-TBP FF- Deepest Desire - Ch3 - Page37 Nov12

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ABCDesiGirl93

@ABCDesiGirl93

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#161

:) i liked it! do pm me further!

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basket_101

@basket_101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Heyy!

I would've liked the Character Sketch if I got a pm... but silly me.. I forgot to add the account u mentioned to get pms ☺️

Anyways..

That was a nice prologue!

While I was reading.. and the purse got stolen, I had a feeling that KD might help her.. but then I trashed the thought thinking woh yaha kya karega..

But lo and behold, it was him 😃

Though the way he responded after was hilarious!

Poor mother was left thinking, was it the same guy? 😕 😆

And then the RaHi scene was cute!

I love Panchi's playfulness (=

Nice start!

Eager to read more =D

And have added the other account of your's... so will continue reading for sure 😉 😆

Take care!

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

awesome prologue and cs👏😊

luvd it😃

waiting for d next part😳

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sravya

@rocksravya11

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

woww i really luved u knw i was waiting for ur deepest desire frm a long time...when i read it i felt dat sabar ka phal mita hota hey ...its awesome..i cant wait for d nxt chptr plzz update it soon...

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

awesome update khushi...loved iti loved KD's entry and the attitude he gives to kiya's mother...it was awesome

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chetna

@crazysky

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

the cs n prologue is awesome
loved it

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Supriya

@sups2222

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Okay FINALLYYY...you updated...kitna wait karoagi yaar...but you know what ...i guess it was worth to wait. ...do i need to say i loveddd it...❤️...

Pooor KIYA: Sidelined by her mother and deserving some attention from her...Wanting to see how she will stand up to her mother in future.

HAyeee : KD KD KD... hamare hero shero ne sasuma ka purse lautaya..i thought that she being rich gujral she will want to give some money to KD for giving back the purse hmmm...i think i am knowing the reason KiSha will be together day and night ass well :D

RaHi: they are always cuteee yaar..loved the trick played by moti to get her nonu to go to school.they are bestest of friends knowing each and everything of each others life...looking forward for their friendship and love realization...

and NOW the *character sketch*:
loved it./..not too much mystery but enough to glue us to your ff...looking forward for JJ to enter into Juniour junglee's circle ...Thanks for the PM waiting for the first CHAP ...
Love,
Piya😳