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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: -Mais-

Well, finally you updated! :D i am a bit out of my senses right now so the comment will be a little bleh!

It was a nice chapter. Maybe its my more than usual slow brain but I could not get the Bobby-KD part at all :p or maybe I am on from phone hence my brain is not registering things as they ought to be. Khair, interesting little character this Anya is. Dont kill me but I dunno why she isnt holding my interest now. She seems so...been there, seen that! kind of a sister to me. But its just me! Loved the Ranveer and Samar part, specially the whole English monologue! I swear, you made Samar speak more English in a chapter than he ever will in the show :p Ranveer really is possesive about Panchi, let's see how things will shape up from here. Also, how will the other trio end up with the gang.

Little correction - it should be "beshak" instead of "besharte". Besharte means "on condition", beshak means "doubtless". With besharte, Samar's dialogue translates to "On condition that you are Panchi's friend" and that is not making a lot of sense :p

oh eff! I will just go crawl in the corner.


Thanks for the correction Mais, I blame it on not re-reading it, because the original sentence had started with besharte but I edited it and completely overlooked that word.

Actually you're not supposed to understand the Bobby-KD part completely, not quite yet.

Really sorry that Anya is not holding your interest anymore, maybe she was a little know -it-all here, though she's supposed to be the been there done that character because she is that little voice in each of their conscience here. I hope with the entry of the other trio in the cafe and RV coming across Anya will put her back onto the pedestal.

I made Samar speak that specific part in English because here he was supposed to loose his cool, and we all act different that who we normally are in those moments, so he spoke differently from his usual Urdu.

I knew it was going to be somewhat disappointing, i'm sorry.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
amazing update thanks for the pm amazing and anya still holds my interest n yeah it was not disappointing

it is just that some people have different preferences and loved the way that nawab saab loses his cool and starts talking in english

and is it possible for u to give english translations for what samar says because my hindi.urdu is very weak in reading i can only understand when it is being spoken
Edited by The007Shivani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
edited my comment and thanks for putting the translations up in advance
Edited by The007Shivani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

amazing update thanks for the pm amazing and anya still holds my interest n yeah it was not disappointing


it is just that some people have different preferences and loved the way that nawab saab loses his cool and starts talking in english

and is it possible for u to give english translations for what samar says because my hindi.urdu is very weak in reading i can only understand when it is being spoken


Thanks for the support.

I'll surely do that. I'll just edit the post and add English translations of Samar's dialogues. It'll be up within five minutes.

Thanks.

*edited*

Done. Do have a look. i'll remember to add it along while writing in the next update.
Edited by CoffeeAddict - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Oh, I wasnt supposed to understand? Thats good! Because I swear I read it twice and everything was going above my head and I was scolding myself for being so dim :p i know Samar said it all cuz he lost his cool. I was just pleasantly surprised at the way he did it :p lets see what Anya does. This show is so full of flawed characters that having this perfect know-it-all kinda girl seemed a bit off for me. But its just me! Strictly just me! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: -Mais-

Oh, I wasnt supposed to understand? Thats good! Because I swear I read it twice and everything was going above my head and I was scolding myself for being so dim :p i know Samar said it all cuz he lost his cool. I was just pleasantly surprised at the way he did it :p lets see what Anya does. This show is so full of flawed characters that having this perfect know-it-all kinda girl seemed a bit off for me. But its just me! Strictly just me! :D


Believe me it's those flaws in this show that keeping us stuck to it.

Anya is just the Utopian solution to everything that's flawed in the show. If they were to end the show today, they could use my OS. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
I don't think I have read any chapter of this OS? So 'll reply once I read it:)

Thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
It was very nice. I like the idea of the gang hanging out together. ^_^

Update soon and DO NOT forget to pm me!
I'll be waiting! ^_^
Edited by xKishaxForevahx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
Thank you mohtharma for this update😆
But hey being late is nothing new to me, mere har ek ff ko mein two-three months gap mein update karthi hun...
I always wonder why my readers haven't left😆
Ah! Hum tho mohabbat kar bete hain, Samar Pratap Singh se☺️
I just luurrvved his Urdu bhashan and yeah Mais is right, he aint gonna speak so much English in the show😆
Anya Gujral is being the good sister now, hope she remains so.
I am waiting to see her depiction in the show...
Panchi's fuse is blown I guess...
Ranveer bachu thu tho gaya kaam se...
Where did that KD-Bobby-Piddi part take place and what exactly did KD see in the Ipad...
Anyways sawaalon ke jawaab ke liye hum intezaar karenge mohtharma matlab ki agle update ke liye...
Jaldhi ki jiye!
Yeh tho beshak entertaining tha👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Hey! You updated. I don't mind when you update as long as you don't abandon the story. Loved KD-Piddi convo. The dialogues were so perfect i could actually imagine them. Loved the lecture Anya gave. It was something which i think every Panchi lover on this forum must have wanted to give her. He he he! Eager to read the next part. Want to see what will happen in nonu-moti convo. But update on your own time. I don't mind. Thanks for an awesome update.

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