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Satarupa

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Unresed on pg 58 😃

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Satarupa

@..Satarupa..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

read chap 13 😃

"It wasn't raining. Sure, the air was misty and warm, but it wasn't raining. The stars weren't visible for a view tonight. They seemed to have been covered with blankets of wet, dark clouds. There should be a waxing crescent moon out there, but seems like the dark blankets didn't spare even the beautiful globe." Hayeee what a moment

"9:17 hours: The operative noticed that the subject looked and also smelled good." 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣

What else? 😛

OMG!!!! They are going to kiss 😲

Totally update was awesome 👏

Eagerly wating for the next part

Update soon 😊

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ParthKiBabe

@ParthKiBabe

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Okay Miss Prach Patel
I cannot tell u how much in awe i am !!

ROYAL INSTITUTE!!! BABY! U R TALENTED!
Gone are those days wherein u wrote small small stories!!
I mean W.O.W!
All those descriptions u wrote! i could visualize it.. even the minute details! u HAVE really IMPROVED a lot!! :D and The Language!! Prachiii I am proud to be ur frnd..
i could have just Inboxed this to u but i want the world to know How Talented u r!!! go high girl!!!
I respect all the decisions u took!
U deserve a lot more that u have got!
Love u loads!!! <3
Aur ha!!! BETTER COMPLETE THE STORY AND My suggestion is u can publish this AS A BOOK!!!
PS: from now onwards U r A write Girl! A Spy Who writes so well can go places!!! <3

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Shona_Mayur

@Shona_Mayur

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

I owe you the biggest apology ever. I never unres-ed my comment from last chapter 11. I feel so terrible!! I am terrribly sorry for my tardiness. I just have been busy lately so didn't get a chance. My apologies!

I read the last two chapters together so I shall talk about both of them!

Coming to chapter 12:

I love the small bits of her saying how much Ayush admires Mr. Saxena or her uncle Jay. I find that really adorable how they got out of character for that one little bit. And Romance is in the air between Panchi and Ranveer even though Panchi is taking her time realizing it. I had a silly smile reading that paragraph when she was observing and describing the dance sequence with Panchi/Ranveer and Kiya/KD.

Ooohhh suspense is building up now. I am sooo excited now! The girls got this! They have Kiya 😆 (Though all of them are awesome but I seem to be really partial lol)

You know what made me smile even wider? The note! I swear. It was sooo cute what followed. I loved Kiya's translation for the note. I literally LMAO! (excuse me for the language) That's pretty much what Ayush probably had in mind. Ok, I have no clue what he has in mind! He just is soo mysterious! Gaaahhh lol

And I love the last bits where she was panicking and everyone was assuring her. But the scene that stole my heart would have to be the one where Kiya told her that it was ok to like Ayush. And she reciprocated that with asking Kiya the same question about KD. I just love Kiya's reaction. Actually, I just love the whole scene like I already mentioned 😆

All in all, GREAT update! 😊

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Coming to Part 13:

"Riddle, you know you can talk, right?"

"It's allowed."

- I cracked up at Kiya's comment. Again, I have no clue but I simply loved all of Kiya's dialogues in your FF. Why? I have no clue 😆

I really liked all of their code names. I don't know if you did it on purpose but they seem very appropriate in a way lol

I simply love how Ayush is so spontaneous. I mean at one moment, they are both quiet and nervous and on the other moment, he is leading her away from the crowd. And then my heart stopped. Not literally, 'cause then I wouldn't be writing this comment 😆

"Just so you know, Princess." "I am going to kiss you now."

-Woah! I was NOT expecting this. I literally felt exactly the same way Neesha felt. I froze too. I re-read that line just to believe it lol. But alas, the moment had to be ruined which I was very upset about by the way. I am glad that Neesha is realizing that her resolves are weakening in front of him, though she's not happy about it seeing how the whole situation has caused her to doubt him.

Though I shall applaud at the last scene. It was really sweet. I mean I simply loved how she sort of got some of her answers. He was finally ready to do that! Yay! I loved the last scene. I loved how Panchi was telling Neesha to give Ayush a break and not give him a hard time because he's a sweet heart lol. Why do write the last scenes so beautifully? God, I was dying to read more! Please do update soon!

Again, I would like to apologize for not editing my post and not commenting on the last one! But I hope I made up with this comment 😊

Anyways, awesome updates!! But you already knew that lol

Edited by Shona_Mayur - 12 years ago

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Prachi!!..🤗 * backs off a little and prepares to run, in case you throw any stones at me*

well we both have been busy with exams and all, so inactive these days. I have been following the FF but just could not comment and my like button won't work..

Here's for Chap 11. ( i did comment that time too --> see :D : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3296871&PID=71956497&#71956497 ) 🤣

This enigmatic boy is going to be death of me! (Unless I kill him first. 🤣🤣

"Of course not!" Gen said, and I felt encouragement boosting through me. "You wouldn't get caught!"

Well, close enough. 🤣

I can SO imagine Neesha here!

I can SO imagine all the 3 girls esp. Panchi dressed up in sarees looking stunning. Haayee. I like thsi Gen girl too.

Kiya opened the door and leaned against its frame. "Really? You will help me?" + makeup artist part,

This was so Kiya Gujral!. Awesome part =)

"Well!" I flinched at his sound and turned to face Ayush. He took in everything from the sandals I can't walk in, and the Saree I can't feel comfortable in. Then he looked me in the eyes and whispered. "You don't look hideous.

and i love Ayush! 😳

I am sure he knows that am perfectly capable of throwing him down the stairs too. But then Madam Rochette came around.🤣 🤣

And I guess he was right. Maybe this was just what being a spy is like. Fitting in--anywhere, or everywhere. Everything felt different, and maybe that is how our life will be. Every mission will come with different covers, different locations. And all we could do would be fit in.

And i love you for this part!.. after all the Ayush-Neesh part *which i loved*..this still reminds me ki this is not a romantic FF but a spy one and i love that!

Ms. Verma, there is a man standing five feet away from you, how many sips is he away from completing his drink?" Mr. Saxena asked through our comms unit.

"Twelve, if he keeps the pace." Chandni said, and from the corner of my eyes, I could see the man they were talking about. Dr. Mehta.

and how? HOW ON EARTH, DO YOU THINK OF SUCH THINGS??!!! This was amazing Prach.

"I didn't tell you my name." I said, hoping to catch his mistake. "How did you know?"

"Oh!" He said, raising his eyebrows exactly the way a wanted debonaire english art thief was supposed to. "I make it a point to know the names of," He pulled me closer. "Beautiful women."

Awesome ending .

On whole, another Awesome Chapter =)

Update ASAP!

I know i have 2 more chaps to comment on..will do it soon. Already told you about exams...so comments won't be regular.

-Shreya and Kanishtha

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

PRACHI!!!!!

WHERE IS THE UPDATE!? 😡

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@RKDramebaaz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: -3raser-
This FF is more addicting than the show ahah!
Love it!

Lol! Thanks! That was flattering =)

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@RKDramebaaz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: FeistySoul
Neesha is complex then what the hell would one call a certain Ayush.
This guy is infuriating and charming at the same time!
And I want to trust him and not trust him.
He is lethal in short.
Alumni List of a spy school, Damn!
Whoever that guy is he should end up dead or caught soon.
Why exactly was Ayush going to kiss Neesh?
This guy will drive us all mad I tell you Prachi.
And you put him in black,in BLACK!
Woman do you want us poor girls having a heart attack?
(I better go and arrange some glyceryltrinitrate)
Mystery is alluring.
A mysterious male homo sapien
*Nidha dies*
Love you Prachi.

Haha! Ayush..I call him my love! :P

He is a bit too complex, I know, but he is a spy.

I don't thnk anyone realizes how imp that list is...besides you. Lol!

Why he was going to kiss her? Now that, my friend, is a mystery.

He has already driven me mad *swoons*

Err, Black is a smexy boy color na? ;)

😆 Thank you so much Nidha! Love your comments! Kepp reading and commenting :D Love you too!

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@RKDramebaaz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: _FATIMA_
It took me a long time to comment on this awesome piece of writing but just so you know i have been silent-stalking this thread since the beginning.
No problem, as long as you commented :D

Anyways, the update was as usual fantastic. Thank you!
Kartik !!! kabab me haddi..UFF how I hate him from interrupting that random kiss. Hehe! Villainiousity resides in every Indian story ;)
Ayush seems fishy. his character is something that I have my doubts on. He is maybe like a grey character and not exactly bad like he so honestly says!He is maybe grey, but he never said he is bad, did he?
Neesha is surely a very complex character.He is the character i love the most in this ff. (well who dosen't):) I love them both! I guess, Neesha just reflects every inner girl a spy! Its a bad combo!

It must be so hard for you to write this particular ff because it needs a lot of creativity with the tons of unreal gadgets you have described so nicely.Oh you have no idea! Took me hours to come up with a perfect plot! Which is still not perfect! No idea how the hell am I going to write it in words! -____-
hmmm..dr desh, wonder whats he done now? Is this all leading up to any clues in order to find neesha's dad? whatever it is i do hope it harms neesha and ayush in no way. Instead it should get them closer. I can't say, but you will see :P
panchiii!! you go girl!
ranveer you better offf checking your shoes before going out anywhere,right?
the last scene was completely drool-worthy. HAAYE!! 🤣Ranveer will keep that in mind ;) Thanks!
He is not at all bad.(or is he?) Maybe :P
I am utterly confused about all the mystery but i suppose as a writer that was how you were supposed to make us feel, right? Yup! That is exactly what you're meant to feel ;)
i will send a buddy request to the TBP_prachi account and will be waiting for the next part. Err, it's Prachi_TBP 😆 Suree!
fatima
xo

Thank you for your lovely comment Fatima, glad you read my FF :D