*PREMONITIONS* SS part-6 pg 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

stavan kuch din ke liye mein online nahi aayi n u wrote an ss n 4 chaps too😲 loved each chapter n the concept⭐️

kd felt bad 4 him he couldnt save his parents😭

kisha r so understanding

now death haunts them!

kiya ne kya dekha? voh dream vali girl toh nahi

kisha safe hoge😕 too scared

update soon yaar i want 2 read more of this

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Love it bro the way u describe the KD situation & kisha scene was cute😳 by the way ur dp is sooo cute which kisha scene it is.

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Stav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: priya1101
Res.😃
Unres.
Amazing update Stavan.
So,Kd is sensing the Presence of some negative energy around him/in the surroundings.
Loved the Kisha moment in kd's house,it has all elements like romance,curiousity,tension,irritation,understanding nature,etc...,
OMG,why was Kiya frightened???
Will be eagerly waiting for next part.It's getting more and more interesting with each part.
Kudos to u,the way the story is Progressing is fab.Great job Stavan.👏
Continue soon.

thanks a lot Priya

i am glad u like it ..

yaa kd could sense negativity

Kiya frightened ...

thanks a lot for appreciating and wonderful comment ..

thanks ..

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Stav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: SweetAndSpice
I loved it a looottt! ⭐️⭐️
Ek dum kadak part 😛😆
Loved the kadak kisha scene ⭐️😳
Waiting to know what happened to Kiya⭐️😲
When will you update next? 😳

thanks a lot

i am glad u like it

i will update on Thursday

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Stav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: viagomes
AMAZING & SCARY UPDATE STAVAN
TOTALLY LOVED IT
KISHA'S CONVO WAS SO INTENSE , KIYA TRYING TO CONVINCE

KD TO MOVE ON & KD TRYING TO SAVE KIYA LOVELY

BUT REALLY CAN'T WAIT TO KNOW WHAT KIYA SAW

PLS UPDATE SOON

thanks a lot via

i am glad u like it

kisha's intensity missing them ...

i will update soon

thanks ..

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Stav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: kitze
stavan kuch din ke liye mein online nahi aayi n u wrote an ss n 4 chaps too😲 loved each chapter n the concept⭐️
kd felt bad 4 him he couldnt save his parents😭

kisha r so understanding

now death haunts them!

kiya ne kya dekha? voh dream vali girl toh nahi

kisha safe hoge😕 too scared

update soon yaar i want 2 read more of this

yaa kirti new ss lolz ...

thanks a lot

i am glad u like this ss

yaa kd has gone through lot

kisha safe don't know ..

i will update soon ..

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Stav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: loveukisha
Love it bro the way u describe the KD situation & kisha scene was cute😳 by the way ur dp is sooo cute which kisha scene it is.

thanks a lot di ..

i am glad u like it ..

this dp its NYP scene .. 😊

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Stav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

PART - 5

Kiya was sobbing and Kd was just hugging her tight .. Kiya stopped crying and looked up and held Kd's hand ..

Kiya: Kd she died.. It was horrible just horrible ..

Kd was shocked and said : Kiya wen ? Where ?

Kiya started saying Kd everything ..

FLASHBACK

Kiya was sitting in some coffeshop near window thats wen a girl came and said : can i sit here ??

Kiya nodded .. She said : u remember me .. I was at that party u and your bf saved my life dat day .. I am safe n alive coz of u

Kiya smiled and said : no all credit goes to my bf .. Btw I am kiya ..

she said : I am mary ..

they had coffee and chatted a little ...

Mary : Kiya I will just leave .. See yaa...

Kiya: bye ...

Mary went out of coffee shop and while she was crossing the rad a bus came and hit her .. She was just crushed under d bus .. Kiya saw all that and was scared as hell .. She went outside and was just horrified to see that accident .. Kiya saw ambulance came and took her body.. Kiya was scared to see her like that ..

FLASHBACK ENDS

Kiya : Kd I talked with her for about two hrs and than I saw her that bus and she was oh god .. KD am I too gonna die like that?

Kd wiped her tears and kissed her forehead and said : no no you r not gonna die .. I wont let u die .. Trust me okay .. Its all my fault .. I am responsible for dis .. Coz of my curse u r in danger ..

Kiya: no Kd its destiny .. And u r trying ur best to change it but I am scared ...

Kd cupped her face and kissed her softly and than kissed her nose .. Kiya smiles a little and kissed his cheeks ..

Kiya: Kd wat r we gonna do ??

Kd: Kiya firstly I have to figure out wat I saw abt party or whom I saw ?? I need to remember dat nightmare ...

Kiya saw dat Kd looked scared and kiya understood dat he is not comfortable wid dat .. She slipped close to him and held his hand tightly .. KD closed his eyes and streesed his Mind way too much .. KD saw dat entire dream once again and opened his eyes sweating ... KD held his face and kissed his forehead.. KD was breathing heavily .. Kisha joined deir forehead and Kd said : Kiya I know who were present .. I saw ..

Kiya said : its okay ..

kiya hugged Kd tightly ..

Kd: Kiya how u got tickets ??

Kiya: I booked online on their website ..

Kd opened his lappy and hacked dat site .. He got info about all who were at party dat night ... KD quickly identified who survived that accident and made a list ...

Kd: These we have to find dem Pratham , sheeba , Joshua, Ruby , Kamna , Peter , Suzy ...

Kiya: But who is next ?? Can i be next ?? I mean I dont wanna die like dat I mean ..

Kd kept his hand on her mouth and said : Kiya stop saying idiotic things .. From past few minutes continuously speaking stupid things.. How u manage to do that ?? I mean not everyone is dat talented ..

Kiya's eyes widen and she removed his hand and said : how dare u ??

she picked up pillow and hit him with it .. KD : Kiya we arent kids ..

Kiya hit him once again and showed him tongue .. KD too picked up pillow and soon both started fighting wid it .. After few moments Mark entered with dinner and saw the room .. Two pillows were already torn there was cotton everywhere and kisha were still fighting like kids .. Mark smiled and thaught : finally sir's smile is back which was lost years ago ..

Mark : sir, Kiya I guess its time to eat something ...

kisha looked up and were embarrased ..

Kd: ahh mark keep there only we will eat thank u ..

Mark smiled and went away .. Kiya kept her hand on his shoulder and whispered in Kd's ears : u look so nice with that embarassed face ...

Kd shrugged his shoulder and said : shut up .. Lets eat now . Than I,will drop u home . Tom is gonna be long day for us ..

Kisha had their dinner and Kd dropped Kiya home

AT KD'S HOUSE

Kd(thaught): how will I find out who is next ?? Is their some pattern like order of deaths or something ??

precap : kisha convincing survivors to listen to dem ...

here is part 5.. Plz tell me hows dis ??

Edited by Prince6495 - 11 years ago