I Live For You ll Kisha SS ll Chapter 14 updatedll - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: keshiya

pata nahi par meri story is all together out of context. so maybe it is allowed. u see ff ka meaning hi fan fantasy hai so i guess it is. ranveer real mein villan bante jaa raha hai which is not good. i like him as a hero.


ff matlab fan fiction hai...pr matlab kya hota hai?...panchi-juhi-kiya-samar me muje kd-rv-piddhi ko negsative dikhaana pada tha...u hv any idea kitne parts aur baaki hai? dekh kar lagta hai ki 10-15 parts aaraam se hoga😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohh.. really sorry. main bhool gayi thi. hey panchi-juhi-kiya-samar mein kd-piddi-ranveer ko negative dikhana pada tha? iska kya matlab hai? what r u asking? mere ss ko aaram se atleast 12 chapters lagenge, i think.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: keshiya

ohh.. really sorry. main bhool gayi thi. hey panchi-juhi-kiya-samar mein kd-piddi-ranveer ko negative dikhana pada tha? iska kya matlab hai? what r u asking? mere ss ko aaram se atleast 12 chapters lagenge, i think.


cool, means u r half way...vl wait😊...cumn to my ss, d 4 were talking on how kd-piddhi misunderstood n hurted kiya as well as how ranveer hurted panchi...remember...cumn back to ur ss, i feel v vl see rahi😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!!!!!😃😃

dat was gr8!!!😃

late night chats hmmm...hmm...!!😳😉

aur to aur "love you" bola skype par...!!😳

hain kiya 5 bottles!!!! gone nutz?? 😲😲

kiya is missing kd...😉

evry1 knows dat dey love each oder... ❤️

y do dey deny...?? 😕

u know my eyes became wet at d last paragrph!! 😭😭

it was emotional..!! 😊

ranveer such a jerk i hate him!!!!!!!!! 😡😡

hurting kiya?! 😡😡

i love KD!!!!! ❤️ ❤️

how understanding, cute n sweet he is yaar!! 😃 ❤️

dey shud b a couple!!

uhuh frndship ka end!!! 😭😭😭

not fair!!!!😭😭

srry fr cmmnting sooo late!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Rashi_d3

wow!!!!!😃😃 Thank you


dat was gr8!!!😃 I'm happy u liked it.

late night chats hmmm...hmm...!!😳😉 Kiya loves to chat especially with KD

aur to aur "love you" bola skype par...!!😳 Beer ka kamal tha

hain kiya 5 bottles!!!! gone nutz?? 😲😲 She fails to understand anything once she is upset and ends up doing something really foolish

kiya is missing kd...😉 ya but is yet to understand her feelings for him

evry1 knows dat dey love each oder... ❤️ even KD knows that he loves her but Kiya is yet to taste the sweetness of their relationship and the bonding they share

y do dey deny...?? 😕 just to save their so called relationship with Panchi and Ranveer

u know my eyes became wet at d last paragrph!! 😭😭 it was emotional

it was emotional..!! 😊 its true

ranveer such a jerk i hate him!!!!!!!!! 😡😡 even i hate him in the show too he is acting like a jerk

hurting kiya?! 😡😡 that was really bad from his side

i love KD!!!!! ❤️ ❤️ me too

how understanding, cute n sweet he is yaar!! 😃 ❤️ he is always so cute with everyone, love him

dey shud b a couple!! aage aage dekho hota hai kya

uhuh frndship ka end!!! 😭😭😭 a twist yet to come in the next chapter

not fair!!!!😭😭 wait and watch

srry fr cmmnting sooo late! its fine

thank you so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


cool, means u r half way...vl wait😊...cumn to my ss, d 4 were talking on how kd-piddhi misunderstood n hurted kiya as well as how ranveer hurted panchi...remember...cumn back to ur ss, i feel v vl see rahi😊 just wait and watch. there's much more to come your way

looking forwrad to your ss.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice chapter loved the confession
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful yet devastating dream:Chapter 7

Kiya was standing outside a door of a house. She had known that door. She knocked at it, a few seconds later, KD opened the door. He was sleepy. Kiya entered the house very casually, as if it was her own house. The house was pretty big with a big living room.

She was wearing a beautiful salwar suit. KD gave her a glass of water and went inside the bedroom to enjoy his half disturbed sleep. She went inside the kitchen to prepare coffee. As she was done making it, she poured it in two coffee mugs. She went inside the bedroom and started budging KD naughtily. She placed the tray on the side table and became busy in arranging things that were kept on the side table. She noticed that from some time, KD was continuously gazing at her; she was blushing and telling him to stop starring at her. She took a pillow from the bed and threw it on him. KD was yet deeply engrossed in her. She started avoiding him. A few minutes later, KD went near Kiya and stood behind her. Kiya realized that he was standing at her back. Her heart started beating fast, she felt something in her stomach, ya she had butterflies in the stomach, her attention was completely diverted from arranging things to KD. She started playing with her nails. KD held her hand from back and came closer to her, she could feel his breath on her neck. Her eyes closed automatically and she was breathing heavily. He placed his hand on her waist, he was tickling her. She had a broad smile on her face. KD hugged her from back and kissed her neck, she held his hands tightly and shut her eyes completely. KD turned Kiya towards him.

"You are the most precious gift that God has given me, my wifey. I have devoted my entire life to you until we take our last breath. I love you." He said.

Kiya opened her eyes, she was not able to look into his eyes, she was feeling shy. KD was running his fingers through her wavy hair. He took her hair on one side of her neck. He moved his fingers on her neck. She was breathing heavily. She had goose bumps every time he touched her.

"At first I would like to kiss on your forehead, it will tell you that I respect you." KD took her face in his hands and kissed her forehead. Kiya felt good.

"Then I would kiss your eyes, to soothe them as they always show care for me." And he did so. A small tear came from Kiya's eye, KD kissed the tear too. She smiled.

"Then I would kiss your bubbly cheeks, to tell you that you are a small baby for me and I will hug you tight when you feel low." He kissed her left cheek and bit the other passionately.

"The next kiss will be on your neck to show you that I will make love to you in a beautiful manner." He kissed her neck once and rubbed his lips on it.

Kiya hugged him tightly and said "I love you, Keshu, never leave me alone, I want to live with you forever."

"I am not yet done, one last kiss is left. This kiss wiil be on your lovely lips, it will make us one, Kehav and Kiya will be two different bodies but only one soul, they will be 'KiSha' from then."

Kiya looked in his eyes, she saw a spark in them. Their breath had become one, Kiya closd her eyes, in a few seconds, their lips met. They kissed each other passionately for a long time. KD lifted her in his arms and laid her on the bed. He started kissing her neck, he moved his fingers on her lips and said "They are mine forever" and kissed them again. Kiya took him in her arms and moved her fingers through his hair. They felt marvelous in each other's company they interlocked the fingers of their hands and closed their eyes.

After sometime, the doorbell rang. Kiya pushed KD back and went to open the door, KD was not allowing her to go, he was grabbing her in his arms. She threw a pillow on him and ran away from there, laughing and giggling, "Keshu, how besharam you are." She said.

She opened the door and saw Ruchi standing, Ruchi came inside and asked Kiya what is there to eat by addressing her 'Bhabhi', Kiya went in the kitchen and...

(This dream was total filmy types just to add those feelings into my characters. Hope you like it and are not bored reading it.)

Kiya woke up from her sleep. Her forehead was wet with sweat despite of such a cold morning. She started looking haphazardly around her room. She couldn't believe what she saw. She thought as if her dream was real, yes it was a dream where she saw herself as KD's wife. She went to the washroom and washed her face. She was all alone in the house, her mom had gone to her Yoga classes and her dad went to his office early in the morning. She asked her servant to make coffee for her. She sipped the coffee and switched on the television. She was purposely trying to get busy in some work or the other work, but nothing helped her. she was incapable of forgetting her dream, she could yet feel him standing near her. She could feel his touch. As the time passed, she became more and more unstable.

What is happening to me? My mind and heart are running in two opposite directions. What kind of a dream was that? How could I see Keshu and me so close to each other? If I tell this to Ranveer, he will become impulsive. What should I do? I can still visualize what I saw, I can hear what he said, his voice is running in my mind. I want to forget this dream, it is making me weak. God please help me.

Her head was spinning due to the innumerable questions. It was very difficult to imagine that this dream was affecting Kiya so badly.

Kiya's mind was unsteady. She went to take a bath. She saw herself in the mirror of her bathroom. Her face was looking lustrous despite of her stupid thoughts. Suddenly she felt his breath on her neck, she felt the tickles on her stomach. 'Kisha... Kisha... Kisha... Kisha...' were the words running through her mind. Her open hair reminded her of KD running his fingers through them. She came out of the bathroom as she felt it was difficult to have one.

She switched on her laptop and login her facebook account. (I know you may be thinking how there was facebook ten years back but this is just an imaginary story. Everything is possible here) She saw the recent visitors of her profile and saw KD's name in the list. Irritated, she turned off the laptop. She plugged in her headphones and played her favorite song on her ipod. But her attention was lost somewhere else. She was trying hard to stop thinking about him.

She finally decided to study. She took her chemistry book and started studying. But she could not concentrate on her studies too. KD had affected her heart and soul. She threw her book away in frustration. She called Ranveer.

"Hello Ranveer. I want to talk to you."

"Not now darling, I'm busy at the moment. I will call you when I'm free."

"Please just 5 minutes." She insisted.

"I'll call you when I'm free. Bye."

Ranveer hung up the phone abruptly. Kiya threw her mobile away in anger. She closed her eyes. The limit of her frustration was increasing every minute. Her images with KD were flashing on her mind which she was desperately trying to avoid. She took a piece of paper and tore it into two parts like a typical Indian girl does when she is confused. On one part she wrote CALL and on the other DON'T CALL. She folded them, shook them in her hand. She was talking to God.

'If you think I should call Keshu and tell him what is happening to me then choose CALL or else you know.'

She closed her eyes, took a deep breath and picked up one chit. She was getting nervous. She opened it. It read- CALL.

She thought of doingit once again but then finally decided to talk to KD. She called him.

"Ya Kiya" he said.

"Keshu..." she paused.

She thought about the circumstances that may happen and sighed. She finally said it-
'I LOVE YOU.'

"What happened to you Kish?" he was amazed.

"I don't know anything but I am serious Keshu. I love you. I am not joking." She said and bit her lips.

KS laughed and said, "But suddenly what happened to you?"

"Keshu can we meet today in the evening?" she asked.

"Ok fine. We will meet at 5.30. I will call you later Kish to decide about the place. " he said and hung the phone.

Kiya was feeling relaxed now. She knew whatever she was doing was completely wrong. The consequences would be devastating, but she could not stop her feelings being revealed to KD.

Next chapter soon...






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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome finally she said I love u can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you rema😳 will update soon

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