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-Razzy-

@-Razzy-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

finally the much awaited OS arrives !!!!

just one thing ...

I Love You !!

you separated my kisha , made KD coupled with juhi , almost potrayed kiya as a bit** and still

still...i effing Loved it !!!!

gosh i can't believe , jst can't believe that i would love this

i mean i was supposed to hate it (of course except yaara, i hate them always :P )

but rest , i mean to be honest i became somewhat happy inside

and the only person who can make me do this ...is

*drums rolling*

You !!

gosh mugzie i just can't tell you how amazing this was this ,

i specially came online to comment on this

Girl i am soo happy that u wrote it , finally almost or most of ur frustration has vanished i guess ;)

you know this turned out much much better than i imagined it to be

i wanted to write some sarcastic comment , but i just can't help but be genuine <3

Thank you for writing this *hugs*

somewhat made me strong enough to handle various emotions <3

and as u know a big fan i m of urs *hugs*

*U nailed it Girl!! *

and now *coming back to fan -self*

you have to give me a wild KiSha os soon !!!!

i mean it mugzu ;) <3

Just Love ya !!!

I know the comment is not that good :(

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Mugdhaa

@NonComposMentis

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: -Razzy-
finally the much awaited OS arrives !!!!
just one thing ...

I Love You !!

you separated my kisha , made KD coupled with juhi , almost potrayed kiya as a bit** and still
still...i effing Loved it !!!!

gosh i can't believe , jst can't believe that i would love this
i mean i was supposed to hate it (of course except yaara, i hate them always :P )
but rest , i mean to be honest i became somewhat happy inside
and the only person who can make me do this ...is

*drums rolling*

You !!

gosh mugzie i just can't tell you how amazing this was this ,
i specially came online to comment on this
Girl i am soo happy that u wrote it , finally almost or most of ur frustration has vanished i guess ;)

you know this turned out much much better than i imagined it to be
i wanted to write some sarcastic comment , but i just can't help but be genuine <3
Thank you for writing this *hugs*
somewhat made me strong enough to handle various emotions <3

and as u know a big fan i m of urs *hugs*
*U nailed it Girl!! *

and now *coming back to fan -self*
you have to give me a wild KiSha os soon !!!!
i mean it mugzu ;) <3
Just Love ya !!!
I know the comment is not that good :(

Aww Sia, I love you too! <3

@Bold Oh I knew this would be a bit of a shock...but it had to be done.. :P

@Purple Hayee!! Sachhi? :*

I'm just glad that you liked this, Sia. :D

No need to thank me yaar...I did what I had to...and it was a selfish motive...but I'm glad I could be of some help to you <3

Yeah...most of my anger is no more...

I'm feeling pretty light, ya know? ;)

Next wala pakka on KiSha...

I have something in my mind...will work upon it now :)

Damn, I so love you, girl! <3

Thank you so much for commenting!

🤗

Love ya!

Mugs.

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-Razzy-

@-Razzy-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: NonComposMentis

Aww Sia, I love you too! <3 Love u more <33
@Bold Oh I knew this would be a bit of a shock...but it had to be done.. :P i knw yaar , and surprisingly i liked it ;) *evil me*
@Purple Hayee!! Sachhi? :* muchchi :*
I'm just glad that you liked this, Sia. :D it was ur work , i had to like it <3
No need to thank me yaar...I did what I had to...and it was a selfish motive...but I'm glad I could be of some help to you <3 we shared that motive ;) <3
Yeah...most of my anger is no more... thank god !!!
I'm feeling pretty light, ya know? ;) i m happy for that <3
Next wala pakka on KiSha... Yipee!!!!
I have something in my mind...will work upon it now :) OMG i am soo waiting !!! *greedy look on*
Damn, I so love you, girl! <3 mugzu i love u too <3
Thank you so much for commenting! wasn't able to be in peace without commenting *mugzie's magic ;) *
🤗
Love ya! love u too !! 🤗
Mugs.

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Aishwarya

@Aishu_Kisha

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Mugs🤗

This 1 was Utterly P-E-R-F-E-C-T.

I totally loved each and every bit of it.

And KiShaRa emotions were portrayed beautifully.

Honestly you are one hell of a writer.

Seriously every work of yours has so much depth in it.

YaRa lost their love,life,career,everything just because of their hatred.

Totally a Fantabulous OS.

Do write more.

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Mugdhaa

@NonComposMentis

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

@Sia

Muaahhh :*

You know my feelings ;)

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Mugdhaa

@NonComposMentis

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Kishaforever
Mugs🤗
This 1 was Utterly P-E-R-F-E-C-T.
I totally loved each and every bit of it.
And KiShaRa emotions were portrayed beautifully.
Honestly you are one hell of a writer.
Seriously every work of yours has so much depth in it.
YaRa lost their love,life,career,everything just because of their hatred.
Totally a Fantabulous OS.
Do write more.

Aishh!!! 🤗

Thank you! <3

I'm just so glad you liked this yaar :)

My works have depth..? :O I never felt so...

It was a bit of a personal revenge on YaRa...pain, guilt, loss...

But thank you once again!

Really, it means a lot to me.

Love ya!

Mugs.

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Reserved.
Just read it on way walk back home. Since i'm getting late for gym. I shall give a whole analysis in the night. Apologies.

*Edited*

So well. It was... haunting. What you wrote was a facet of reality. But the most upsetting way it could turn.

ShavHi is not really a couple I've seen. I haven't seen the last few months of Season 1. And I'm still in love with HiMa. It was the most beautiful pairing there was. Somehow ShavHi as a non-platonic couple seem unmatchable. Well I'm too fond of trust bonds than romantic relationships. to each their own.

I wonder why Kiya didn't use water proof makeup. Well won't be that dramatic that way, would it?

I'm sorry I'm just not in a critical mood today. People tell me a i critique a lot. I'm trying to do it less.

I like the Inner Voice Kiya. She's sensible. Kiya wanted to hurt KD. And that's all she saw. It's a lot different than one moment of that sadistic need of wanting to see the hurt on other person's face. This was pre-meditated. This was vampish. Not innocent.

This is how bad it could get. That's it. Best part. It can't get worse than this. You can't have worse than a alcoholic RV and depressed Kiya. As individual characters I like RV a lot. But story wise you did justice to how their life turned up.

You wish you could turn back time, don't you, Kiya?

^^ Sigh. I know this feeling. I know specifically when rectifying the mistake is not enough, you wish never happened. The prick in your heart when you know it happened. There's not getting over it.

I like it how you take the title to be the dividing moment between the parts...

Have you seen Ashiqui 2? Ranveer reminded me of Rahul from that movie. I loved the little ViChi-ness you put in. The engagement party. Panchi sobbing into Avi's chest. I could imagine it all. The imagery here was brilliant.

Juhi is innocence personified. And i loved it how you showed her ingenuous yet so mature. It was breathtaking.

It's not too late for a lot of things. It's not too late for a fourth life to be dragged in. Not too late for an unaffected life to be touched in the wrong way. Till it hurts, it won't be too late for a lot more things to go wrong..

Edited by CoffeeAddict - 12 years ago

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-Razzy-

@-Razzy-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: NonComposMentis
@Sia
Muaahhh :*
You know my feelings ;)

*muaah* <3

like always *hugs* ;)

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Mugdhaa

@NonComposMentis

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict
Reserved.
Just read it on way walk back home. Since i'm getting late for gym. I shall give a whole analysis in the night. Apologies.

No problem. I'm totally vella today...so gonna be up here on IF all day...