OS: Bechari Kiya /Part 5 Updated - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
its awesome yr..d concern n d care ...i luved it ...plz pm me d nxt also...i m in luv dis ff...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3

in the evening...
Kiya went to the beach so that she could calm herself down and try to forget what happened in the morning.

KD who always goes to the beach every evening with his brother was just walking on the sand barefoot trying to feel the softness of the sand. He was regretting as to why he thought Kiya in a wrong way and then he suddenly spotted Kiya sitting on a bench with earphones plugged in her ears.

KD called his brother who was playing with his frnds and said,

KD:Su n tera match complete hone ke baad tu ghar chale jana Ok. Mujhe kuch kaam hai main badme aa jaunga.

His brother: Ha dada thik hai, apan ghari bhetuya aani aaj tar mi match jinkanar hai, tumhi tumcha kaam karun gya(Ok dada we will meet at home and today I only will win the match, you complete your work)

KD: Chalel (ok fine)

He leaves him and starts walking towards Kiya. He sits besides her silently. Kiya is shocked to see him but does not express it.

KD: Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

Kiya: Tumse matlab. It's a public place and I can come here at anytime, she says in a rude tone making KD angry.

KD tries to control his anger and asks her

KD: Kya tum mujhse naraz ho?

Kiya innocently asks him: Kya tum mujhe sachme publicly humiliate karna chahte the.

KD: Nahi not really. Mujhe bahoot badi misunderstanding ho gayi thi. I'm really sorry maine tujhe galat samjha aur tujpar trust nahi kiya.

Kiya: Tumne mujhse friendship isiliye ki taki tum mere emotions ke sath khelo aur mujhe pata bhi na chale

By this time her eyes became moist.

KD: I know maine tumhe bahoot hurt kiya hai and you will never forgive me😭,said KD in a low voice

Kiya saw that KD was also hurt and said

Kiya: It's ok ab jo hogaya use bhoolke ek new start lete hai and maine tumhe maaf kar diya.

Listening the last words he felt like hugging her but stopped himself from doing so coz she may take it in a wrong way.

KD: Thanks Kiya 😊 main tumhe rota hua nahi dekh sakta.
(She started smiling ) Tum smile karte hue bahot cute lagti ho. Always keep smiling.

She hugged him when he told those words. he was shocked but hugged her back and sooon their hug became a passionate one. It looked s if they are inseparable and made for each other.

Hope you liked this part. Comment on it and suggestions are always welcomed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i dint like it ...but i luved yr wowww a hug ..oh god i luved d way u expressed it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Amazing part ! Thanks for the Pm (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rocksravya11

i dint like it ...but i luved yr wowww a hug ..oh god i luved d way u expressed it ...

sorry maine jaldi me likha tha 😭 bahot zyada filmy hogaya na. so sorrry
Edited by keshiya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomeee updates👏

loved it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Nice n cute update .plz do continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritika_arvi

Nice n cute update .plz do continue.

really u liked it!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4


They broke their hug when they realized it was getting too late and they went to their homes

Kiya's room

Kiya was thinking about her moments with KD when suddenly she remembered how he was planning to hurt her and that she listened to their conversation(refer part 1)She thought to herself 'if I had not overheard their convo then probably he would have really executed his plan and I would have been left broken. How could he even think I framed him? He did not even trust me once before doing such stupidity. I know we fight a lot but before planning to hurt a girl he should have thought how will she feel. I was wrong, I expected too much from him.'

Also the thought that if her mom comes to know that she helped KD,she would throw her to the boarding school. She cannot afford to go to boarding, she can't lose her friends though they were very few, not her teachers.

She now wanted to talk to KD coz if KD told anyone about her helping him, she would hand into a big trouble.

Meanwhile at KD's place

KD too was thinking about KIya. He was happy that their misunderstandings were cleared and that she agreed to remain as his friend. KD to himself: Is duniya me mujhse bada idiot koi nahi hoga, I tried to hurt her woh bhi tab jab uski koi mistake bhi nahi thi. Maine Piddi par blindly bharosa karke bahot badi galati ki. Usne toh wahi bataya jo usne dekha par mujhe ek baar confirm karna chahiye tha. I'm so sorry Kiya.'

He then called Piddi for some other work

On the other side, she was continuously trying his call but everytime she called a voice mail played telling 'This line is busy on another call.Plz try again later'

She became furious as she had called him about 50 times but in vain.

Kiya: ye stoneface kisse itni baate kar raha hai. Jab kuch kaam hota hai tabhi isse kisi se baat karni hoti hai.

Saying this she went to sleep. she was tired calling him.
Even he did not notice her calls and after finishing his call went to sleep.

Next day in the school
Kiya saw KD enter the school.She ran towards him. she was panting and also looked worried. Seeing her KD thought what was wrong and as he about to ask her Piddi pulled KD away. They could not talk. All the time he was wondering what happened ?

At last they got some time together.

KD: What happened Kiya? tum subah bahot pareshan lag rahi thi. kya baat hai?

Kiya: mujhe tumse yeh kehna tha ki plz tum kisiko mat batana ki maine tumhari help ki thi

KD: par kyun?😕 Don't you want ki sab tumse respect se baat kare

Kiya: Ha main chati hoon. Par...

KD: par kya?

Kiya: Plz understand agar kisi ko pata chala toh i would be in a big trouble. Meri mom mujhe boarding school me bhej degi and I would be grounded.

KD: Aisa kyun karegi teri mom?

Kiya: because she thinks ki anyadi ki reputation kharab ho jayegi. I don't have a life of my own.(she started crying)

KD: I just don't get this high society fundas. but don't worry. Your secret will remain secret.

saying this KD hugged her.
kiya got a call from her mom

Her mom: Kiya where r u ?,she said angrily

Kiya: mom main school me hoon.

Her mom: Acha tumne mujhse jhoot bola ki tumne KD ki help nahi ki. But ab mujhe sab pata chal gaya hai. Tumhe hamare reputation ka koi khayal nahi aaya.

Kiya: Mom maine kisi ki help nahi ki,she said getting worried, aapko kisne bataya?

Her mom: A boy named KUNAL. He's such a sweet boy. Acha hua usne bata diya warna you would always keep on lying.

Hearing Kunal's name Kiya was shocked and KD got worried hearing her say "Aapko Kunal ne bataya"


to be continued...

Hope u like it. coment on it, suggestions and criticisms are always welcomed.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wohhooo
First one to cmnt..
Awesum update next update kabmilega ???
any demand ??

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