease. Sorry i got distracted from the topic , loved the stiry but so many questions are still arising in my mind. Firstly what is the past?? Secondly only she is hurt by it and not him?? Does they love each other or loved each other in past?? Much more questions but chodo bore hojaogi pad ke. Plz update soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I thought Kapil character will be like person who is also in pain like something but it was unexpected twist.😆
Kapil was searching her and seeing her was his best moment

Awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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See guys I am not replying to you one by one because I tend to answer ur questions and then in the end spoil the maza of the story. .
I know its mysterious one by one every chapter will unfold the mysterious and sumona's past

Wait. Read. Enjoy :)

Chapter 3

Sumona's POV

Heart: He is back for u
Mind: No remember u hate him.

Heart: This hug says it all. He still
loves u.
Mind: No. He doesn't. He never did in the past too.

Heart: He does thats the reason u met him again after all 5 yrs. U have been loving him no matter how far u both were.

Mind: U never ever loved him. He is the photographer working for ur company. Thats it ! He is nothing but a dark past.

I immediately pushed him back. I hate this warmth. I hate those arms. I hate that fragrance. In short, I hate Him !

Before I could say anything linta came in and informed me that there was no other photographer available as of now. How will I manage to work with him now ? With that thought I left the cabin. I really need some fresh air.

It's ok sumona he will go back after few days. Woh sirf humarey puraney photographer ke place mein ayaa hai. . To click pics. . Only !

I kept convincing my Innerself and assured my heart that he has come just for a work then he will leave. . .

Throwing my bag aside I lied down on the bed staring at the ceiling. There was a lot I wanted to ask him but I have no idea how will I ask him when Its so damn difficult to stand in front of him.

Pulling the drawer next to I took out the last memory I had that to be have burned.

His smiling face was visible in the pic and rest all burned.

" Kyun aaye ho wapas ? I was happy without u ! Why did u come back ?" After all 5 yrs It was the first tear that slipped down my eye and threw the pic across the room.

" I hate you !" I shouted in the empty room.

Next day :

" Linta I want the photo session to be completed today by 6 pm itself. So go and inform Ka- I mean Mr Sharma about it. . And ask the models to be ready " Giving all the instructions to Linta I sat down on my seat trying to focus on the piles of papers.

The huge distraction was that man who sat on the counter obviously flirting around with all those ladies.

Bilkul bhi nahi badla. . . I again shifted my gaze back to the file and no matter how hard I tried I couldn't resist ! My eyes fixed on him as he laughed at something. I couldn't hear his laughter I was watching him through the glass of my cabin.

"You hate him. He cheated on you" An inner voice spoke and I quickly got up and closed the curtains.

Sumona hates but does he hates her too ?
Or is it love vs hatred ?

Find out in the next chapter.
Its boring now cause starting chapters are introducing the characters but as u know we have our hero :) here so he will get the magic in the story. .sooon

Lots of Pyaar :)


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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was not at all boring and was not expecting that you will post the chapter so soon but this is you who never keeps me waiting. Loved the chapter to the core. Her heart's and mind's convo was awesome and zo kappu abhi bhi nahi badla. After 5 long yrs he still has a habbit of flirting. And she is all the way distracted because of him. Waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dammnnn sumona sounds sooo cute awww...
Luv the way you describe her and minds fight thats so true it often happen our inner soul say something else and we do not listen it just because of the reason we do not want get hurt again and you were perfectly able to showcase that delima in the story
What else i can you are amazing and waiting for your next post
You know the time i see a mail from the forum i immediately go to my inbox with a hope that you've updated your chapter 😆 or agar vo mail vo nhi hota h jo m chahti hu mera to dil hi tut jata h 💔😛
Luv you :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read both the chapters...brilliantly written must say..even though it's different from reality I love every bit of it..the hug was Awww.. Loved Kapil's entry..and so kapil is her dark past! Great going..keep it up! Love always 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yo mahn ! Thank you all for liking the story.
Chapter 4

Kapil POV

" And what else she does ?" I asked Miss George one of Sumona's staff member.

" Nothing. . As usual she walks in does her work and leaves. . " The lady sighed.

" I am sure she has something that she suppresses. . Meine bohot baar unhe dekha hai woh muskurana chahati hai par kabhi muskurati nahi. . Woh hum normal ladkiyoun ki tarah hi hai bas. . Kabhi batati nahi. . I hope she gets what she is waiting for.. " Pooja another indian colleague said deep in her thoughts.

" I agree with u pooja. ." I said and thats when I realized she was out of my sight. Working behind those black curtains.

Pata nahi kahan chupa rakha hai meri hasti khelti Bengali beauty ko isne. . But no worries I promise she will smile genuinely one day. She will be back soon. She wont wait more to be happy again. She has transformed from a positive happy person to a workaholic arrogant boss.

"So u guys celebrated New Year ?"

" Yeah we got 2 days off !" Miss George squealed and I chuckled.

" That assures she isnt that bad " A third voice joined us and I turned to find Linta smiling at us and I smiled back.

"Really ? So how much do u know ur boss linta " I asked taking the files from her and placing them on the table.

" I dont really know her. . She is mysterious but has a clean heart. . " She said and except Pooja no one agreed with Linta instead got back to their works.

" Don't hate her guys. May be she is dealing with her own battles who knows ?" Rocky Sumona's driver entered.

" Hey Bro !" I hugged him and he was left stunned.

" What ? Mein ghost lag raha hoon kya ?" Everyone laughed.

" No. . u just hugged a driver sir "

" No I hugged my brother u see bro. . Sir nahi it's Kapil. . Ab ladkiyoun se hug kaha se maango yaar ? Sandal nahi padengey sar pe ?" I asked laughing and what left me surprised was that all the ladies came running, screaming and hugged me from all sides. Almost squeezing me ! It was a group hug.

"I cant breathe " I informed and they set apart.

" You are cute !"
" You are humble "
" You are a gentleman "

They kept complimenting which took me 5 yrs back into the memory lane.

Flashback :

"Tum ladkiyan kitna waqt laga ti ho har kaam mein !" Holding more than 5 bags in one hand I complained.

She pulled my cheeks and taking the bags kept it on the back seat of the car.

" You are such a gentleman kappu " She said placing a soft kiss on my cheek and hugging me. All the exhaustion just washed away with this hug.

" I love u" she whispered in my ear and smiling I squeezed her a little whispering back

"I love u more"

I earn those cheek- pulling, Small kisses on the cheek, Tight hugs and compliments even if I do small things for her and that completes my life.

End of Flashback.

Not a single compliment made me happy in all 5 yrs after that break up. I miss my lady love. I miss my Sumona. I miss those days.

With a smile through the pain I walked away from the happy crowd.


Best part : When he hugs the driver and calls him Bro :) In real life too majority of the people call him 'Bhai' (except girls ;) )
because he makes them feel so comfortable around him !

And that makes him our hero =)
Lots of Pyaar :)

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