Too Late *OS* - Page 4

Originally posted by: DevilishAngel95

Mugs i effin LOVED it!!!

i told you i wanted this OS!!

Even though i really cant dislike Kiya much right now even i had some anger left in me soo..

Thank You!!! 🤗

Well i'm no fan of YaRs and RV so this was kinda like a dream come true 😛

And i am so glad you didnt make KD forgive them...even Panchi

it would have been extremely unrealistic!!

And i have to say i was really expecting Avantika in place of Juhi but nevermind i like them both!!

So in short this was brilliant and i loved it!!

PS thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: kishathebest

Mugsiee 🤗🤗

U make me speechless 😳

Haaye u wrote this OS on my favt concept...

I also hate YaRa

And read some thing against them is like WOW... 😳😆😆

U broke my Kisha As shavHi as a couple 😲

Yara are married 😲

But still I love u 🤗

And the way u portray their emotins were 👏👏

And my favt pt was last KD's pt 😳😳

U know na KD is my HERO so his pt was my favt 😳😳

Overall thankx for writing this stuff 😳😳

was this what you meant when you said someday you'd screw YaRa? :P

Okay, I am not the least bit offended by it. In fact, since my feels are still so damn high, I started grinning like crazy at the mention of ViChi engagement. Then you mentioned ShavHi and it became evident that you were in some sort of a sadistic mood.

But I can see some pattern in your writing now. That "Crazy" one that you wrote and this one, it has some signature style to it. Like the repetition of one phrase but through difference POVs and different scenarios. I enjoy that a lot, it gives the understanding about every character. Though the concept of this was clear, there seemed some loopholes in it. Like I couldn't fathom how so much success and downfall can happen only in 6 months. It just seems too...fantastical? Because despite the fast age technology, 6 months is still too small to savor success and taste downfall.

That's just me though. Other than that, it was plain dark slice of life and an OS about human errors! Nice one girl! :D

Originally posted by: Mais

was this what you meant when you said someday you'd screw YaRa? :P

Okay, I am not the least bit offended by it. In fact, since my feels are still so damn high, I started grinning like crazy at the mention of ViChi engagement. Then you mentioned ShavHi and it became evident that you were in some sort of a sadistic mood.

But I can see some pattern in your writing now. That "Crazy" one that you wrote and this one, it has some signature style to it. Like the repetition of one phrase but through difference POVs and different scenarios. I enjoy that a lot, it gives the understanding about every character. Though the concept of this was clear, there seemed some loopholes in it. Like I couldn't fathom how so much success and downfall can happen only in 6 months. It just seems too...fantastical? Because despite the fast age technology, 6 months is still too small to savor success and taste downfall.

That's just me though. Other than that, it was plain dark slice of life and an OS about human errors! Nice one girl! :D

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Originally posted by: Adry

Res :P

Unres :D

Did i tell you that you are at your best in angsty fics??😲 The emotions were bang-on!!!! so real...👏👏

The pain, guilt and that inner voice resurfacing at every other point

Ranveer seems the most affected somehow...i mean i can actually look at it and see the absolute mess that he has made of himself...ignoring Panchi's warnings and running head first into Kiya's plan...cheating, drunken brawls and of course his career🤢

KD not being able to get over Kiya and her 'plan' yet claiming to have moved on...

They are all in a way trapped due to their own actions or egos...

I don't know if its my post-exam state,but i'm kinda confused about the 'plan' Did YaRa go as far as to marry just to get their revenge on KD without actually loving each other or was there some love?😕

The mood in the whole OS does reflect mine right about now🤢 anyway...itna serious comment..that's a first for me😲😲

Originally posted by: Adry

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I'm so glad i did res...or else look where i would have been😳

^^ tu toh chod hi de...you never truly know your worth...neither are you willing to acknowledge it 😛

Originally posted by: Adry

^^ tu toh chod hi de...you never truly know your worth...neither are you willing to acknowledge it 😛