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Fortune13

@Fortune13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

LOVED IT!!!!!! And congratzzz for winning the best FF writer award!!! *clapsss* Well deserved!!! :*

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Shaz

@..DamonCrazy..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

"So," He was saying. "Do you want to go somewhere more private?"

"That depends," Kiya said cocking her head. "Do you wanna keep that hand?"

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And then Ayush dipped me--Yes, actual dippage. And winked at me--Yes, actual winkage.

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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

*Sigh* Neesha & Kiya. My favourite girls

I had decided to read this story after it ended. Or atleast when 20 chapters ended😛 But then MK's raving made me way too curious so...here I am😆

And for this...I love you Rae🤗 Because this story is friggin AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!Definitely up there with "The Cover" as my favourite story

Pehli baat...mujhe jaana hai RI main!!! It is such an awesome & cool school. They do so much better stuff than us. Uaan Uaan!!!!! And damn...I LOVE NEESHA!!!! Mere Damon ki kasam. She's cute, funny, smart & an amzing friend. AND a spy Kudos for making me love her so much Prachi👏 Her interactions with the other girls are so much fun. And I love that these girls have so much spunk. They can really kick a**!!!Love the whole girlie group. Gen is another amazing character. And a great friend. And I LURVED Kiya's entry into the school & their group.

The boy's ka entry was so 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣. The way they girls reacted, as if Aliens had dropped down on this planet, was simply hilarious🤣🤣. Hayye...you introduced my KD as a Greek God☺️(You know it's damn fun reading about the TBP characters from someone else's POV). And Ayush...

OH EM GEE AYUSH!!!!!!Merlin's hot pink, hearts covered underpants!!!!!*Phangirl squealing*

Hayye Ayush is so damn SEXY! And Hot! And simply PURFECT!!!! Fell for him from his first meeting with Neesha. Ayush & Neesha...AAAH!!! He has such an amazing snarky attitude. I LOVE HIM!!!DPD approves😎 The boys & girls ka first convo was again...well, hillarious😆 I really loved Kush ka dialogue to Neesha. About the night & all. Kinda cliche but...*blushes*.

I am loving all these CovOps. Write more of them na. They are so much fun to read. Love the way the girls co-ordinate. And Riddle is an adorable nickname<3<3. And ab toh even boys have joined them. Double fun!!!

The party was great too. Hayye...these kiddos can't even have a normal, spy-stuff less party. How cool is that😆 Them being someone else was an awesome idea. Hayye...KD & Neesha were adorable And Neesha & Ayush were PURE LOVE!!! Love the way he flusters her😉 The same for the little moment in the kitchens.

The last chapter was so interesting. Things are getting murky. The BOYS breached security😲 Now THAT...was a WTP moment. Are you making them grey? YES YES YES!!!!! *cheers loudly*. Do na? PLEASE!!! Would love to see this new dimension😳 And what's this about MR DESH!!! Uff...kaise part par roka. UPDATE!!!!!

"Just so you know, Princess." He said in a soft whisper, stepping closer to me. "I am going to kiss you now."

"Look at it." He pointed to the finger that had my ring on. "I am not lying." He said. "Look at me." He held my face between his hands. Even in the darkness, I could see his face under the shadows. "I am not lying." He whispered again.

Can someone PLEASE explain how this girl managed to make me fall so hard for this character. I swear I had goosebumps during these two parts. Uff...Kartik & Piya😡 I like Piya, but unki timing is BAD!!!! Hopefully Ayush will now try to woo back Neesha's trust & her heart. Aaah

*KiSha fangirl moment*

I am just loving those brief KiSha moments you are giving in the midst of all the epicness. Especially that little moment in the barn And the one in the dance. KD, the Greek God, and Kiya, the prettiest girl in the school. AAAHHH!!!!

*Fangirl moment over*

In short, LOVE THIS STORY!!! UPDATE!!!! And love you Prachi🤗

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Krati Choudhary

@kittu_arsha

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

Vahee toh ! How on Earth could my Ayush be a Bad Boy or even the Others..huhh !

soo soo soo Much in Love with the Ending..it was soo Adorable..awwwhh !

n then the girls spying on Neesh..haha :D i Like !

ps : loved ot totally when aayush said ! Oh god Neeshaaa ! Eee ! :D too Good !

well ! Love all ur Updates n for me this probably is one of the Best FF i Read on the TBP Forum ! Keep Updating Jaldi Jaldi ! Haha :D

once Again ! Stupendous Work Babe..

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Krati Choudhary

@kittu_arsha

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#464

And Wait ! Why did i NOT Mention the KISS ! Actually Almost Kiss ! Haha

i am Sure Ayush saw Kartik Before ! N yes ! Kartik? Did he helped the Boys telling about the Car ! Ahaan ! Interesting ! Not a bad guy !

Ps : m texting with my Best Friend Ayush whilst commenting This :P

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_AppyFizz_

@_AppyFizz_

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Awesome update!!! 👏 I am sure ayush had already seen Karthik!! 😆 by the way are u going to continue 'The Cover' or have u decided to discontinue it?? Anyway awesome awesome awesome update!! :)

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Ammu

@ItsMe_Ammu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#466

Awesome work dear...

I really love this FF, though I admit I dont comment regularly.. Sorry..

I love the sarcastic lines and underlying comic tone in this FF..

Keep it up👍🏼 and update soon...

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Chalo, here are my comments as promised! Sorry it took SO long! You know IB! 😆

Chapter 10

How can I forget this? She met him at the beach, on a bench and he followed her to her location! 😆😉

I don't care if Ayush whined. He'd still look sexy doing it. Come on Neesh, you have to agree that even though he's a highly-trained-future-intelligence-in-making, he would look sexy while doing anything. Even staring at the ceiling. 🤣 Yes, I realise I'm mental.

Heavy teenage hormones or not. He asked you out on a date, Neesh. BE HAPPY! I love the way she's so 'let's NOT talk about things that make me feel awkward' and he does exactly that! 😆 Aah, he's adorable. And he sing-songed. I can totally imagine that happening. Neesh asking questions, and Ayush answering them SO freaking smartly! 😆

I loved the way Ayush subtly just puts it out there, 'They used to be'. And yes, Neesh, Ayushmaan Kashyap is quite a bit like you are. Just give him a chance, sheesh! *sighs dramatically* 😆😆

She fixed, repaired and installed 63 smoke detectors?! Oh dear God, these guys are SO bloody good! I wanna go to a spy school! *wails* But it must be such hard work na? *thinking look*.

As soon as I read, 'the halls were silent', I KNEW something was going to happen. Such is the beauty of narrative! 😆 The scene between KD-Kiya was really intimate and adorable. I loved it to bits.

I LOVE the rain. It makes everything so beautiful. Sexyna was wearing a black shirt and dark jeans. Do you WANT me have a heart-attack woman!? WHY must you do this?! *swoons*. That. Is. SO. HOT. And the worst part is, he's not even DOING anything. He's just standing there, looking all hot and sexy. If you make him the baddie, I shall stop talking to you and after I die, my soul is going to haunt you! Do NOT make him the baddie. I shall kick you as soon as I meet you. I mean it! And NOW HE SMILES!? What the hell is wrong with you!? 😲

Uncle Jay!? AWWW. Jay..Dhingra! 🤣 Sorry, it just had to be done. Moving on...😆

He doesn't think they would be safe with him? OOOH. Intriguing. Dammit Prachi, update this ASAP. I can't WAIT to know the suspense. Anyhoo, Neeshu must be SO overwhelmed seeing those pictures! 😭 The 'Om' pendant. Her dad's? And he has his reasons. You're going to make him seem like a baddie aren't you? And then change at the last minute? Yes, he's said he has had his reasons, but STILL!

Aw Ayush. He's like her knight in shining armour. Or maybe, he was there so that she wouldn't know what he was really doing? Or what his team was really doing? He leaned his shoulder against the window, signature pose? Yes, I know. You ARE trying to make me faint. OOOH, they were GOING TO KISS!!! What the hell? Code Black!?!?!!

What the hell happened?! And how the hell did Ayush disappear in a second!? Oh wait. He's a spy. Oh dear God. Why did he say that he wasn't with Neesha!? :O Now everyone's gonna think she lied! 😲

THAT. IS. A SEXY DESCRIPTION. He was wearing a wife-beater? 😲☺️ Damn. You. Prach. Oooh, he is being JEALOUS! 🤣 I LOVE it! 😃

'let's just say that boy spies are the most complicated species I've ever met in my life' HAHAHAHHAHAH! THAT was hilarious. She's totally all 'WHAT the hell'? 😆

And WHY must you leave the chapter like that?! NIKE Prach, NIKE! 😆

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#468

Chapter 11

Happy waala budday aunty! 😃 I can NOT believe you! Okay, let's start! 😆 Her favourite parts of RI are secret passages and the tunnels. Her favourite one is behind the temple at RI? The Krishna one?

'This enigmatic boy is going to be the death of me. (unless I kill him first) - 🤣 This was SUCH a typical Neesh thing to say! She compliments him, then she plans on killing him and then, contradicts herself once more! 😆 Urgh, Kartik? WHY would she meet Kartik when there is Ayush around? And they call themselves smart? 😆

'You wouldn't get caught!' 😆 THIS is what true friends are like! Panchi reminds me of Hermione! Her grades are SO important to her!

AHA! I KNEW IT! I think I know where the story is going. I'll PM you about it! 😉 Is it something to do with what we discussed in the CC? About 'our story?'. 😆 Sexyna met her dad before he disappeared. There is SO much potential to that angle. Therefore, if you make Sexyna or ANY of the boys that I LOVE (read: Ayush) bad, I' going to go apeshit on you! 😆

Facts and rumours list made me fall of my bed while reading. Dammit🤣 Waxing was illegal! 😆

OMG, is this the black and red waali saree? The one that I SO desperately want?! 😲 I can SO totally imagine Kiya dressing everyone up and all the other girls being totally clueless about hair and makeup and all that jazz. Which explains what comes next: 'Really? You will help me?' 🤣 I can imagine her hands on her waist and going all 'eyebrow raised' thing!

Can this guy compliment?! 😆 'You don't look hideous?' I LOVE Ayush. He always says the most amazing and snappy things ever that always seem to shut Neesh up and ponder over what SHE says! 😆 Brilliant, this guy is! Sheika Brian? Ahaannn! 😳😳

You made a Jab We Met reference! I LOVE YOU TOTALLY!!!! 🤗 And I can't believe this. This school is like a dream world. Like Disney. Everyone's SO freaking observant and HOW the hell do you know all this? Like 'how many sips is one person away from finishing the drink' HOW!? Yes, they are spies, I know, but still!!!

'Our song??' and he just called her beautiful!? Is there anything this guy can't do!? AYUUUSHHH! 😳

'And then he dipped me, yes an actual dippage. And winked at me; yes an actual winkage' 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 - HAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH, THAT WAS a BRILLIANT finish!!!

NIKE!

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#469

Congratulations and celebrations and lalalalalalaalal! 😆 You crossed 50!! *jhappiyaan*

Royal Institute is a spy school. Until we met the boys from Ashvamedh I was sure that is the only school of it's kind. There are things in our world that holds more secrets than I could even imagine. And some of those things were minds.

Brilliant beginning Prach, LOVE it. How true this statement is, even she doesn't know. She is only talking about the factual secrets; however she doesn't know that the secrets have more to do with her life than she knew.

Goddaamit!!!! Ayush is Sexyna's SON!? HE IS, isn't he!? OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! 😲 You know, it makes a point. Sexyna is awesome, so is Ayush. Both are freaking sexy and always seem to know what to say. It totally makes sense! 😆 Neeshu, of course he admires Sexyna, he's the SON! 😉😆

AND you incorporated Disney! I love you yaar! 😆 And Ayush pakka flirt hai! Chance pe dance! 😉 Quite literally!

OhmyGod. Someone breached the...😲 Who? OMG it's someone from Ashvamedh isn't it? By why would they? What do they want? Unless, there is someone who is acting like a spy for some bad spy people. That makes sense! 😆

Ayush IS an enigma. He's SO hot. 😆 Anyway, Neeshu misses him! I knew it! Aisa ek na ek din toh ho kar rahega! And who does that? Avoid and then ask for a movie via a spy technique? Ayush Kashyap, that's who! 😆

Translation: This weekend might be a good chance for us to see each other outside our school in a social environment, free of competition. I do not view other boys as threats, and I enjoy making them seem insignificant by calling them the wrong names. (Translation by Kiya Gujral)

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I admit it, I died of laughter at that point! 😆 Ayush is sucha sweetheart! Kartar?! 😆

Oh dear no. He is up to something, that much I know, but please don't let him be the baddie. PLEASE NO! I've been begging since the last 3 parts. Itna toh banta hai Prach.

Okay, I take it back. Panchi is EXACTLY like Hermione! 😆

But not even the best training at the best school can teach us to protect our hearts

Why did you have to leave it at that? Urgh, you're SO annoying and I don't like you at all. But you have to NIKE. Knowing Neesha's fate, and the way she's tempting it, she is bound to run into Kartik because the first two about Ayush drugging her and it all being a trap doesn't seem likely. Well, I'm keeping my hope of Ayush being SUPREMELY nice alive. Is that SO wrong?! 😆

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#470

Finally, part 13. You better love me now woman. Despite all my laziness and everything, I'm giving you supremely long comments! 😆

STOP blabbering and update! 😆 You don't suck at plotting. You've kept us hooked onto this thing since SO long. Now you better update, I mean it! 😆 I know that 'those who didn't comment' waala thing was directed at me. But what the hell. I'm commenting now. Appreciate it! 😆

Dammit woman, you really know how to start a chapter, don't you? Brilliant beginning as always, kinda pathetic fallacy-y. 😆 Yes, I'm an IB studannntt! 😉

Why the hell is her codename Riddle? And they're communicating about THIS via comms units? 😆 I LOVE them! His hair was falling on his forehead? Black shirt and dark jeans and cute adorable strolling? I know now pakka se, you want me to faint. Pehle Sexyna with the same combo and now Ayush? Gah! He's MINE people, back off. I've got DIBS! 😆 He looked good and smelled good? What else does she WANT?! 🤣

OhmyGod, she is falling for him but she doesn't want to because she thinks he is a baddie. AWWW. YOU BETTER NOT BACK HIM BAD. I'll slap you.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! That's like "A walk to remember' waala line! And Ayush saying it makes it SO much better!!!! AAAH! I'm going to faiiint! They're going to kiss!!!

What the PYJAMA!?!?!?! What the hell is that Piya chick doing? Is she like some sort of a weird psycho stalker? She better not be? And I KNEW they'd run into Kartar! And Ayush swore loudly? That is so typical and I can SO totally imagine that happening! 😆

They spoke to each other in hindi! And WHO the hell is in that car?! Ayush knew about the friends spying! AWWW! 😳 Oh dear God! He KNEW the car?! He knew who was following them!? She can't trust him anymore! Dammit Prach, why must you do this!?

OMG. The breach. In the boys' wing?! WHY ARE YOU NOT CONTINUING!?!?!?!?! Kumar has been stabbed!?!? and someone stole something!? What the hell?? Of course Ayush would know if Neesh was up to something and sure enough.

I know, this is serious and everything but 'Give me one good reason I shouldn't kick you where the sun never shines?' HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAH!!!!

Dr. DESH!?!?!?! The 'Excellent' wala teach? He seemed SO COOL! OMG, he's the baddie?? And all hail Neeshu's friends! They are STILL spying on her! 😆 'He's such a sweetheart, don't give me a hard time' - EXACTLY. EX.ACT.LY!!! Why is she being so mean! Awww, mera Ayush!!! 😳

'Look at it. Look at me. I'm not lying' 😲 - COULD YOU HAVE LEFT IT AT A WORSE POINT!? What the hell is wrong with you!? OMG. This was SO intimate and personal. I LOVE the ending. Just update soon will you? NIKE.

Phew. All comments done! 😆

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